Plus one makes three? (previously The Lord Marshall's New Pet)

by ShadowedSkye

Vaako finds himself craving not only the new Lord Marshalls approval but also his attention. Once he gets it, though, he doesn't know what to do with it! Luckily, Riddick's more than happy to play a little game with him until he figures it out.

11. Chapter 11

Hey everyone. So... the reason I haven't updated this story in ages (and yes, I AM aware it's been almost a year and a half) is that I can't find any sort of passion for the story anymore. As I was writing it sort of took on a life of its own and i really don't like the direction I ended up taking it.

So, my plan now is to try and start over. basically write it differently and, hopefully, end up with a story I actually want to write. That being said I want the opinion of anybody who still cares... If you guys are really liking this version, let me know. at the very least I can post the remaining chapter I have written.

For those of you who might be interested in a new version, check out the first few chapters of the new (hopefully improved?) version here: s/12749871/1/The-Lord-Marshall-s-New-Pet

Please review and let me know!