Taka: Hey everyone. Sorry it took so long to get this chapter out, SOMEONE ::glares at Maki:: lost the chapter.
Maki: I didn't lose it! I just permanently misplaced it! But, as you can see, I rewrote it!
Other Voice: Permanently misplacing and losing some thing are the same bloody thing ding-bat!
Maki: ::punches other voice:: Well no one asked you! DIE!!!
Taka: Here's chapter 11 enjoy ::stops Maki from killing Other Voice::oh and one last note, we got our first flame :D from Princess Kurumi Inu's Sister:
I didn't like the first part! Inuyasha is mostly right all the time and why'd you just let him sit there and take that? shippo is so weak and annoying! How in the world are they gone trust Naraku's minion more then theey trust Inuyasha! Thats sad! Inuyasha doesn't need to take that! And he shouldn't take that!! It makes me so mad that Inuyasha's so caled friends are taking up for someone that just meet then Inuyasha!! Thats sad and pathetic!
Taka: Maybe she's speaking for all of you, but who knows right? Also, to PKIS, the first part was just a quick fill in of the previous events. The real story began in chapter 10.
Recap:This time everyone but Kagome and Inuyasha was laughing. Then there was an angry shriek of 'PERVERT' and the oh-so-familiar sound of two monks being thumped.
"Erm... I'd better go give Hiroka some good advice on dealing with monks," Sango speculated before grabbing Miroku's ear, ' And you're going to teach your sons a lesson about manners towards females! Is that clear?"
Sango spoke the last bit so menicingly that Miroku just nodded meekly and followed along.
"Kya! Taka get off, your too heavy!" Maki complained as her triplet clung to her back.
"No! I want a piggyback an' I'm gonna get one, whether you like it or not!" Taka shot back in her usual stubborn tone, " Or do you want me to tell Shidobu who hid his sword?"
"No, nonononononononono!" Maki spat while she grabbed her sister's legs so she wouldn't fall off.
The summer sunshine hovered overhead the two demon girls, warming thier heads, and giving Taka a sunburn. No other demons were scented on the solf breeze. It was peaceful, and quiet...too quiet. But this was soon to change whether the girls liked it or not.
"Shippou...Shippou....SHIPPOU!" Kohaku yelled at the zoned out kitsune walking beside him.
"Huh? Wha'?" Shippou confusingly said, sounding extremely mixed up and out of place. The next thing he saw was his faithful companion's hand, right in his face.
"What the hell was that for!" he yelled at Kohaku angrily, " and what kind of man-slap was that anyways? Leave that for the women Kohaku."
By now the two boys had stopped and were glaring at each other in tensionous silence. Then, spontaniously, they burst out laughing.
"C'mon now, the sun is starting to set and we should be at the village by now, " Kohaku mentioned, trying to hide the fact that he was anxious to see Sango and Kirara's kittens. After all he hadn't seen them in years and it was time for a visit.
(A/N: Kohaku has been protecting a village with Shippou, and questing since he was free)
The two walked in silence, not knoiwng what was to meet them down the road.
Maki and Taka broke out into a sprint, and Maki, who was slightly faster, ran ahe
ad of her sister. A mob (Maki/N: I luv dis word!) of angry village males chased behing them, torches lit and pitchforks raised, poised to strike at any moment. These villagers were some of the few in Kaede's village who truly disliked demons and did not fear them, though they respected the Inu gumi. Little did they not know, however, who was the mother of these two girls.
Suddenly, Taka's geta sandal caught underneath a rock, sending her flying on trip she was sure to dislike. Out of self-preservation instincts, she grabbed for Maki's kimono sleeve, and in succeeding, causing both sisters to fall to the ground. (A/N: Ever heard the saying: "If I'm going down I'm taking you with me"?)
The fall cause Maki's ankle to twist in a way ankles shouldn't and grumbling she stated, "Oh great, now we're going to get our valuable tails kicked from here to Kyushu!"
The villagers formed a circle around the two sister and were poised to strike when a loud cry of 'FOX FIRE' was heard, then, out of nowhere, blue flames appeared sending the attackers flying backwards. Following this was the metalic sound of chains, as the end of one struck out and sent a remaining attacker flying, the chain attached to his ankle.
Any remaining villagers left standing backed quickly away from the two gilrls. Taka glanced behind her, seeing two teenaged boys, around the age of seventeen. One had orange hair, pulled up in a high pony; he was a kitsune. The other had a high pony too, except his hair was black.
The boy with the orange hair, Shippou, ran up to the girls, and extended a hand towards Taka.
"We didn't need your help! We had everything under control," Taka stated in her usual stubborn tone, refusing Shippou's hand and standing up.
Kohaku had gone to reason with the villagers leaving Shippou alone with the two girls. maki tried to stand on her now swollen ankle, causing her to fall to her knees, wincing in pain.
"Need some help?" Shippou said, once again outstreching his hand, this time towards Maki. She accepted it and allowed Shippou to raise her to her feet. There was an akward silence as the two looked into each other's eyes. Shippou say beautiful, tranquil, yet gaurded blue eyes while Maki saw stunning emerald green.
"Okay, MAGIC MOMENT OVER!" Taka yelled, breaking the silence as she took her sister by the hand and soon had her lifted on her back, " Let's go Maki!"
"But I-" Maki started, looking behind at Shippou.
"No!" Taka snapped walking towards the goshinboku tree and where her mother was, "We leave now!"
Maki peered over her shoulder again, , her eyes fixed on Shippou, and so Taka would see her, mouthed a simple 'thank you'.
Maki: Did ya like it? hehehe I knew you would..after all I wrote this one ALL BY MYSELF! ::grins proudly::
Taka: Yes Makers, we all love it, and we would have loved it sooner if you hadn't lost it and then had to re-do it!
Maki: Your not gonna let me forget that are you?
Taka: Nope
Other Voice: Lets move along now! We want 10 reviews within the next 3 chapters...not 5, not 7, 10!
Taka: ::cracks whip:: you heard 'im 10!
Kitty: ::spontaniously pops up:: I AM NOT A RETARD!
Everyone: 0.0 WTF?
Taka: Je Na
Maki: Feh! Die!
