hey, im soooooo sorry i haven't updated in forever, it's just that i have been working on another fan fic and some of my personaly writing. I'll be posting my other fan fic soon, it's a new moon fan fic. so please read this and review, and i'll post for this story soon again too. i dont know how much i'm loving this story right so i might keep writing it and i might not, it all depends on how many people actually read this chapter. i don't own twilight ir nothing so, that's that. you guys know what i wish i did own, TAYLOR LAUTNER!! OMFG!


I could feel her breath down my neck, an involuntary shiver went up my spine. "You really thought I was going to do it, didn't you?" she laughed a cynically sweet laugh and stood in front of me within seconds.

"Maybe I will, maybe I won't; that all depends on you my sweet sweet Edward." With one icy finger she caressed my cheek softly. the trail left behind was so cold it burnt, it felt so strange; that without thinking I caught her hand in mine.

It was so cold and felt like a marble counter in my kitchen, hard as stone. It was so weird and different from human skin. Victoria must have mistaken my grabbing her hand, for something other then curiosity because she started leaning forward, expecting me to kiss her.

That was never going to happen, EVER! I was completely sure I was in love with Bella, my poor Bella, I'll never see her again.

I quickly moved back and said, "Victoria, it's not like that. I was just curious about how different you are..." I thought it would just be best to stop there because she seemed to be getting pretty mad.

"I would get away from her if I was you ." I heard a musical voice tell me; I had forgotten Alice was still in the room. Which means James and Laurent were too; wait wasn't Laurent Victoria's... what would you call it, certainly not boyfriend; mate? We'll go with that, I started backing away from her.

Victoria grabbed my wrist quickly, but just as quick, Laurent tackled her and she was now on the floor; with Laurent on top of her. "You always have to do this shit Victoria, always have tot ruin our plans." Laurent was yelling, right in her face.

Just then Alice blanked for a minute, but then was back and was yelling, "nooooo!!!! Not Jazzy, he didn't do anything, it was all that bitches fault."

She was about to run and attack Laurent and Victoria but James stopped her and held her back, but you could tell she was putting up a good fight.

Suddenly Laurent was standing up and had Victoria by the hair, "Oh yes Alice, I think that Victoria needs a little reminder that this isn't a game; or maybe it is but the most dangerous game of all, and you'll never win. It will also serve as a way to show Edward," he spat my name with disgust, "that he should fear for his life; that we are more dangerous then he can ever even begin to imagine."

Wow this Laurent guy was really starting to freak me out. Just then he threw Victoria on the ground and I could hear she was crying but no tears were coming out, that was weird. Laurent was out of the room and back in a flash, but he wasn't alone.

He was almost dragging a tall blonde boy with blue eyes; his hair was messy, like a surfer boy style and he looked absolutely horrified. I'm guessing this was Jasper or Jazzy?

Alice continued her screaming in the background, but Laurent ignored her.

James on the other hand was soothing her, saying "it's going to be fine." and rubbing her arms. Alice must have seen something because she said, "get off me you pig!!!!!!!" and pushed him off her with enough force that he went flying and hit the wall, and left a dent. Damn!

She turned to look at where Laurent and Jasper were standing, as I looked at her eyes intently, I could see what she was going to do.

A blood curdling scream came from the direction in which Alice was looking, and when I looked, I couldn't believe it my eyes. These freaks were really vampires.

Laurent was biting Jasper's neck; then he stopped but the screaming didn't and now it was accompanied by Jasper's flaying limb.

Laurent tied him to a solitary table that was besides the chair I had been sitting in before, the only pieces of furniture in the room.

All of a sudden Alice was over by Jasper; comforting him, but all Jasper was saying was, "it burns, please make it stop." I looked around the room but everyone, but Alice, Jasper, and me, were gone.

I could have easily believed that everything that just happened was an acid trip, but it was freakier that this was very real and happening before my eyes; and was probably going to happen to me.

I was not taking this well, because I was pretty sure I was going into shock. I was just staring blankly into space in the direction of Alice and Jasper.

Suddenly I heard the voice of my beautiful Bella, clearly, somewhere in this room. I jolted back to reality and looked around to find her, but the was no one there.

I was probably going crazy. I had just written it off as insanity, when I heard it again, come from behind me.

I turned, but saw nothing. There was nothing there, absolutely crazy, a completely mad man.


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ELIE