i like the story plz plz update soon
Great job! I can't wait to see what Harry has to do. Update soon.
I'm interested in the story, but the grammar and spelling mistakes make it hard to read honestly. Other than that it has promise. Good luck in the future.
This was a pretty good chapter, a tad hard to read at times but I managed. Hope you can update soon!
love it
I really like this story, let me know when theres more to come :) xxEmily, x-Whispers-x
I'll reply that in bulk. Thanks guys about the grammar and spellings…well I have a tad bit of a problem long story don't ask. I'll try and rectify what I can but if you have any questions clear them up with me otherwise thanks. Seriously I'm surprised no one is bombarding me with questions on the real identity of Amelia the wind-rider. But one thing trust me she would really be true to her name in the latter chapters.
Have fun.
Krishi
P.S just a question – how do you get an alert set if you want to know a chapter is added in any story?
"She's got a fever Draco please keep your voice down. Now what happened to your father?" Narcissa asked looking at him, just as fate would have it Severus who had not heard Draco waked in looking at a book saying, "Narcissa love you think we…Draco?" he looked up to find the teenager who was his god son. Draco looked at one from the other quietly as they looked down guiltily.
"How long?" he asked simply, they looked at each other guiltily he repeated the question, "How long have you been with Severus behind Luscious's back mom?"
"Draco…son please hear me out." Narcissa started but right then Hermione gave a low groan of pain. Draco gave the sight a look but then turned back to his mother who finally decided to explain, "I'm sorry but since after you were a year old. We never had a good relationship…he was married to me because I was a pure blood and I married him because he was rich. A mere marriage of comfort to keep our families out of the way, I conceived you after the first night and well. That was the only time we ever shared a bed three weeks after the ceremony and freedom from physical bondage your father cheated on me with a local whore. Our relationship-ended right they're with me never saying a word and him continuing his littlie expeditions with women. Enjoying them any time he wanted but for the world we put up a show of the happily married couple. We stayed together for you son and only for you…he sneaked away at nights and I went to the secret bedroom for my self in the beginning. After you were nearing a year I started researching and working on various potions ingredients." He nodded indicating he knew of his mother's research, "Your father was busy working around with the ministry and his friends when I started getting closer to Severus. First we worked together in various projects together slowly one thing led to another and we ended up like we are now. Draco please don't mistake me but I love you a lot so does your father it was just we were not made for each other. You are the best and only thing that happened to both of us – the reason we are keeping this marriage intact even if it's only by name. My love for Severus would never come in the way between the two of us."
"Does he know? Does father know about this mother?" he demanded, quietly he looked at the two of them as they guiltily watched the floor, "So this has been quiet an arrangement he lives his own life. You live your own life but for the outside world and me you are together and happily married? Is this it or are there any more details I should know? Are there…"
Severus decided it's time to shut him up so snapped, "Draco I think its enough. I am the only one your mother is seeing and that is due to love she is not a whore."
"I was wondering if you really love me or do you love me because I'm your son. I will see you latter." He said and walked out towards the garden, his favourite place to think. The thoughts ran through him like water from a spring, I was nothing but a mistake. Some one to carry the line and follow the dark lord one's he comes back. Just a child for the sake of it…no one wants me…I'm not loved nor will I ever know how if feels to be loved. Flashes swept across his mind…the dark lord who was the reincarnation of hatred holding his daughter's hand and demanding why she was late. The way Hermione served her father more food in the breakfast table and refusing to take no for an answer. The smile on Severus face when he talks to her or plays with her, no one ever smiled at him like that. Not even his mother, tears fell freely – he was a mistake. A mistake no one wanted.
Odder of the Phoenix (H.Q) - Harry and Ginny's Room
Harry was tucking in his blue polo shirt into his light blue jeans looked up to find Ginny step out of the bath in a knee length bath robe and a white towel around her head. She smiled at Harry and walked up to the mirror taking of her towel and gently drying her hair, in the possess splashed a few drops on Harry. He smiled and wiped them of his face as she calmly ran a comb over her hair setting it neatly and partly drying it at the same time. Then she sat down and applied light make up as Harry watched the whole act…it was never much. Getting up she walked over to the closet and opened to decide what to wear today, Harry walked up behind her and placed his hands around her waist. She leaned into him looking carefully has Harry's nose explored the smell of her hair. Strawberry….she never used magical ones, deodorant was also muggle, Sport Light. Again something that triggered of wonderful thoughts in him, he watched as she selected a white short skirt with a white zip on top. Pushing Harry away she closed the closet door to change much to his disappointment but only for a few minutes. She came out wearing light white heals with it and some silver jewellery. "Wow Ginny you look gorgeous…"
"Thanks Harry." She rewarded him with a light peck on his lips when the door was knocked on sharply. "Who could that be? Any order member simply barges in…" she mused as Harry went to open the door that he had unlocked when Ginny was changing. His eyes grew wide with surprise and a smile spread across his lips.
"Mia? Good morning…I thought my classes would be in the evenings?" he moved letting her in but she stopped to hug him.
"Morning brother…" she walked up to Ginny and hugged her wishing her too, "…morning sister-in-law." Calmly sitting down on the bed spoke again, "Sorry to disappoint you Harry but nope you'll have class a lot…now the three of us have a breakfast meeting. Harry please don't mention this to Dumbledore till I talk to him, he does not approve me teaching you this but still I want you to know this art. Now come on." She pulled out a small blue rubble ball and as soon as the others touched it the tug was felt. Harry fell down much to his teaches amusement when they landed back on the ground.
"So Mia where are we?" he looked around trying to find what the place was, it looked very posh and high five kind.
"Come on in Harry we are in Sain Fracess it's a seven-star hotel and don't worry your dressing is fine. Now if you would come with me we could go and meet him." She walked up with the two lovers right behind her as they entered an elevator of a clearly wizard place. "Casino floor three." She spoke clearly to a small red button. Both Harry and Ginny almost lost their balance when the elevator moved again jerked to a stop. A voice somewhere said, "Casino floor three ma'am."
"Come on guys." She called and they followed her through nearly a twenty rooms in the corridor were of various kinds of casinos. She lead them through the last door with a red filter glass, when Harry walked in he was surprised. Inside was no casino but a small room with an elaborate bar that had both muggle and wizard drinks. The wind rider led them towards the bar and they sat on the stools. A young man around twenty appeared there dressed as a bar tender clothes smiled at the hooded girl. A small name plate had the words RICK on it, he had an air of friendly and carefree style around him.
"Hay there wind-rider what can ol' Rick do for ye' today?" he asked after they exchanged fives.
"First my gusts Rick – this is Harry Potter and that is Ginny Weasly." The teenagers said a hello but Rick waved them of and said clearly.
"Dude and Dude-et any brother of this rider is a friend of mine. So what can I get ye' fleas? Some strong coffee…or a full up breakfast?" Harry looked at the wind rider. "Breakfast right – how silly of me ye' told me yesterday." He waved his wand and three plates of breakfast appeared. Balcones, toast, eggs and some juice with some strong coffee the smell was welcoming and wonderful.
"Thanks Rick now down to work." Amelia began as they started eating, "I want you to fill them in on the goods."
"Aah the goods. Your up for it Potter and Wesley? Think you can put on the pressure she's going to place on you?" Ricky asked laughing coolly, "I think you'll be up to it if she is giving them to you two. Before that there is something you two should know the information you are going to face is never to be revealed to your teachers or in classes. What they teach may contradict what I being said but never argue and keep your lips sealed on them not many know about this. That excludes that ol' white bat all right?"
"Yes because that ol' white bat is right out the door sweets." She said coolly, Harry again chocked on his juice this time and Ginny looked shocked. A voice behind them said, "Right you are my child"
"So shall we get down to business? You think your end is ready? Their passes to the R.S and change in schedule and rooms are also set? The five house elves I had asked to be set upon them? Great and how 'bout the case of weaponry and special practice rooms I asked for…perfect. Now how about the time-table?" she stopped to sip some juice as Dumbldore assured her everything was done, "All right – so I think I can go and get the other stuff for them? Cool and that extra trips in for those two I wanted?"
"I wanted you to talk to them." Dumbledore insisted, Amelia gave him thumbs up. "Wind-rider another point. Please keep your dear pets away from my school of I won't be able to cover up."
"I'll chat up with them…o and do you mind tribally if I let master Yale take over in a few points…yo' know necessary?" she asked hesitantly. Dumbledore smiled and nodded. "Thank you so much."
"I should take my leave." He said getting up, the wind-rider too hopped of the seat and gave Dumbledore a bow down before he walked out of the room. Turning back to the diners waved a hand making the empty plates disappear before she waved to the waiter and walked away pulling the two along. Once they were out again she looked around as if looking for something suddenly smiled and said, "Aah there it is…" a red sports-convertible pulled into place. "Come on guys and sit at the back please I like back seat drivers to front seat ones." Ginny and Harry simply gabbed at their 'wind-rider' as she pulled the car over and started driving around followed by a crazy day of measurements, weights of strange kinds and a few more personal details.
Odder of the Phoenix (H.Q) – Sirius' Room
He lay back relaxed when Monny walked in, "Padfoot the wind rider wanted to talk to the two of us. She wanted to know when you are free?"
"Where is she now?" he asked looking up confused.
"Down after a whole day of shopping with Harry and Ginny." He told him confused as he sat down on the bed opposite to his friend. "Shall I ask her to come up so that we can have this chat? Said it's something about them…" Padfoot nodded and Monny pulled out his wand and sent a message. Few seconds latter a polite knock was heard Sirius got up and opened the door letting Amelia walk inside.
"We need to talk but first hear are the rules. One: you object then I'll modify your memory. Two: you should not reveal to anyone who I really am or in front of any portraits they cannot be trusted got it? Now the most important point…I need you to train Ginny and Harry maybe a few more latter once I let you know. Don't go soft on them…but I will let you know what they need got it?" Again the two of them nodded taking a deep breath she waved her hand locking the door and placing charms around the place at the anticipating faces of Sirius and Remus raised her hands and pulled of her hood. Both their faces registered shock and in union said one word, "You?"
Krishi