Mag Mel (Barodius): The Bakugan Battle Brawlers in: The Return, Part 4

Battle #1, Round #1 (continued):

Dan: Ability, activate! Dragon Eternal Force!

Drago [Fusion Dragonoid]: RRRRRROOOOOOAAAAAAAARRRR!

Fusion Dragonoid, increase 1500 Gs. Draco Razenoid, decrease 1500 Gs. Current Power Levels:

Fusion Dragonoid = 2700 Gs, Draco Razenoid = 4100 Gs

(Dragon Eternal Force hits Razenoid in the chest, dead center. Despite this, nothing seemed to happen)

Razenoid [Draco Razenoid] (Dharak): Hmm? That's odd, I thought felt something... not! Ahahahaha!

Drago [Fusion Dragooid]: Grr... Dragon Over Cannon!RRRRROOOOOOOAAAAAAAARRRRRRRR!

Razenoid [Draco Razenoid] (Dharak): (gets hit by Dragon Over Cannon, but has no effect) Hehehehe... that tickles, wanna try again? HAHAHAHAHAHA! Meteor Elimination!

Fusion Dragonoid, increase 2x Gs. Draco Razenoid, increase 500 Gs. Fusion Dragonoid, decrease 500 Gs. Current Power Levels:

Fusion Dragonoid = 4900 Gs, Draco Razenoid = 4800 Gs

Drago [Fusion Dragonoid]: Dragon Spur! (evades Razenoid's attack)

Razenoid [Draco Razenoid] (Dharak): Destroy Grip! (grabs Drago and throws him into a wall, causing a pile of rubble over Drago)

Dan: DRAGOOOOOO!

(Drago uses Dragon Spur from the rubble and attacks Razenoid, knocking him into a wall behind the throne. The castle-like room caved in, but then disappeared. The new place they were in was similiar to the red area were Mag Mel and Razenoid were trapped in the first place. The cages were still on the "ceiling", just hanging from the stems of old Chaos Bakugan eggs. Drago and Razenoid were 4.5 feet away from each other and got up slowly)

Battle: terminated.

Drago and Razenoid are both struggling to get up, due to the amount of damage they did to each other. "Huff, puff... I don't understand you two. First, you killed your own race... then are reborn and try to make me and Dan suffer... but now, you both come back again and try to imprison us for your master. What the heck is wrong with you?" Asked Drago. "We're... just following orders, Drago. As the loyal servants we are" said Razenoid. "Didn't it ever occur to you... that this 'master' of yours... is just using you?" Said Drago. "SILENCE! You have no idea what your talking about! Our master has promised us freedom and a sense of peace from the anger, hatred, and betrayal! You don't..." Mag Mel was saying, but Dan cut him off. "Betrayal? What are ya talking about?" Asked Dan. "You told us only anger and hatred, but betrayal is a new one" said Drago. "Be quiet, lizard! You have..." Razenoid was saying, but Mag Mel cut him off. "That's enough, Razenoid... enough" said Mag Mel, sounding different.

Mag Mel then raised his hand towards the cages, they opened, and stairs leading to the floor appeared. The families of the Brawlers rush over, hugging and kissing. "Daniel, Drago!" Said Dan's mom, hugging Dan. "Go... get out of here..." said Mag Mel, raising his hand again and opening a Gateway. As everyone else (except Dan, Drago, and Dan's parents) turned to leave. "Hold up, Mag Mel" said Dan. "{sigh} I'm letting you go, what more do you want?" Asked Mag Mel. "That's just it... why are you really letting us go, and what's the betrayal?" Asked Dan. "That's none of your business, human! Go now, before..." Razenoid was saying, but got cut off by Mag Mel. "Razenoid... enough. You want to know? Fine..." said Mag Mel. Dan and the others listened closely.

"You remember Kazarina? Well, before I ruthlessly fought my way into the Nethian Palace. I learned she was murdered! In cold blood, by Gill. You see Kuso, I had feelings for Kazarina, and I still do. We were like siblings, we did everything together, even though my father never approved it because I was royalty and she was a peasant. When I found out of her fate, I questioned Gill about it... and he lied to my face. I was betrayed by an old friend, and lost someone I cared about. That's the real reason I tried to destroy your world before, because from that event, I was filled with rage. It had nothing to do with you, and... I'm sorry" said Mag Mel. Everyone was shocked, but felt sorry for him. "You traitor..." said a scary voice from behind. A giant black hole was beginning to take shape. "It's him!" Said Lars Lion. "The new evil!" Said Oberus.

"Master, wait!" Said Mag Mel, fearfully. "Please, give us another chance!" Said Razenoid, fearfully. "I gave you more than enough power, and you stop your mission! You've used up all your chances! Your time is up!" said the voice. With that, the black hole started to suck in Mag Mel and Razenoid. "Barodius!" Said Dan, grabbing Mag Mel and holding onto Drago's left leg. "Dharak!" Said Drago, grabbing Razenoid. "There's no hope, Kuso. There's only one thing you could do... take my Key!" Said Mag Mel, as his Key took form. "I-I can't" said Dan. "You have too, or it's the end of the universe. DO IT! TAKE MY POWER AND SAVE YOURSELF!" Said Mag Mel. Dan just held on tighter, refusing to take Mag Mel's Key. "If you won't take it... THEN I'LL FORCE YOU!" Said Mag Mel, holding Dan's hand with both hands and transferred his Key to him. Dan screamed because of the pain. Mag Mel loosened his grip. "MAG MEL, NOOOO!" Shouted Dan, but it was too late. Mag Mel let go and got sucked into the giant black hole. After that, a bright light appeared. In Mag Mel's point of view, as he faded into the darkness of the back hole, all he could whisper was: "Kazarina... I'm sorry..."

Everyone found themselves back to were Dan just battled Anubias and Sellon. "NO! DANG IT!" Said Dan, punching the ground with his fist that had Mag Mel's Key. "Ow, ow, ow" said a voice from inside Dan's fist. "No way... that's..." Drago was saying, as Dan's opened his hand to find: Darkus Draco Razenoid. "Whoa!" Said Dan, dropping Razenoid. "Ouch! Can you be more gentle, please?" Said Razenoid. Everyone stared at Razenoid in disbelief. "{sigh} When Mag Mel gave you his Key, I'm now linked to you... get it?" Explained Razenoid. Everyone just looked at one another. "He risked his life to save me, and all of you! I'm on your side now. I know it'll take a while for you to trust me, but I'll do anything to kick my masters behind all the way to Gundalia" said Razenoid. Dan picked him up. "I felt the emotions in his Key when he gave it to me. I believe you, sort of. Anyway, welcome to the Battle Brawlers" said Dan.

To be continued...

Drago [Fusion Dragonoid]: That's right, Brawlers. Now Razenoid is a part of the team, but I don't trust him. Me and him are in the middle of something here, so tune in next time too see the drama. I thought me and Dan got into some fights... but this is ridiculous!


Didn't expect that, did ya? Now with Razenoid in the mix, who knows what'll happen? Also as this story progresses, you'll see some characters (like Razenoid) change a little. You guys call it "making characters OC", right? Well, it might be a turn off for some of you, but their personality changes have to do with the overall plot, as well as keep the story interesting.

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