Ouch! That was pretty nasty!
The reason why I am updating on the same day, is no- I'm not crazy, I realized that heaps of people are probably pretty confused and now, the story is pretty trashed up. I wasn't planning to tell this, but the people are here for a REASON.
They're gonna mess everything up..
I know, I know. I might be losing it, but I'm far from senile. It's what you get when you write too many fanfics in one day.
Including that the fanfics all have different storylines.
Oh well, I might as well start writing.
Thanks for the brutally honest reviews :)
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Kel sighed. "He wants to kill you!" She told Alanna once they were outside.
"Alex is my friend!" Alanna said, her voice deathly quiet.
"Alanna-"
"I don't want to talk about it." Alanna turned away. Biting her cheek.
Kel bit back a retort. "I understand."
"No you don't!" Alanna bolted up. "Why can't you just go away?"
"What do you mean?" Kel noticed uncomfortably that the rest of her friends had bolted up and now where regarding her with strange looks.
"You're ruining EVERYTHING!" Alanna blurted out. "You're stealing away all my friends, INCLUDING Jon, you can see he's smitten by you! You are just so."
"What on earth is going on?" Cleon asked, his voice was quiet.
"Alanna- you have it totally wrong!"
"Trust me. I can tell when Jon is smitten. I'm NOT SO DUMB!" Alanna stormed out.
"You- and KING JONATHAN." Daine said. "Look here, Kel. You're going back. I'm going to make sure you go back. Follow me."
~
Alanna didn't know where she could run to, but it hurt too much. She felt betrayed.
She had realized long ago that Jon had loved Kel, but the thought of being replaced after all Jon had said to her.
It hurt.
Worse of all, she could feel things shifting. What Kel had done could destroy the whole of Tortall. Ever since Kel had come, she had felt more.
She could always hear grinding and humming, as if their Realm was changing, redirecting its path.
She didn't want to hurt Jon in anyway, and she felt that Kel wouldn't deliberately hurt anybody any more than she would, but Kel was more dangerous that she could ever even imagine. She had to go back.
Purposefully, she rose. She had to ride to George immediately, to send a very urgent letter to Thom.
~
Daine dragged Kel out of the palace and to the Temple District.
"Where are we going?" Kel asked, confused.
"To see my parents."
"Your PARENTS?" Kel asked. "You have parents?"
"Everyone has parents." Daine said impatiently, "I just don't see them as often."
"I thought your parents died."
Daine bit her lip. "I guess you could say that."
The others were following from behind, slightly panting.
"For Mithro's sake, I thought Wyldon trained you to face up more difficult challenges without tiring!" Numair muttered, he didn't have a high tolerance for the page's training master.
"We specialise in arms, not long distance running!" Panted Owen.
"We're there, so stop complaining." Daine said, walking into a temple.
The others fell silent as they walked in.
"What's this?" Neal picked up a bow, with a few fake golden arrows.
"They're offerings for a god, you idiot." Kel chided. "This is the god Weiryn's temple isn't it?" Daine nodded. "My father."
"Your father is a GOD." Cleon said, letting the full weight of the words seep in.
"Yes, and her mother is a GOD-dess, does that matter?" Numair said coldly, putting an arm around Daine protectively.
"No it doesn't." Kel said hastily, "why are you taking us here?"
"To talk to them." Daine murmured.
Kel gazed at the statue of Weiryn, then at Daine as she kneeled at the foot of the statue.
Daine's lips were moving, but Kel couldn't hear a single word she said, but Kel guessed that she was praying for him to come visit, because a moment later- Weiryn appeared, along with a lady clothed in green.
"They are furious with her, but she's the Great Mother Goddess, she's convinced them that it is for the best." The lady's eyes flashed, Kel could see her mouth quirk through the sheer green veil.
"All through Tortall is chaos. Uusoae must be enjoying this." Weiryn muttered, "we tried to convince them, but we are but minor gods."
The lady hugged Daine. "Sweetling, we tried."
"I know, Ma." Daine tried to smile, but failed.
Taking out a green mirror, she showed it to them. "This is your time. It is in utter chaos, Slaughter, Malady and Starvation (is it starvation? Realm of the Gods is under my bed, and I can't be stuffed to get it) have been let out just now, it hasn't even been 10 years!"
"The Three Sorrows." Neal made a sign against evil on his chest.
"You must go back to your time." The lady's eyes blazed with so much fire that it hurt.
"How?" Daine wanted to know. "The Gods won't help us. the dragons?"
"I don't think Diamondflame would help us out this time, it has nothing to do with them." Numair reminded her.
"I think Alanna of Trebond has something that might help. Her brother, to be exact." The lady said. "There should be a spell for changing times in a scribe somewhere. Find it, quickly."
Daine nodded. "We will, Ma. Promise."
"You had to get in a mess again." Weiryn said ruefully.
Daine's parents hugged her, then disappeared.
"Alanna's brother? Alanna had a brother?" Kel demanded.
"Thom. I think she named one of her children after him." Neal said thoughtfully.
Kel sighed, sagging against the temple walls. "We have to find Alanna now."
~
I know, I know.
This story is turning seriously sucky. I hope this chapter was tiny bit better :):)
Thanks, and if it truly sucks, please review.
Wev.
The reason why I am updating on the same day, is no- I'm not crazy, I realized that heaps of people are probably pretty confused and now, the story is pretty trashed up. I wasn't planning to tell this, but the people are here for a REASON.
They're gonna mess everything up..
I know, I know. I might be losing it, but I'm far from senile. It's what you get when you write too many fanfics in one day.
Including that the fanfics all have different storylines.
Oh well, I might as well start writing.
Thanks for the brutally honest reviews :)
~
Kel sighed. "He wants to kill you!" She told Alanna once they were outside.
"Alex is my friend!" Alanna said, her voice deathly quiet.
"Alanna-"
"I don't want to talk about it." Alanna turned away. Biting her cheek.
Kel bit back a retort. "I understand."
"No you don't!" Alanna bolted up. "Why can't you just go away?"
"What do you mean?" Kel noticed uncomfortably that the rest of her friends had bolted up and now where regarding her with strange looks.
"You're ruining EVERYTHING!" Alanna blurted out. "You're stealing away all my friends, INCLUDING Jon, you can see he's smitten by you! You are just so."
"What on earth is going on?" Cleon asked, his voice was quiet.
"Alanna- you have it totally wrong!"
"Trust me. I can tell when Jon is smitten. I'm NOT SO DUMB!" Alanna stormed out.
"You- and KING JONATHAN." Daine said. "Look here, Kel. You're going back. I'm going to make sure you go back. Follow me."
~
Alanna didn't know where she could run to, but it hurt too much. She felt betrayed.
She had realized long ago that Jon had loved Kel, but the thought of being replaced after all Jon had said to her.
It hurt.
Worse of all, she could feel things shifting. What Kel had done could destroy the whole of Tortall. Ever since Kel had come, she had felt more.
She could always hear grinding and humming, as if their Realm was changing, redirecting its path.
She didn't want to hurt Jon in anyway, and she felt that Kel wouldn't deliberately hurt anybody any more than she would, but Kel was more dangerous that she could ever even imagine. She had to go back.
Purposefully, she rose. She had to ride to George immediately, to send a very urgent letter to Thom.
~
Daine dragged Kel out of the palace and to the Temple District.
"Where are we going?" Kel asked, confused.
"To see my parents."
"Your PARENTS?" Kel asked. "You have parents?"
"Everyone has parents." Daine said impatiently, "I just don't see them as often."
"I thought your parents died."
Daine bit her lip. "I guess you could say that."
The others were following from behind, slightly panting.
"For Mithro's sake, I thought Wyldon trained you to face up more difficult challenges without tiring!" Numair muttered, he didn't have a high tolerance for the page's training master.
"We specialise in arms, not long distance running!" Panted Owen.
"We're there, so stop complaining." Daine said, walking into a temple.
The others fell silent as they walked in.
"What's this?" Neal picked up a bow, with a few fake golden arrows.
"They're offerings for a god, you idiot." Kel chided. "This is the god Weiryn's temple isn't it?" Daine nodded. "My father."
"Your father is a GOD." Cleon said, letting the full weight of the words seep in.
"Yes, and her mother is a GOD-dess, does that matter?" Numair said coldly, putting an arm around Daine protectively.
"No it doesn't." Kel said hastily, "why are you taking us here?"
"To talk to them." Daine murmured.
Kel gazed at the statue of Weiryn, then at Daine as she kneeled at the foot of the statue.
Daine's lips were moving, but Kel couldn't hear a single word she said, but Kel guessed that she was praying for him to come visit, because a moment later- Weiryn appeared, along with a lady clothed in green.
"They are furious with her, but she's the Great Mother Goddess, she's convinced them that it is for the best." The lady's eyes flashed, Kel could see her mouth quirk through the sheer green veil.
"All through Tortall is chaos. Uusoae must be enjoying this." Weiryn muttered, "we tried to convince them, but we are but minor gods."
The lady hugged Daine. "Sweetling, we tried."
"I know, Ma." Daine tried to smile, but failed.
Taking out a green mirror, she showed it to them. "This is your time. It is in utter chaos, Slaughter, Malady and Starvation (is it starvation? Realm of the Gods is under my bed, and I can't be stuffed to get it) have been let out just now, it hasn't even been 10 years!"
"The Three Sorrows." Neal made a sign against evil on his chest.
"You must go back to your time." The lady's eyes blazed with so much fire that it hurt.
"How?" Daine wanted to know. "The Gods won't help us. the dragons?"
"I don't think Diamondflame would help us out this time, it has nothing to do with them." Numair reminded her.
"I think Alanna of Trebond has something that might help. Her brother, to be exact." The lady said. "There should be a spell for changing times in a scribe somewhere. Find it, quickly."
Daine nodded. "We will, Ma. Promise."
"You had to get in a mess again." Weiryn said ruefully.
Daine's parents hugged her, then disappeared.
"Alanna's brother? Alanna had a brother?" Kel demanded.
"Thom. I think she named one of her children after him." Neal said thoughtfully.
Kel sighed, sagging against the temple walls. "We have to find Alanna now."
~
I know, I know.
This story is turning seriously sucky. I hope this chapter was tiny bit better :):)
Thanks, and if it truly sucks, please review.
Wev.