recently i had a sort of craving for a good hinatanaruto fic and i found one that satisfied my craving!(that sounds weird...oh well) the name of it is A Long Waiting by shinenagai. it has a little nejihina in there too. read it! you'll enjoy!...0.o chaptrer 5...(neji hina moment.)

thank you people for reviewing! it really means a lot! after reading the last chapter maybe 7million times and also the review from harvestmoonfan24 i did get some sort of ideas. i must say thank you very,very much to harvestmoonfan24 ! ( aaaaaannnddd...Sango and Kirara fan

i really hope this chapter will come out good!

disclaimer: naruto...why do people want the unreachable? i dont own naruto...

chapter 11, we move on:

Hiashi sat at his usual spot at the table. he was sipping his hot tea and looking out the large window. today is when he would get his information from his spy...neji! Neji walked in and sat at the far end of the table. he quickly gulped down the tea and was waiting for the man across from him to speak.

" so neji, has anything interesting come up? "

'hinata's tea is made better...' neji shifted in his place.

" no, nothing..." neji looked out the rather large window and sighed. 'what exactley are you wanting to happen?' he looked twords hiashi and saw his dissapointed face. ' you really hate your daughter that much?...you want to see her fail...you want to see her suffer...This man's sickning.' neji stood. "may i leave?" hiashi nodded.

neji turned and walked twords the door. before he left the room he said, "youve become sickning uncle...'looking at you disgusts me and the clan'..." neji exited the room. hiashi looked shocked although his face still stern and seriouse. 'looking at you disgusts me and the clan..' the words were familiar. where did he hear this? he replayed this in his head several times. he got it...

mini-mini FLASHBACK:

"hinata!" hiashi stood up and walked twords his daughter. hinata just got hit by neji and was knocked down. this has happened several times durring this fight. this was seen by the clan elders and hiashi (of course).

"whats wrong with you? fight!" the small girl shivered. she didnt like being yelled at. who did?

" i-i-i c-cant...neji is too s-strong..." hinata was hurt. she had been attacked by her cousin and was sitting on the ground being yelled at.

" hmph! you are so weak. to think of you as my daughter...just looking at you disgusts me and the clan..."

END

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its been 5 days now. sasuke had been sleeping in the same bed as hinata for five days. the awkwardness went away on day three. other than that event nothing interesting has been happening. of course fangirls came by once in a while to sexualy harass sasuke. to thier surprise hinata greeted them at the door everytime. she enjoyed the look on their faces when she opened the door. they looked like they were having a heart attack.

knock-knock ring-ring

this was a nice highlight of the day. hinata came out of the kitchen passed a few big rooms, passed through the giant hallway, turned and made a left. walking for another second. shes there!' this house is too big. but its worth it!'

ring-RING-RINGGGGGG...

" im coming!" the person outside quickly stopped ringing the doorbell. hearing a womens voice, they were shocked! hinata opened the door and stared at the young women. one of her arms were dangling at her side and with the other she held a beautifly wrapped present. hinata smiled.

" hi can i help you?" the women, with her eyes wide in complete shock.

"eh?..um...erm..mm..mm..i..ha-...well, i.." hinata laughed on the inside.

'the best one yet. havent heard rambalings before...' she kept a straight face.

" excuse me, is that for sasuke? " hinata pulled the the shiny present out of her grip and waved goodbye.

"thank you" she shut the door and walked with the present in hand. ' although this is amusing. i really dont understand why those stalkers...erm..'girls' like him so much.' she walked back into the kitchen and continued chopping vegetables. she finished and sat at the table admiring the wrapping work of the gift. sasuke walked in.

"who was that?" hinata picked up the gift and tilted her head. she was curiouse. what was in this box? sasuke walked twords the table and sat at the seat next to hinata.

"you want to see what it is?" she nodded.

"open it, i dont care." he leaned back in the chair and waited for her to open it. she tugged the little ribbon and a little box appeared. she opened the box and inside was a very nice and exspensive gold band. ingraved on the inside of the band was,

sasuke...will you marry me?

" what is it?" sasuke was still leaning on the back of the chair, his eyes closed. she didnt answer. he sat in his seat properly and grabbed her hand. he opened her fingers and saw the gold band. he lifted it out of her hands and took a good long look at it. he then turned his head and looked at hinata that was confused and shocked. he got up and walked to the door.

" im going to go train for a while you want to come?"

no response

"what?...you didnt think i would get things like this?" sasuke walked back over to hinata.

" i get this kind of thing all the time. they dont mean anything to me."he leaned in and gave her a peck on the cheek. "i'll be back in a couple of hours." he got the ring and threw it into the trash.

"yeah...yeah." similar things like that have happened nothing critical, she was used to it (the peck on the cheek). hinata finally got up due to the smell of something burning!

"dammit! aww..." she ran to the pan to tend the burning vegetables. sasuke watched through the window. he really did love her.

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a couple hours have passed and hinata was finished with everything. what can she do now? shes been stuck in the compound for a couple of weeks only leaving when food needed to be gathered. 'maybe training was a good idea.' hinata left the compound and went in search for sasuke.

while walking through the long path she felt a familiar chakra. 'not again! please!' she started walking faster. so did neji. jumping branch to branch over hinata. she started running. neji picked up speed too. it was starting to become a pretty good chase. 'oh my gosh! how far did you go sasuke?' hinata was trying to catch her breath after 10 minutes of running. (when running thats like forever! sorry, go on...) this was actually amusing for neji. fallowing her was fun but then she got tired. neji appeared in front of her.

" how have you been doing hinata?" she was about to collapse.her hands placed on her knees for support ' ah, neji you suck!' she looked up at him.

"what do you want now?"

"nothing really..." he started playing with a few strands of hinata's hair. "its about your marrige."

she smacked his hand away. "what about it?" she stood straight.

" you will be wed in a couple days, correct?"

"y-yes...i think so."

he laughs." you think so? well its in exactley three days. i should know it was our day." hinata had a distasteful expression on her face. like she had a mouthfull of something bitter. 'wait..i thought you had a hissy fit when you were going to get married to me and now you try to rape me every so often? i knew you were crazy but multiple personalities?'

" that is the last day you will ever see the hyugas. you will not hear from them talk to them might not even speak to them. that will be the last time. im just telling you. of course you will see me at night. your father is going crazy and it seems the elders have taken notice. they have decided to give the clan a new leader..."

'and? you cant just stop in the middle of a sentance!' hinata started to become anxious.

"...and it will be hanabi." neji said this with great disgust.

" at least shes not as crazy as you and my father! is that all you needed to tell me or are you going to try something?" she backed away.

"aww, hinata you know me too well." he stepped closer to hinata and before he could lay a finger on her his neck was cought.

"what are you trying to do? "sasuke said with a calm but threatnig voice.neji's body was now pinned to the floor his hands crushed by sasuke's knees.

"ahhh! bastard! get off me now!" sasuke smirked.

"after what you did? doing your late night rape plans?" sasuke made his weight go to his knees. he turned to hinata and began to speak.

" i cant believe you havent done anything? i was waiting for you to tell me about this." sasuke made some hand signs then got up.

"your cousin will be paralized for a while. is that ok?" hinata nodded. they started to walk off leaving neji lying on his stomach, arms paralized, face in the dirt. they kept walking ignoring the faint screams of a hyuga left in the dust.

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Naruto was at the ramen stand like usual. debating with people about how the pork ramen was the best. while yelling he noticed everybodys head turn. he swirved in his seat to look the opposite direction.

"HINATA! SASUKE! OVER HERE!" naruto was flailing his arms.

"EAT WITH ME!" sasuke walked faster and hinata grabbed his hand.

"sasuke, why dont we eat there? naruto seems to be calling us." she titlted her head and gave a curiouse look.

how could he say no? "i guess.." they walked to naruto not noticing they were holding hands. (cute)

"we'll eat with you naruto but you have to stop yelling."

"OH OKAY!" sasuke smacked himself. 'why does my best friend have to be an idiot?'

'-sigh- ah, naruto's normal voice is yelling...mmm..'

" hey dad look at that. sasuke has a girlfriend and its hinata!" the ramen stand owner turned and looked.

"aww, yes they're holding hands!" hinata tried to release sasukes hand but his grip tightened. those words said made everyone notice. it alarmed them in knowing the heartthrob was taken. 'ooooh's and 'ahhh's were spread amougst the women including one...?sasuke ignored it but hinata felt a blush come about. i guess old habbits dont die fast.

hinata and sasuke sat beside naruto while waiting for their food. naruto kept ordering food even after his third bowl. it was amazing hinata didnt realize how much this boy scarfed down when he was at the ramen stand. he ate A LOT. naruto was practicly shoving his face into the bowl, getting all the soup on his face. they sat there with disgusted looks on their faces.

"what?" naruto looked over at the two with noodles hanging off his face. hinata reached over and peeled them off.

"thanks hinata!..."

"can you get me some SAKE?" an old man that sat next to naruto said.

" i..uh...?" sudden deja vu? hinata shook it off and began trying to eat her ramen. she felt a loss of appitite after peeling it off narutos face. she felt sasukes hand squeeze hers and looked at him. he lost his apatite too but not for the same reason she did. sakura(bitch) was marching over.

"hinata! what are you doing?" hinata turned around and looked at the pink thing behind her. for some reason she felt sick when looking at sakura.

" what are you talking about? im holding my husband's hand; is there something wrong with that?" sakura was pissed and astonished.

"your kidding?" sakura turned to look at sasuke, he smiled.

"urgh! this is a sick and twisted joke! i hate you all!" she stompped away. naruto got out of his seat and waved.

"sakura you still have me! i will love you forever!"

hinata felt satisfied and so did sasuke.

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ok that wasnt bad. i will now write a new chapter for my other story!

sasuke and hinata...well, hinata announced that they were together. GREAT! the next chapter will have their wedding. is it almost the end of this fic? i dont know! review and tell me if you want me to go on? OH, read 'a long waiting'...i mentioned this before but its really good. you wont regret it! rated M. reviews are good too!