My Little Pony: Raveon's Cutie Mark Mystery

by Carven Ridge

The Cutie Mark Crusaders ask Raveon how he got his cutie mark, but he doesn't know himself. So he goes around asking his family, friends, and the Mane 6 how they got their cutie marks.

11. Chapter 11

Chapter 11: The Final Chapter

Princess Celestia finally tells Raveon the truth about his cutie mark.

Princess Celestia: "May I?"

Raveon: "Beg your pardon?"

Princess Celestia used her horn to touch Raveon's. She tapped into Raveon's subconscious and looked at his memories. She looked at the one where he was a 7 year old boy after he and his family had move to a new town. Then she got out of his head.

Princess Celestia: "So why don't you tell the time you first moved to a new town with your family."

Raveon: "Well it all started back in our old trailer back in Mobile Town. My dad got a new job in the city called Marvel Creek. When I was little, Paige, Tory, and I didn't want to move away from our friends but it was already settled."

Young Raveon: "I wanna go back home."

Raven: "Raveon this is our new home. And I'm pretty sure you'll make lots of new friends."

Young Raveon: "I don't wanna make new friends."

Raveon: "I just couldn't stand being away from my friends. So I just read some of my books. That's when Mom enrolled Paige and me into an elementary school and Tory into a preschool. That's when it got much worse."

Bully #1: (slams a tray in Young Raveon's face) (sarcastic) "Oops! Sorry!" (laughing)

Young Raveon: "Why you freaking do that?!" (eyes angrily glowing green pushed him back)

Principal: "Mr. Brooks and Mr. James! Separate!"

Raveon: "Princess when I was a little boy, I couldn't control my telekinetic powers. But luckily the principal stopped us. Because if she hadn't have come, I would've did something I would've regret."

Principal: "Go Mr. Brooks."

Young Raveon: "I HATE THIS SCHOOL!"

Raveon: "To keep my mind off of what happened, I just kept reading about math, science, quantum physics, and literature. I may have been in the 2nd grade, but I read years above my grade level like 10th to 12th grade level."

Princess Celestia: (chuckles) "You are just like Princess Twilight."

Raveon: "Yeah. That reading paid off because my dad signed me up for a couple extracurricular activities like the spelling bee and the scholastic decathlon and I was only 7 years old. Those kinds of activities were for 15 to 17 year olds. I told my dad I was nervous being in front of people."

Young Raveon: "Dad I'm scared. All those people. What if I freeze up or something?"

CJ Brooks: "Hey, you are a Brooks. Never give up. It's in your blood. You can do this kiddo. You can shine as bright as a star if you want to. You like stars don't you son?"

Young Raveon: "Yes."

CJ: "Well go ahead. Shine like a star."

Judge #1: "Raveon, spell ambidextrous."

Young Raveon: (looks at the crowd) "U-uh…"

Judge #1: "Ambidextrous."

Young Raveon: (looks at CJ) "Ambidextrous. A-M-B-I-D-E-X-T-R-O-U-S. Ambidextrous?"

Judge #1: "That is correct!"

Young Raveon: "Thank goodness."

Raveon: "Well I won the spelling bee contest. I had a trophy and a blue ribbon. Then a couple hours past, it was time for the Scholastic Decathlon. I was up against a 12th grader from West Central."

Judge #1: "Mr. Brooks, find all sides of a right triangle whose perimeter is equal to 60 cm and its area is equal to 150 square cm. Tell me your answer.

Raveon: "Of course that problem was easy. I didn't even have to write it down."

Young Raveon: "x + y + H = 60 : perimeter , x, y and H be the two legs and the hypotenuse of the right triangle."

Judge #1: "That is correct!"

Young Raveon: "Or x + y = 60 - H : express x + y using the first equation and use the second equation to find xy = 300 and substitute in equation 5."

Judge # 1: "Uh…that's correct! Well done Rave-"

Young Raveon: "Or (60 - H)2 - 600 = H2-"

Judge #1: "Ok kid now you're just showing off."

Raveon: "I guess my smartness took it too far." (chuckles)

Princess Celestia: (chuckles) "It has."

Raveon: "It was the final round and the 12th grader was sweating. He never would've thought that being beaten by a 7 year old would be humiliating."

Judge #1: "We are down to the last question. Whoever gets this right wins. Lawrence what is the square root of 5,462?"

Lawrence: "Uh…70.12987?"

Judge #1: "Ooh that is the wrong answer. Mr. Brooks it's up to you now."

Young Raveon: The square root of 5,462 is 73.9053448676075."

Judge #1: "He is correct! Congratulations Mr. Brooks! You are our winner!"

Raveon: "The judge said for a 7 year old boy I have highest I.Q. in Marvel Creek. Being smart is like my thing my passion. Maybe that should be my cutie mark story."

Princess Celestia: (chuckles) "Consider it done. From looking at your memories Raveon, you have rare abilities. And your mentor seemed to have helped you have self-control over them. Maybe if you stay here a while longer, Twilight and I can help unlock more of your powers."

Raveon: "What are you saying Princess Celestia?"

Princess Celestia: "Raveon Cashawn Brooks, how would you like to be me and Twilight's star student?"

Raveon: "Well yeah I would like that! Thank you Princess!"

Princess Celestia: "Excellent I will report this to Twilight at once. Have a good night Raveon."

Raveon: "Good night Princess! (teleports upstairs) "Spike wake up!"

Spike: "WHAT?! What happened?"

Raveon: "Looks like you got yourself a roommate."

Spike: "ARE YOU SERIOUS?! You get to stay longer?"

Raveon: "Yep."

Spike: "AWESOME!"

Raveon told Spike his new cutie mark story. He also told him that he was going to be Celestia and Twilight's star student. The new roommates fist-bump each other and got ready for bed. Raveon was sound asleep dreaming about his next adventures.

The End

Next Adventure: My Little Pony: A Trip Around Equestria