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BrazilianPrincess: Thanks, I dont' deserve your nice review though.. thanks...
TeNnIs-PlAyEr: dude, I haven't updated in like 5 years because I had no ideas.. trust me you hade more ideas than me.. and thanks for the birthday wish!:) also, thanks for sayign my story was awesome!:)
Alice4Ever: I will get them together.. soon.. I'm not for exactly how soon though... sorry,I LOVE your idea about them trying to flirt with other to make the other person jealous... I'll add that in my future chapters, thanks for ALL your ideas you have no clue how much they help... seriously, thanks... also, I know this story will at least go another 8 chapter, you have nothing to worry about, thnak sfo rthe review they keep me going!
Tizzle: (Blush) by the time you read this you probably already finished all of the Darren Shan books, anywho, the movie is coming in Feburay( happy dance), I also read the LOTR trilogy, I loved them! Hobbit was a little slow, but I absolutly loved the rest of them! Also, you're a boy! That's so kewl!! I've never met a boy on fanfic before( beside Simon, one of my BFF).. that's do kewl!! AHH!! Sorry, now I'm like super excited!!AHHH!! Sorry, I really need to kewl it down a notch... breath angie breath... so yeah,also about the Darren Shan, are you reading Cirque Du Freak or Demonata series? Thanks for the review!... TIZZLE FRIZZLE!!XD!!... sorry, toning it down a notch.. also, can you reccomend any songs?
X-Lily-Evans-X: I'm guessin gI'm not such a kewl author not that you know I haven't updated in like ages, if you're still into my story I give you a cyber mountain dew!Lol, you know how to flatter me really easy.. lol, thanks.
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A.Black: get ready this is gonna be one long relpy... first, I can think of a stornger word for love either.. hmm. that's a toughie.. although it does sound better in French... dude, it SO dosen't bug me that you review to each chappy! that awesome! Also, I have no clue why I'm afraid of jellyfish... hmm.. I really have no clue... tear, midnight sun isn't coming out anymore.. stupid people posting it early on the internet...hmm, siruis kissing Lily, that might be a little to off character but hey what do I know?It's called the spy because I thought it was going to be a one-shot, adn as you know Lily spys on James in the first chapter, so yeah nothign kewl like a spy..LALALALALALALAL.. sorry, random, anywho I never shut up either so yeah I must have that dieses to. Also, a beta reader is pretty much an editor who checks for spellign mistakes and suggests ideas, mine is missimalfoy( KEWLEST BETA EVER!!), so yeah, does that help you? I know Lupin wasn't lonely sometimes, but I mean seriously, I would be lonely, but that's just me...YEAH!! YOu NOTICED THE PHONE! NO ONE NOTICES IT!! my hat goes off to you! Dont' worry thegoy I like soesn;t even know my name.. my locker is right next to his.. granted he the Quarterback for varisity team.. so ye probably digs chicks that are cuter than me.. still.. sigh.. tear...I hate orange juice... adn I hate breaking dawn.. I HATE Renesmee..sorry... I totally forgot how since they're in the 70's Avril Lavigne wasn't even born yet, thanks for bringing that to my attention, ur one smart cookie...also,thanks fo rth ebirthday wish! :)
LiliaGryffindor'sHeir376: really? that's so kewl!!that would be kewl about the story structure but you'll have to ask MissiMalfoy is you can or can't.. she's my beta.. also, Lily and James will confront eachother soon! Thanks for the review!.. :)
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IWantAWerewolfToImprintOnMe : I'm sorry I made sure I didn't make the same mistake.. I'm really sorry!! :( also. me too! ( your name)
" So are we ready?" Moony called out.
" YES!" Sirius called.
"YEAH!" Alice shouted.
"Start the engine!" Frank called out.
" Sure..." Lily said.
"Whatever" James muttered.
Today they were going to the lovely, sunny beach. Since Alice hadn't turned seventeen yet they all decided to take a muggle car. Moony was driving, Lily was sitting by him, and James besides her. In the back seat Sirius, Alice, then Frank. Peter couldn't make it..( I know, bummer).
So they set off. Remus turned on the radio. There was techno music playing. Lily rolled her eyes in turned it off.
"It's very annoying" Lily said.
A minute went by, James decided to turn the music back on.
Lily turned it off.
It went back on.
Off.
On.
Off.
On.
OFF.
ON.
OFF!
ON!
"Will you guys cut it out?" Frank complained, "I mean seriously what's wrong with you two?"
"NOTHING!" they both yelled.
The rest off the car ride consisted off Alice and Frank in a poking war between the two of them.
Finally they stopped at the beach. Everyone got out and stretched.
"So what do you want to do first?"
"Let's build sandcastles!" Alice exclaimed.
James smiled, "Okay"
So everyone started to build this huge sandcastle. While they were building the castle Lily saw a side that was slipping down so she reached over to pack it the same time James did. The fingers touched and broke apart faster than the speed of light. They both turned red as a cherry. They finished the sandcastle. After that they decided to sit on towels and rest fro awhile, except for Sirius who went with a couple of other muggle girls to the snack bar.
Lily and James laid their towels next to each other, not on purpose of course. They both lay down. James shut his eyes.
Lily P.O.V
How can he not like me? He liked me for six years! Alice dates everyone! I mean seriously, why'd she have to tell him yes?! He's mine! Just watching him sleep is cute. The way his curly bang falls over his handsome face, to the slight blush on his cheeks. Why didn't I date him when he still liked me? Now I have to watch him date my best friend! Lily saw both Alice and Frank asleep so she leaned closer to him. She lightly put he lips against him. The were soft, and she could smell the hint of peppermint in his mouth... wonderful... yet this would be the closet she would ever get to him. Lily shut her eyes and went into a world where her and James Potter were together.
James' P.O.V
He cracked open his eyes to see Lily asleep. Her lips were parted enough to hear a slight wheezing she did when she was asleep. James knew that because the night she spent in his room he watched her sleep. She looked peaceful when she slept. While he watched her asleep on his bed, he forgot about his back hurting from leaning against the dresser, or his butt hurting from being on the floor that long. So he did what he could at this moment. He leaned forward and kissed her. It was amazing! Her lips were soft and warm. James wanted to kiss her longer, but she might wake up. So he backed out and laid on his back.
Normal P.O.V
After everyone had woken up( or back from the snack bar) they decided to go swimming. Lily tried hard not to notice James' washboard abs, or his tan skin. While James tried not to notice Lily's swimsuit and how beautiful she looked in it. Everyone separated into groups. Frank, Sirius, and Moony water wrestled. While Alice forced James to play beach volleyball with her. Lily decided to go to the deeper water. James had warned before they got into the water to not go deeper the tides picked up and was harder. Lily didn't care, he was with his girlfriend were playing beach volleyball together. Lily started to swim. The water started to become faster and harder. All of the sudden Lily went under, she came up, then went back down under. This time she stayed under. It was like the water was fighting her. Lily started to fell light headed, she was running out of oxygen! She couldn't see anything anymore, it was the end for her. then she felt something grab around her arm, but she lost all her senses.
Lily opened her eyes, to find James leaning above her on the sand. Along with everyone else. James was panting. His eyes were different, they were hard yet almost crying at the came time.
"Lily!"
Before Lily could reply James wrapped his arms around her.
Lily didn't know what came over her, she started the cry. Why was it every time she was in danger James was there?
James started the rock her back and forth.
"Shh.. it's okay. You're alright.. shh"
"James.. I'm sorry"
"Shh.. Lily don't scare me like that again..."
"James" Lily was sobbing now.
"It's okay" James was holding her head ageist his chest.
After that scare they decided that they should go collect seashells. Lily picked Lupin. James picked Alice, Sirius was with a random girl that he had just met that day, and Franks was sitting under the umbrella.. he was sunburnt. Sirius suggesting having a contest to see who could collect that most seashells.
Lily and Lupin started looking. The read hair girl picked up a seashell, only to find it was a crab! Lily sat it down quick. Moony started to chuckle.
"What?"
"Most girls would scream if that happened"
"Are you implying that I'm not a girl?"
"No, it's just that-"
"AHHHH!! REMUS HELP ME!! AHHHH!!" Lily started screaming.
"Lily what the heck are you doing?" Remus half laughing, half asking.
"I'm acting like a girl, and your suppose to be the macho man"
"Got it"
" Remmy help me!" Lily started screaming jumping in his arms.
" What is the matter dear Lily?" Remus said puffing out his chest.
"I SAW A CRAB!"
"NO!!" Remus screamed running away with Lily in his arms. They were both laughing their heads off. Little did they know
less than 50 yards away there was a black hair boy watching them, his heart breaking into pieces after every second. Seeing the girl he liked in the arms of another boy, it was killing him. Lily never acted girly; yet she ran into Remus arms... she must like him that much he thought.
On the way back Alice told the story about how James swam faster than anything she had ever seen to save her. Sirius, Frank, and Moony back it up too. James just blushed. They went to Dairy Queen and Frank and Alice split a hot fudge Sunday. That's when Moony appartated home. Frank offered to take Alice home, and Alice said. When they were walking away, Frank and Alice were holding hands. Lily looked over at James. His eyes were sad.
"I'm sorry James"
"About what?"
"You not getting the girl of your dreams"
"It's okay, as long as she's happy"
Sirius, Lily, and James took the car and headed home. Next week school started! Tomorrow they would get the school supply and prefect list.
I'm sorry.. you have noc lue how busy I've been seriously... I only get ( if lucky) 5 hours sleep at night.. I'm really sorry!! I don't deserve your reviews... :(... I promise my next chappy wil be a lot longer...