Hey guys, I'm back with an early update! I really enjoyed reading the reviews and your guys thoughts on the story.
Anyways Shout out to somerandom because I used her idea once more but she seem to be thinking the same thing I was thinking. Haha,
To respond to one review: I'm sorry I don't know how the 'Being born time range to be biological siblings' but you know it's whatever, just a story.
Well I'm rambling guys let's get to the story you guys so desperately want to read.
Tris POV
"Oh okay? What is it?" I ask while crossing my legs, he looks anywhere but my eyes. He opens the door and looks down the hall, after he does his little security check he close the door and locks it.
"Four?" I say he looks at me with pleading eyes.
"Tris, what I'm about to tell you is something I never told anyone. Can I trust you Tris?" He says while holding both my hands and I nod. He let's go of my hands and turns around, he starts to pull up his shirt and instantly I start to freak out.
"Whoa, Four! Hold up I'm not sure if I ready for this because-" He starts to laugh and I get a confused look on my face.
"Tris, I'm not going to do that... I just need to show you something." With that he pulls up his shirt and at first I'm confused because all I see is his tattoos. I open my mouth to ask what I'm suppose to look for till I stand up and get a closer look at his back, he has scars all over his back and sides. Some are black which are old and some are a dull red which show they're fresh. I lightly rub my fingers on the scars.
"Who did this to you?" I asked near tears but I blink them away, he puts his shirt back on and turns to face me.
"My so-called father Marcus." He spits out the name like it was poison and he sits on the bed and I sit with him.
"When I was six, everything was normal until my mother Evelyn died from giving birth to my little sister. The baby didn't make it ether and something inside him just snapped, he would come home drunk and yell at me, It started off with a simple slap then he start using a leather belt to whip me till he was tired or until I passed out. Then he would throw me into a storage closet which wasn't that big and lock me in there. Sometimes a night or even a whole week." He says and now I'm at full tears, I wipe them away and Four turns to me.
"Tris, promise you won't look at me like a kick puppy or something." He says and I stand in front of him.
"Four-"
"Don't call me that."
"What should I call you then?"
"...Tobias, but only call me that when it just us." He says and I nod
"Well Tobias, you're not a kicked puppy in fact you're one of the bravest person I know." I say and he smirks, damn he has a sexy smirk.
"Tobias there something I have to tell you." I say and he nods
"Two months before I moved, I was attacked," I start to shake at the memory of being attacked and Fo-Tobias pulls me close and now I sit in his lap while leaning my head into his chest. He lightly rubs my back as I continued.
"It was these two bullies named Peter and Drew and the worst part about it was there was a third guy named Al and he was my best friend, how could he do something or even help do something to me. Peter started to beat me and ripped off my cloths. He almost rapped me until this police officer came by and his name was Amar." At this point I was streaming tears and Fo-TOBIAS ugh, was holding me close stroking my back.
"Listen Tris, I'm not going to say that everything is going to be okay because obviously it's not because your still upset by it but I am going to say that you have me and I will not let anything like that happened to you."
I look into Tobias, NAILED IT FINALLY!, eyes and those sky blue eyes are swallowing me whole. Without warning I crash my lips with his and he is tense at first but soon starts to kiss me harder. I start to straddle him and wrap my arms around his neck while he holds my sides. We stay like this for a while until I nibble the bottom of his lip begging for entrance. He happily obliges and our tongues battle for dominance and he won. Our tongue explore each other mouth and when we broke for air his lip never left my body. He kissed my chin down to my neck, he starts to nibble at my neck and a moan slips from my mouth and I feel him smile. He pulls away and looks into my eyes.
"So, what does this mean Tobias?" I say and he holds my hand while he locks our fingers together.
"Tris, will you be my girlfriend?" Tobias just asked me to be his girlfriend.
"Um..."
Alrighty guys that is it for the morning update I be sure to post again later tonight or when I wake up from this nap... ether way you guys are still going to get an update before the day is over.
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