So...

Given the length of this chapter, you are probably expecting me to say this fic is discontinued.

That is not quite the case.

I was planning on continuing but then when I was rereading it to remind myself of everything in it...

I couldn't bring myself to not cringe.

Basically, I feel that there are things in it that feel forced and unnatural even if they felt right when I wrote them at the time.

So... I'm canceling this version of the fic.

That is the bad news.

The good news is that I've already finished the first chapter of the rewritten version and should have already posted it as a separate fic under the title of "Fate: Clouded Psyche" before posting this note.

So... yeah... that's all for today, I will leave this version up but I won't be updating it anymore.