Is This Real?

by BookloverB

Tris, a former Abnegation, still has selflessness in her heart. She does not know how she will fit into the Dauntless crowd, which is filled with many brave risk takers. What will it take for her to fit in? And what happens when she runs into deep trouble?

11. Chapter 11

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Chapter 10

The room was in a frenzy. One minute left until Four will be back. I see a guy and Peter fighting over a bed.

"It's mine, Edward!" Peter shouted. It seems Peter has either a crush on the girl Myra or Molly. He is very eager to get the bed between them.

Peter slapped Edward, and then punched him in the jaw.

Four came in to Edward rubbing his face, and getting ready to get revenge on Peter.

"Hey, you two break it up!" Four separated them. "Peter, you get the floor,"

"But-" Four gave him a glare so frightening, I am surprised Peter didn't have a heart attack.

Peter growled, and shot Edward a look of hatred. Edward put his arm around Myra and smiled in his victory.

"Don't get so cozy, Edward, and wipe that grin off your face. You get the floor too." This time, Edward shot Peter a glare.

First day, and already a rivalry.

"Now, everyone follow me so we could go over how this is all going to work."

We all followed him into who knows where. "You will get ranked. Your rankings will decide your future." There were a bunch of groans.

"Your first stage is fighting. The rest will be announced later. Try not to fail any of the parts of initiation, unless you want to end up factionless."

Factionless? I am stunned. When I got myself into this, I never thought being factionless was even was possible for regular kids like us. I thought by going into Dauntless, I would be avoiding becoming factionless. Well this is ironic. I went to Dauntless not to be factionless, but I have the highest probability here of becoming factionless.

Oh no, I am going to be last. I am going to fail.

I remember all the times walking home from school. I remember passing by the factionless. They were so hungry, and desperate. I felt so much pity for them, wanting nothing but for them to be okay. But there was nothing I could do. They were so weak and miserable, nothing could help. It devastated me.

I remember seeing the horror in their eyes. I remember seeing them shiver. They were all hanging by a tiny string of hope. One step, and they would crumble.

Soon, that will be me.

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