Sorry guys, I forgot to say that Karin and Hana are also trapped in the gym...lol I was half asleep when I wrote the last chapter...but this one is good!

Me: *rubbing back of head laughing akwardly* sorry about that Tonton

Tonton: *an X bandage on his side* oink

Tsunade and Shizune: *glare at me*

Me: *coughs* umm….right…okay then….disclaimer?

Gaara: writer does not own Naruto

Me: *grins widely* but I do own any OC's you happen to see!

Sasuke: doubt it

Me: *still grinning* you really wanna go a round with me pretty boy?

Sasuke: *turning around to walk away* you're not worth the time

Me: *tight grin* why you little

Temari: *holding writer back from jumping on Sasuke* okay then on with the show! *grumbles under breath* what are we going to do with you

Me: *still trying to get to Sasuke shouting and kicking*

Karin: yeah, yeah shut up already

High School Is Murder

By: Ghostwritter9396

Ch. 11

"KIBA!"

Shino's and Hana's voices rang in the heavy silence that followed the sound of the gun.

Kiba hit the floor on his knees, clutching his shoulder in pain, blood trailing between his shaking fingers, painting his blue v-neck a dark purple. He gritted his teeth, refusing to give this bastard the satisfaction of hearing him cry out. Hana and Shino glared at Tobi, who was calmly pacing in front of the line of students. Konohamaru, Udon, Hinabi and Moegi were all crying, tears running down their cheeks as they huddled around Naruto, Hinata, Tenten and a painting Neji. He was sitting on the floor, a hand still pressed to his leg that oozed blood. It ran thickly down his jeans and dripped from the cuff, splattering his Rebox and the polished gym floor.

"I told you to line up against the wall, I did not tell you to call anyone." Tobi said smirking a terrifying maniacal smirk. His eyes, though still round, were red and the pupils were smaller, a mad glint shining in them. "This is kind of like, Simon Says. I'm Simon and everything I say you have to do, anything that isn't said, is a forbidden act." His eyes traveled over their faces.

"Come on, Tobi." Kakuzu said softly. "What are you doing?"

"This isn't like you, kid, what's going on inside that head of yours?" Zetsu muttered.

"Heee…HAHAHAHAHAHA!" Tobi let out a hair rising screech of laughter, soft at first and then bursting out in a pitch of sound that sent shivers running to the very core of every cell in everyone's bodies, including Hidan's. When that boy gets freaked you know you're in trouble.

"What's so funny?" asked Naruto, keeping an arm around Konohamaru, forcing him back behind him a little.

"You don't get it do you? And you called Tobi an idiot! HAHAHA! He's gone you morons! Tobi Suiba is dead!"

A silence followed this.

"No, no, you're Tobi. You're not dead, you're alive." Konan whispered, trying to walk forward but Pein was holding her back, his hazel eyes never leaving Tobi. They were hard with concentration. He was trying to read the situation and figure away out of this mess.

"NO!" Tobi's voice no longer sounded amused, it was hard and cold and demonic. "I'M IN CONTROL NOW! TOBI IS GONE!"

"Okay, kid, alright we hear you." Said Kisame.

"If you're not Tobi, then who the hell are ya? The Tooth fairy?" asked Kidomaru. He was holding Tayuya who was glaring at Tobi with venom in her eyes.

BANG! BANG!

Kidomaru fell to the floor, clutching his right side and left shoulder. Tayuya snarled but fear of the gun held her where she stood. There was no telling how many bullets that bastard had in his jacket.

"My name is Madara, you'd do well to remember it."

Itachi felt like he had been punched senseless. This is not real. He was dreaming having a nightmare.

"Good, you're here." Izumo turned to a tall man with dark brown hair and beard, thick bangs falling over his right eye.

"Do we have contact?" Yuura asked as he ran up to Izumo, Kotetsu and Tsunade. They all shook their heads. Yuura turned to the principal. "Can we make a call to the room the shooter's in?"

"He's in the gym, but I don't know if he'll answer." She said weakly.

"Can you tell us anything about this kid?"

"He didn't look farmilar, but if I had to guess at who he is I'd say he's one of the Akatsuki."

"Akatsuki?"

"One of the two gangs that attend school here. I'd expect something like this from the other gang, the Snakes, but not the Akatsuki. They're just lazy defiant little bastards who usually stick to themselves."

"Could they all be in on this little stunt?" Yuura asked her. She shook her head.

"That, I don't believe. The boy acted alone and none of the others started assisting him when everything started."

"Alright, so we don't even know this kid's name, is that what you're telling us?" she nodded. Yuura sighed. Then he turned to the others. "See if we can get a line set up to the phone in the gym. Let's move it!"

"Don't worry." Kotetsu told Tsunade gently. "Yuura's one of the best negotiators this city's got, he'll get 'em out alright."

It was a coincidence, it had to be. Madara could not be standing in front of him right now. Itachi just couldn't wrap his mind around it.

"Some of you," Tobi, or rather Madara, said coolly as his gaze drifted to the middle schoolers. "are completely innocent."

"Then why don't you let them go?" Tenten snarled.

"Let them go?" asked Madara as if this had never even crossed his warped mind.

"If they haven't done anything, then why punish them?" asked Hinata nervously, her arms around her younger sister who was staring wide eyed at the gun.

"Why not let them go?" Madara said again, slowly, as if he had to get used to the idea. "Why would I want to?"

"You bastard! You just said they were innocent!" shouted Kiba through his teeth. His eyes went to his cell phone that had dropped beside him. Madara hadn't taken it.

"True, but then again, neither had Tobi."

What is this guy talking about? Was the main thought running though all their heads as they stared at the boy dressed in black pacing before them.

"Tobi did nothing wrong, and yet, they didn't let him go. The bastard invaded him almost every night, hurting him, causing him to scream out, call out for me. The bitch heard his cries but she never came. Tobi told her, but she slapped him whenever he said it. Tobi was innocent, but yet, he was killed. So, why should I let them go?"

Now they knew what kind of monster they were dealing with. A heartless one. One that had been molded by the worst kind of monsters out there. He was cold, emotionless, blood thirsty. He was right, he wasn't Tobi Suiba. Tobi could never be this evil, with his warming smile, loveable albeit annoying nature, his round laughing eyes, they were all gone. Zetsu gritted his teeth. He felt hands on his shoulders and he looked around, Sasori and Deidara were holding him, preventing him from moving. They had seen it in his eyes. The desire to destroy this thing that had destroyed Tobi.

Deidara was panicking inside his head, although he kept his cool on the surface. All he could think of was getting out of here, he needed to get home and be with his sister, she needed him to get out of here. Kiri, I'm coming.

Itachi was watching Madara in horror. This couldn't be happening. That's all he could think.

"Let them go, you'd still have us. Just let them go so they don't have to suffer like Tobi." Ino said gently.

Madara sighed. They still didn't get it. Oh well, only one way to show them. He raised the gun and aimed.

"UDON!"

Udon, who had the least cover because of Neji's condition slumped to the ground, a patch of red covering his white shirt, spreading like poison.

Moegi and Konohamaru started crying loudly, Hinabi just stood there in shock, unable to take it all in. This wasn't happening. This wasn't happening. She felt her body shaking, her heart pounding. Then, all at once, it got very quiet.

"Hinabi?" Hinata felt her sister go limp in her arms. She had fainted.

"You mother fucking son of a damn bitch!" shouted Lee. His dark round eyes were set with furry.

"Don't let them die!" Ino begged. "You have us, you can get what ever you want! Let them go!"

Madara looked over at the smaller boy, out cold on the wall. Neji, now ignoring his own wound, pressed both hands over the boy's chest, trying to stop the blood from taking his life away with it. His shot had been good, the boy will die and they soon will get it. It didn't matter if the kids stayed or not anymore.

"Fine, but they only have a minute to run out of here. Simon says, run for your life kiddies."

Hidan: WTF? I NEVER GET FREAKED OUT!

Pein: *to writer* you can't just end it there you bitch what happens? Do they make it?

Me: *grinning* you'll just have to find out

Tobi: but…it's so scary now….what happened to the funny parts?

Kisame: hate to agree with Tobi but yeah, enough with this dark depressing thriller shit bring back the comedy

Sasuke: what comedy?

Deidara: yeah, make us laugh again!

Sakura: again? I'm still waiting to laugh once

Me: *glaring at Sasuke and Sakura* I'm beginning to see why you two make such a perfect pair, you both are complete shit heads

Sasuke and Sakura: *crack knuckles threateningly*

Me: *cracking own knuckles* BRINGIT!

Sasuke, Sakura, Me: *start fighting in a cloud of dust*

EVERYONE ELSE: *sigh*

Sai: well, I guess we just enjoy the show and head to the next chapter

Naruto: Sai for once you're making sense

Tenten: don't forget to comment guys! *takes popcorn from Choji and helps to pass it around*

Hinata: who do you think will win this round?

Shino: the writer most likely seeing as how she's the one on the keyboard *pops popcorn in mouth*