Hey everybody, I got an anonymous review on this story today from somebody who apparently takes this fandom very seriously. "...this story doesn't make any sense. Why did Kaoru run away? The twins' bond runs too deep for it to be plauble that, after one little slap - not to mention the fact that Kaoru would've been able to feel Hikaru's emotions when he'd hit him - Kaoru wouldbreak ties with him entirely. This is all a bit silly."
Anyways, I'd like to point out: 1. I wrote this story when I was twelve, so it probably doesn't make sense. 2. I wasn't (and still am not) convinced that they really had this undying, deep connection to eachother considering in the show Hikaru didn't even realize when Kaoru was upset about Haruhi. 3. "Feel his emotions". Darling, I was twelve, I barely had any emotions myself. And last but not least, 4. I wasn't trying to be emotional and deep and touching really, I made this for fun.
And let's be real, this story is, as they said, a bit silly. But I made it entirely for my enjoyment and simply because I loved writing.
So ta-da! Just wanted to make myself clear since I couldn't reply to the lovely anon.