Opinions to Consider Chapter 11, a camp rock fanfic

Now I have received various comments saying how they do not like how this story changed in the last chapter. Well I did ask so if you minded you should have said then BEFORE I made the decision not AFTER when I had put blood, sweat and tears into a chapter for you! So next time don't complain what you could have prevented and I WILL be asking your opinion again this time so this time around ANSWER if you have a problem with it ok? That is all,

Sasha XxxX

Chapter 11

'ha ha very funny, Santa clause' I mocked but he just smiled. Somewhere deep in my mind I knew It wasn't a joke but it was how I dealt with things. 'Mitchie, this is not a joke' Brown said sternly 'an' I don think urs parents wood like you talking to Albus Dumbledore that way missy' Hagrid scolded me gently. I shook my head. 'I can't do this'

I had ran out of the cabin and bumped straight into Shane 'Mitch, what's the matter?' he asked I mumbled some unpleasant words and then glared at the cabin I had just stormed out of 'my life is more messed up then I realized' I grumbled and then walked past him. 'Mitchie, wait we need to talk' he said and my heart stopped.

Do I tell her or not? Will it be too much in one go? Should I just shut up and say that she better not me later for our dance class?

I walked back over to him and as I looked into his eyes I realized that I liked him, more than a friend. More than a brother, but as a…. Mitchie! What have I warned you about thinking those things! Sorry brain.

'Mitchie I like you, a lot. I always have' he said looking shyly at the ground. I smiled despite myself.

I swear I saw her smile, but as soon as I saw it come it had vanished and I had a feeling I wouldn't see another like it in a while, I was an idiot.

I looked right at him and hugged him round the neck. I had to take what I could before I cut him off…for good. 'Shane…' I whispered in his ear, I felt him hold his breath 'I would-…I can't-its….complicated' I struggled for words. He leant back and looked me directly in the eyes. 'your lying' he said confidently and he was right. 'I know I am' I said looking down.

'why?' he questioned and I looked up 'I'm 12' I said and he shook his head 'that a lame excuse, but your not lying' he observed.

This is so confusing. When she said she didn't like me she was lying, but when she said she was 12 she wasn't? what the hell!

'I don't know if I can tell you' I said and he looked hurt 'I thought we said-' I shook my head trying to get rid of the tears I felt forming 'I know what we said!' I shouted 'but I can't tell you! I wish I could but I can't!' I screamed. I had always loved Shane, always ever since we were 8 but I couldn't tell him. And I'm sure he doesn't like me nearly as much as he says he does so that's why my brain blocks out those thoughts.

'you know if I can't tell you I can't! please I have to go' I said and walked off, what I wanted was to run back, say I'm sorry hug him so tight that he goes purple and then let myself love him, but I can't and never can, he can't be in love with a friggin 12 year old!

I wanted her to trust me, I'm sure it wasn't that bad and the whole 12 thing was just an excuse right? I sure as hell hope so.

Final jam

I had totally forgotten about final jam until I was being shoved on stage with a mic in my hand, I had no backing track but the talent scouts where there and I had to sing something.

'um ok this is a song I composed, hope you like it' I practically whispered into the mic and I tried not to look at Shane sitting at the judges table. I took a deep breath and began to play the piano.

I remember years ago

Someone told me I should take

Caution when it comes to love

I did, I did

And you were strong and I was not

My illusion, my mistake

I was careless, I forgot

I did

And now when all is done

There is nothing to say

You have gone and so effortlessly

You have won

You can go ahead tell them

Tell them all I know now

Shout it from the roof tops

Write it on the sky line

All we had is gone now

Tell them I was happy

And my heart is broken

All my scars are open

Tell them what I hoped would be

Impossible, impossible

Falling out of love is hard

Falling for betrayal is worst

Broken trust and broken hearts

I know, I know

Thinking all you need is there

Building faith on love and words

Empty promises will wear

I know, I know

And now when all is gone

There is nothing to say

And if you're done with embarrassing me

On your own you can go ahead tell them

Tell them all I know now

Shout it from the roof tops

Write it on the sky line

All we had is gone now

Tell them I was happy

And my heart is broken

All my scars are open

Tell them what I hoped would be

Impossible, impossible

Impossible, impossible!

Ooh impossible (yeah yeah)

I remember years ago

Someone told me I should take

Caution when it comes to love

I did

Tell them all I know now

Shout it from the roof tops

Write it on the sky line

All we had is gone now

Tell them I was happy

And my heart is broken

All my scars are open

Tell them what I hoped would be

Impossible, impossible

I remember years ago

Someone told me I should take

Caution when it comes to love

I did..

I had a feeling the crowd would be whispering about my song long after I leave, and not for good reasons, but for when the found out who I was singing about they would be able to crack me. The tough, hard , Mitchie who most would love to embarrass me into the depths of the earth.

I smiled weakly a Shane as the screamed and cheered. He hopped over the table and onto the stage and hugged me tightly 'you did great' he whispered to me and I smiled. 'hope so, and you might want to get off, cause you were told to have no visible connection the contestants' he pulled away and sat back at the table.

The talent scouts were smiling and nodding to each other, I hope that was promising not do we all agree she seems like a messed up young lady who is suicidal? well I can only hope.

'now the three connect 3 judges will go and discuss their winner meanwhile lets get Mitchie out od the limelight we all know she hates so much' Brown saved me and the people in the crowd that were in my vocal class started snickering.

I thought I was worried now, but now Dumbledore came up to me 'is there something I can help you with…sir?' I asked and he smiled in gratitude at my term for him. 'I just wanted to let you know that you are being taken away today, its up to you. You can either go at a normal school but meet up with one of our teachers after school or you can go to Hogwarts, school for Witches and Wizards. Its entirely your decision'

So here is your question where do you want Mitchie to go? Hogwarts or normal school? And answer if you have a problem with either and I wanted to thank my 1900 hits but more importantly my 32 reviewer who not only read my story but took the effort to give feed back (even if some responses were a little hypocritical)

Sasha XxxX