Alright, here it goes. I am officially re-writing this story. I've re-read it a bunch of times and I find I really dislike it. Not only is my character a Mary-sue, so much in fact it makes me slightly ill, but the story makes no sense at all and my character really doesn't make much or an impact on the story.
So here it is, I am starting this re-write immediately. If you like this story, sorry, but it's probably going to be nothing like the original. I'm leaving the chapters up until I'm finished, and when I do finish, I'm just going to be replacing the old chapters with the new ones under this title. If anyone has any objections, just e-mail or PM me. If anyone has any suggestions on making the story better, also feel free to E-mail or PM me.