Ok! I really have to thank HeartlessVampireGirl for pointing out that this chapter's plot is too similar to the manga red river so I decided to change the plot of this chapter because I'm a little afraid that the others might think I'm a 'copycat' or something, so here's the new chapter 11 with a more original plot, hope you'll enjoy it!

Disclaimer: "The Prince of Egypt"belongs to Dreamworks Animation SKG, I only own my OCs.

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Exodus Concerto

Summary: An eighteen year old college student named Eve travels to Egypt with her best friend Hana, but a mysterious aircraft accident happens and when she wakes up, she finds herself being transport to the ancient Egypt and coincidently meets the Prince of Egypt Moses. Eve knows the story of Exodus, will she remain silence doing nothing or will she change the history that might cause consequences in the future?

Chapter 11 – Goddesses' Care

My whole body felt sore but I managed to get off of Moses's bed and first washed myself up before I changed into my clothes.

We did it…it was for real this time and no turning back. I finally gave my virginity to Moses three days ago when I went to his bathroom and things between us just sort of happened. But later I found out that Moses planned all this and my twin handmaidens even helped him which really pissed me off. But…I didn't regret it…

However, there was something I learned about Moses, a side I never knew it before, in the movie Moses was always a gentle kind of person, I remembered how he would lower his head and gently gave Tzipporah a tender kiss on the cheek while she was still sleeping, he said 'I love you' to her with so much affection in it, but to me...Moses was like a hungry beast! Okay, I admit, I like it rough but still…it really shocked me to see this dark cynical side of him or maybe it was a secret side that he hides it for so long.

I looked at the bronze mirror beside me and saw my reflection. There were some love bites and hickeys around my neck and shoulders. I blushed and let out a frustrated growl, beginning to search around Moses's chamber for something to cover my neck, and then I noticed there was a light blue scarf made of silk hanging on the elegant decorated armchair. I walked toward it and took the light blue scarf, putting around my neck to cover the love bites and hickeys. Looked up at the bronze mirror again, biting my lower lip. I could see through my eyes through the reflection that many different emotions were mix inside the electric blue.

I felt happiness when Moses took me to become his and confessed his love to me at the end. I felt guilty for selfishly steal the man's heart from someone else who was supposed to be his true love. I felt fear that there will be consequences in the future.

It was already noon and I decided to leave Moses's chamber and get some fresh air, while I was walking down the hallway, an unfamiliar female voice was heard from behind,"Hello there, daughter of the Sinai, I see you're finally awake."

I turned around and saw an elegant young woman in violet foreign attire, with sandy brown long hair with beige eyes and olive skin. She bowed to me in a graceful manner and I bowed to her in return.

"Hello, and you are…" I asked.

"I am Princess Ishkara, the princess of Babylonia and for now on I'll be staying in this palace as a royal guest." She said with a generous smile.

"Wow, so you're from Babylonia, you may call me Eve though." I said and felt quite excited to meet a living Babylonian.

"Lady Eve, it is my honor to meet the daughter of the Sinai Desert." Ishkara said and also looked at me in excitement.

"Eve!"

I heard Hana's cheerful call and saw my best friend coming toward us, I went to give her a hug, "Hana, I haven't seen you for three days, how are you?"

"Good!Good! I've been busy these three days too anyway so…oh, you're Princess Ishkara, Rameses told me about you." Hana saw Ishkara and nodded politely to her, she return Hana with a polite smile, "It's also my honor to meet the daughter of the Nile River."

"Please call me Hana."

When the three of us were about to have a nice friendly conversation, three other foreign Princesses appeared from the other side and saw us.

"Look, it's them."

"These two really look like children to me."

"Why would Prince Rameses and Prince Moses choose those strange and childish girls as their concubines? They're not even mature women."

"The one with blue eyes has a flat chest and a boy's hip, how sad."

"Even though that girl has rare golden hair and pale skin but she's just an immature little child. I don't understand what Prince Rameses sees in her."

Oh boy, the mean girls' drama does exist in the ancient time too, how troublesome…

I rolled my eyes to their insults and Hana just frowned at them, Ishkara only stayed quiet for a brief moment, then she looked at the other three Princesses and shot them a cold stare that startled them to keep their mouth shut in instant.

"That Babylonian Princess really gets on my nerves sometime, let's go girls."

One of the Princesses hissed, along with the other two they left us alone.

"Those Princesses really don't know any manners, such a disgrace." Ishkara said with a disdain look.

"Tell me about it." I said, totally agreed with the Babylonian Princess.

Princess Ishkara seems to be a nice person so far, I thought.

"Princess Ishkara!"

A servant girl who also dressed in Babylonian attire came and bowed down to Ishkara.

"What is it?" Ishkara asked.

The Babylonian servant looked at me and Hana, then she stood up and whispered something in Ishkara's ear, her beige eyes suddenly widened, "Are you sure?"

"Yes, your highness." The servant girl said.

"Lady Eve, Lady Hana, I just got an urgent problem that needs my present, I hope we'll have a proper chat next time." Ishkara said calmly and bowed to show her apology.

"No problem, it's really great to get to know you Princess Ishkara." I said with a smile.

"Yes, next time we can have a tea time at the royal garden together." Hana beamed.

Ishkara smiled and left with her servant girl.

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"It's Lady Eve and Lady Hana!"

"The daughters of the Gods have come to see us!"

When some of the Hebrews saw us coming, they all immediately kneeled to the ground and bowed down to us.

"Please, don't kneel." Hana said and gave them her kindest smile.

"How are you doing? Are they giving you enough food to eat?" I asked them.

"Yes, we're given enough food than before…as the Egyptian laborers…thank you." One of the Hebrews answered.

Also a week ago, I noticed that the Hebrews didn't have enough food to eat during their work, so I thought out a strategy to speak with Queen Tuya first about this matter, then together me, Moses and with the friendly support from Queen Tuya, we made a peaceful debate with the Pharaoh and successfully won his permission that the Hebrews will be given enough food so long they can work faster. I remembered how happy Moses was because it was his first time to solve one of his people's problems and it was a step forward.

"Somebody, help!"

Hana and I heard a scream of a young man calling for help so we quickly rushed toward where the sound was and saw a Hebrew man trying to help a Hebrew girl who was now lying on the ground unconscious.

"What is wrong?"

Hana was the first one who asked and kneeled down to them, examining the unconscious girl. The Hebrew man replied to us with a panicking voice," I-I don't know, she was perfectly fine at the beginning and then suddenly she fainted and not even breathing! Oh, please save her daughter of the Nile, she is my sister and she's only 16, she is too young to die so soon!" he began to bow to her nonstop begging for Hana's aid. She said nothing and quickly did we normally do in our modern times when someone is unconscious, after all, Hana was trained in medical practice so she knew how to save someone in this kind of situation, unlike me who was only trained to defend myself. She first opened her airway, placing one hand on the casualty's forehead and two fingers under her chin. Then she gently tilted her head back and lifted the chin. While she was doing it, everyone gathered around and looked at her curiously and even some taskmasters came into the crowd and have a good look at it.

Then Hana started to maintain the head tilted and chin lifted, and looked for chest movement. She listened for the sounds of normal breathing carefully and saw if she could feel their breaths on her cheek.

"She really isn't breathing, I need to use CPR right away." Hana said calmly.

"What's a CPR?" the young Hebrew man asked.

"CPR is cardiopulmonary resuscitation which is a combination of chest pressure and rescue breaths." I explained to him but he only looked at me in confusion, still not really understanding what it means so I just shrugged, not caring if he should understand or not.

Next, Hana began to perform the CPR, but this involves giving the girl's chest compressions and rescue breaths to keep her heart and circulation going. And then Hana kneeled down beside the girl on the floor level with her chest, placing the heel of one hand towards the end of her breastbone, in the center of her chest. She placed the heel of her other hand on top of the first hand and interlock her fingers, making sure she kept the fingers off the ribs. She leaned over the girl with her arms straight, pressing down vertically on the breastbone, and pressed the chest down by about 5-6cm. Hana tried to release the pressure without removing her hands from the chest so it'll allow the chest to come back up fully, she repeated about 30 times and then she decided to give the girl two rescue breaths.

After few more minutes, the girl finally started to breath normally again, so she stopped the CPR and putted her in a recovery position. Everyone gasped in shock and surprise to how fast the daughter of the Nile saved the Hebrew girl that it seemed like a miracle to them, an applaud starting to rise from the crowd and even the taskmasters were amazed.

"Oh thank you, thank you, thank you daughter of the Nile! You saved my little sister's life! How can I ever repay you?" The young Hebrew man bowed down to Hana, tears of relief and joy fell from his eyes.

I was in deep thought for a moment then kneeled down to the Hebrew girl and touched her forehead with one hand, it was hot as if she was in fever, then I turned to ask Hana, "Hana, do you know how it cause this girl to faint?"

My question took her attention then she opened the Hebrew girl's mouth and used a finger to touch her tongue, she let out a small gasp, "Her tongue is too dry, she must be too thirsty and easily catch a heatstroke."

"I knew it!"

I stood up and asked one of the Hebrew workers, "Are you allowed to drink some water during your work?"

They all look at each other looking uncertain if they should tell me or not, until Miriam stepped out of the crowd, as always she was the bravest than the others, "No, Eve, we aren't allowed to drink any water during our work." I could see she slightly narrowed her eyes at the taskmasters who were standing behind her.

I noticed Miriam had an empty jar in her arms and asked, "May I borrow your jar for a second?" She looked at the jar in her arms and handed it to me with a smile, "Sure."

Miriam gave me the jar then I walked toward the taskmasters and forcefully pushed the jar into one of the taskmasters' arms who stood in the middle, "You go get some water." I said to him in a serious and demanding tone, they looked at me in shock, "W-what!?"

"I said go get water from the well! You see the poor girl over there need some water to recover right now." I shouted at them.

"B-but we…I mean you don't have the permission from the Pharaoh!" the taskmaster who had the jar in his arms said.

"I'll deal with Pharaoh after you go get some water, if you don't…" I knuckled my fists causing them swallowing their throats looking at me in fear, but I didn't really want to frighten them so I sighed, "Just please go get some water, I promise I will get all the blame from the Pharaoh and I swear to your Gods that I won't tell him that you went to get water for the Hebrew, alright?" I did a zip my lips gesture to them showing my promise, they hesitated at first but finally nodded, "Alright, I go get water right away."

They finally left to do as I asked, and then our handmaidens found us.

"Lady Eve! Lady Hana! There you are…W-what are you doing?"

We both told them the whole story and they all gave us a shocking look.

"Royal concubines don't do such things!" Bennu shouted at Hana in disbelief.

"But I can't just leave the poor girl helpless like that!" Hana protested.

"And Lady Eve, how could you demand the taskmasters to get water for the Hebrews without Pharaoh's permission, this is too risky you know! Didn't you remember last time that you were once punished into the dungeons?" Layla screamed at me and grabbed both of my upper arms, shaking me with all her strength that almost made my head dizzy.

"St-stop shaking me already! You're making me dizzy, Layla!" I got annoyed and pushed her gently away from me to stop her continuing to shake me.

"Listen! I'm not afraid of what kind of punishment I will get from the Pharaoh so long I'm doing what I think and believe is right!" I said to Layla and she looked at me blinking her eyes then sighed in defeat, knowing by now that once I made a decision it'll be impossible to change my mind.

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There was not enough water so Hana and I along with our other two handmaidens Kakra and Bennu went back to the palace to get more water from the royal kitchen. I heard some royal servants, the palace guards and priests were whispering behind our backs when they saw what we're doing and of course those foreign guests who stayed at the palace laughed about us being weird and dirty. We simply ignored it and continued to do our thing but our handmaidens were very upset and angry of them.

"I just really can't stand these witches saying such bad things about you!" Kakra said and gritted her teeth, Bennu agreed with her while she glared at them angrily.

"Just let them laugh whatever they want so long they don't get on our way." I said.

Kakra and even Bennu sighed, they started to get used to our reactions now, but sometimes wondering why they would be given such strange girls like us to serve.

"Huy, look."

Hotep and Huy were leading their priests to the temple of the Gods in the hallway, and then they saw us holding a jar of water in our arms and ran outside of the palace toward the constructions site.

"What are these girls doing?" Huy asked in confusion.

"I heard they were going to give those Hebrew slaves more water to drink." One of the palace guards nearby told the high priests.

"What!? Did Pharaoh know about this?" Hotep asked in disbelief.

Since the day those two unknown girls became the Princes' concubines and also announced by Pharaoh himself as the daughters of the Nile and Sinai. Rumors were spread like diseases throughout whole Egypt about how they've been taking care of the Hebrew slaves and even helped lower status Egyptians like the laborers and the poor.

As the royal high priests, Hotep and Huy couldn't help but to find it outrageous, to them it was an act against the ancient traditions.

"I-I don't think the Pharaoh know about it yet." The palace guard said with an uncertain tone.

Hotep and Huy looked at each other, a sly smile slowly curled up on their face.

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"There is some water for you to drink."

Hana helped to feed the girl some water by lifting her head up a little to drink it from the plate. After the girl finished drinking it all, she felt much better and gave her a thankful smile, "Thank you so much daughter of the Nile, you are a God sent."

"Don't just thank me, thank my friend Eve too, it was her idea to bring water to you."

The girl slowly turned her head toward me and tried to bow to me, "T-thank you daughter of the Sinai for your kindness…" I quickly stopped her from bowing, "Please, no need to thank me, you're too weak to move right now."

"No, we really have to thank you two, if you aren't here, I don't know what will happen to my sister." The young Hebrew man said.

"Prince Rameses and Prince Moses found really fine concubines."

Suddenly one of the Hebrews said not far away.

"They really have good taste in women, I always thought all concubines are all spoil and selfish." A Hebrew woman said to another.

"They are not just any women, they are Goddesses!" a Hebrew child said to her mother cheerfully, while my handmaiden Kakra kindly gave her some water to drink.

The atmosphere in the entire construction site changed, after most of the Hebrew starting to receive water to drink during their work, smiles began to form on their sweating faces, their moods turned more lighter than before, there were even laughter could be heard around.

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From not far away, Pharaoh Seti saw everything what the two daughters of the Gods did, his expression seemed to be in deep thought.

These girls…not because they're my sons' beloved concubines or as Goddesses, they have qualities that won people's heart, whether Egyptian or Hebrew, I'm pretty sure no matter which nation, all people will be drawn to them.

The Pharaoh nodded to himself with a small smile and turned around ready to return to the palace, the high priests were shocked to his action and began to protest.

"My lord Pharaoh, didn't you see what they're doing!?" Hotep said trying to reason with him.

"The girls are doing behind your back without asking your permission, and what they're doing is against the ancient traditions!" Huy said, crossing his arms.

"Against the ancient traditions you say…well, all I see are two girls taking care of people, nothing more." Pharaoh said coolly to the high priests with narrowed eyes, "Let them do what they want to do for now."

The high priests were silence and didn't protest anymore, they looked back at the goddesses with a glare and followed Pharaoh back to the palace.

A/N: Hahaha~ The high priests thought they can finally get Hana and Eve in trouble but luckily Pharaoh is still a wise man xD The next chapter will be very interesting because we get to explore more about Rameses's family and I can't wait to write about it, this really have to thank my dear friend Queen Diamond Serenity :)

Thanks to all the reviwers, viewers, followers and those who fav this story~

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