Ugh, oh boy, oh boy. Where to start, where to start..My computer broke sometime in June and got fixed..I dunno when but I lost ALL of my files, so for the past couple of months I had to re-download 'em all. It was until I read a few yaoi fanfictions that I got motivated to finish the story(Well, this part at least). And I was re-reading past my old chapters, and once I got to chapter 10 I was liek, 'Holy shiet, what is this?' SO, here's a quick summary of chapter 10:
Chapter 10 (Which I thought was the most confusing), the characters 'Jessalyn' and 'Zack' are Succubus/Incubus.
if you haven't noticed,but I gave Jess a couple of special powers.
But the power I gave Jess was the power to change the date on the calender.[ For example, if Person A was getting something to drink and Jess changed the time, he'd still be in the same place, but the time is different.] (Sorry for the rambling!) After Kouichi finds a pregnancy test, and finds his brother having a one-night-stand with a certain brunette,
Kouichi has a little conversation with Jess, Kouichi goes through a study-craze, and then basically get's addicted to searching the web for his answers, thus missing the love of his life's birthday. OHNOES!
Hopefully that helped clear things up. Also, I re-wrote some of the chapters..Actually almost all of them. I made some drastic changes, but mostly just grammar, spelling, etc etc etc.
..Actually.. Maybe it wasn't that confusing, and I'm just extremely stupid.
I'm paranoid as hell.
And now with that out of the way, let's finally start chapter 11!
As Kouichi walked in the room, attention was suddenly turned to him. Everyone in the room was glaring coldly at him, which sent chills up his spine.
Then everyone's attention was turned back to Meghan's, although Meghan's attention was still focused on Kouichi. It was a bit..Awkward. Maybe even TOO awkward to say anything.
"Well..uhm, blow out your candles." Kouichi said, nervously. After she blew out the candles, there was the same awkward silence again. Kouichi was the only one to try to get through it.
"Heheh..Yay." He murmured. Meghan glared at him before Kouichi and Kouji's mother carried in all of the presents.
"May I speak to you for a moment?" Kouji grabbed Kouichi's neck and dragged him off back to the living room. Kouichi faced his brother who was glaring at him. "What?" Kouichi asked. "I'm going to kill you." his twin threatened. "Look, you convinced me to do it with you, and now you changed your mind?" Kouichi blinked at his brother, "What?" A couple of months ago,
Kouichi asked Kouji to sing and dance with him for Meghan's birthday, since she found it adorable when twins do that sort of thing. For some reason. She's just weird, okay?
Kouji growled at him like a wolf would, "I remember! I remember." Kouichi lied, a little bit afraid of what his twin would do to him. "You owe me." Kouji muttered under his breath, pinching the bridge of his nose looking down. Kouichi sighed, "What's worse is that I actually forgot her birthday.." he muttered under his breath, right before he walked back into the kitchen, he turned around. "Who was that girl from the other night?" Kouji blushed, thinking up a lie. "It was just some random slut." Kouichi shrugged, "Okay!" he said before walking back into the kitchen.
"Forgive me?" Kouichi asked as Meghan and him sat at the kitchen table alone. He waited for response as she stared at him. "No." His heart sank. " I had a good reason, honestly! I even had a prese--" "Kouichi. I don't care about the present, I just wanted you to remember my birthday."Meghan flipped her hair back as she spoke."Yeah well, I had a good reason.." Awkward silence again before Meghan spoke up once more.
"Well?"
"I don't know how to say this..But..Jess and Zack are demons." "Hahahahaha!" Meghan cracked up laughing, "No way, Kouichi." She said as she stood up. "I'm being serious!" she snickered again, "Kouichi stop making things up." She walked off, hearing her cellphone ring from her room.
Kouichi groaned as he felt arms wrapped around his neck. "Hehehehehe~" That laugh. Again. He sighed as he looked behind him, his dark blue eyes meeting Jess's beautiful blues. "What is it now?" he asked. "Why didn't you invite me to the party?" she whined as she nuzzled into his warm neck. He shivered as he felt her warm breath on his neck. Seducing him was WAY too easy. "No.."he muttered as he felt her hand sliding down his pants.
"Hmm."
Meghan held her phone, which was dark blue and had fake gemstones on it that was messily glued on. She bought it a year or so ago, since her last cellphone she dropped without knowing it then it turning into a D-tector. She stared at the screen lazily, humming 'Summer Time ' quietly and quickly stop as she noticed something.
She growled with anger. The screen flashed black and white, "Stupid phone.." she muttered until the text message popped on her screen. "Happy happy birthday to me..." She sighed. First Kouichi forgets her birthday,
and now this? She suddenly felt a rush of anger before she flipped her phone shut before hurling it at the wall, breaking it instantly, or so she thought. "God-fucking-damn it!" She sunk down to the floor talking quietly to herself, "I can't believe this..after all these years." she sniffled, feeling tears go down her face..She then heard her phone ring, 'Must be working again.'
"Stop, just stop." Kouichi stood up, " I am NOT going to let you seduce me." Jess pouted cutely at him, "If you say so.." she grinned before slowly fading away. Kouichi sighed in relief, what was he going to do? He can't let her keep on terrorizing him like this.
//"H-Hello? Mom?"//
\\" We need to talk.\\
//"I told you! I'm not coming back. I'm happy here."//
\\"I just want to see my grandchild being born."\\
//"..."//
\\"Don't you at least owe me that? I am your only mother.\\
//"...fine.."//
She hanged up. Laying on the floor, sobbing. She was pregnant, she knew it. The pregnancy test knew it. The doctors knew it. Does Kouichi know it? He never will. She heard the door slowly open and then foot steps walking towards her. Kouichi bent down, "Are you okay?" she nodded and sat up. He sat next to her and hugged her, "Please forgive me." she placed her head on his chest. "Of course." she looked up at him, blushing. 'Mustn't let these hormonal changes get the best of me...' she thought when Kouichi kissed her on the cheek. He then kissed her on the lips, causing her to tackle him. She pressed her lips against his, letting his tongue invade her mouth. They soon pulled apart and stood up. "Sorry about that." she looked down, slightly embarrassed.
"What's to be sorry about?"
He grabbed her chin forcing her to look at him. He kissed her again, then down her neck. "Kou..ichi.." she gasped.
"Kouichi!" Meghan gasped, clutching at his back as he continued his rhythm, moving into her. He groaned as Meghan clenched her legs harder around his waist. Their panting and loud moans were the only sound in the room. Soon, Meghan dug her nails into his back and screamed his name as he stifled his own moan of pleasure by biting down on her shoulder. He laid over her for awhile, both of them fighting to control their harsh breathing again. He rolled off of her, laying against a pillow, eyes closed.
He opened his navy blue eyes to find Meghan laying against his side. He kissed her forehead tiredly. "Oh..sorry about that.." he said before licking at the blood coming from the bite mark on her shoulder.
A week later.
'Yes! Finally!' Meghan thought as she stood in the middle of a empty parking lot. 'I've been waiting for this day for 6 years.' Today was the day she was finally going to get her license. Kouichi walked up from behind her, holding her hand. "Excited?" he asked. Meghan nodded, "I shall not fail!" All of a sudden a young woman walked up to her holding a clipboard. "Oh hey! you must be Mrs. Boulevard! I've heard so many 'wonderful' things about you."
"No, no! Didn't they tell you?" the woman asked, they both shook they're heads 'no'. "Mrs. Boulevard got kicked from the school-board around 6 months back, due to the sudden drinking problem."
"..Huh." Kouichi muttered. "Well I feel sorry for her husband, then."
"You can call me Karen." she extended her hand. "Well, nice to meet you Miss. Karen," she shook her hand. Karen shook her head, "No, it's JUST 'Karen'. I prefer going by my first name..Let's get started shall we? Kimura in the back, Sailor in the drivers seat." they did as they were told.
Buckle your seat belt. Check.
Check your mirrors. . Check. And Check.
"FFFuck!" Meghan cursed as she ran over a couple of orange cones. "Just focus." She stopped the car looking out the car window. "Do you guys see that gigantic dark cloud over that building over there?"she asked randomly. "Huh, yeah.." Kouichi looked, "It'll probably rain." "Just focus on your driving." Karen repeated. "I hope it doesn't rain on our way home, I can't get my hair wet.." Meghan worried.
"Focus. Driving. Now--Wait, a minute. " Karen looked behind her at the dark haired boy. "Stop the car. I recognize you now.."Meghan did as she was told, even turning off the car. "What's going on?" she asked. "Out of the car! Both of you." They both opened the door and stepped out of the car, confused. "What's going on?" Meghan asked once more. "Mrs. Boulevard warned me about you!" "She pointed at Kouichi. "Nothing but trouble. I'm sorry but your not going to get your license, at least not today." Kouichi shooked his head. "Ma'am! You must be confusing me for someone else! Like my twin brother.."
"'Twin brother'? Yeah, like I haven't heard that one before."
Meanwhile.
"So? Did you get the boy?" A dark figure asked eagerly. Jessalyn and Zack looked at each other, nervously. "Erm..'Boy'?" The figure nodded, "Yes. Did you get the child of Darkness?" The two was thinking the same thing in their head, 'Shit! I forgot about that!'
The 3 was on the roof of an old tall building. The building that was once a apartment complex.
"Well, you see Master. We did exactly what you said to do..But.." Jessalyn began to explain.
"But what?"
"We didn't have enough time to do so. I mean, we befriended his friends, impregnated the girl.."
"Not.. Good enough!" the figure screeched. "Who's fault is this?" Jessalyn shrugged, "It's Zac--" "It's Jessalyn's" Zack spoke up.
"Zack is in love with a human, and is trying to pin the blame onto me!"
"Jessalyn had several chances to get the child, and probably didn't have the heart to do so. She's the one in love." he said cruelly. The dark figure stepped out of the shadows, she flinched from the sun hitting her pale skin. "It was a trick question, you fools! Your both to blame." Lilithmon yelled. "Now the real question is..Who gets to die first?"
"Phantom Pain!"
Aiming at them both, she fires off a mist. Right before she does, however, Jessalyn jumps off the roof and escapes. Zack coughs, "Hey, what is this?" he continues to cough, suddenly feeling a burning sensation everywhere on his body. Lilithmon looks down of of the roof, seeing Jessalyn run away. "It probably was your fault, wasn't it Zack?" she walked up to him, who is now on the floor, curled up in a ball. She began to circle him, "She's better at everything you do. And that includes not dying." she grins. Zack is now screaming in pain and yelling for help. "Shh, shh! Don't bother yelling, my little incubus. Just close your eyes and relax." She laughs before she flies off to look for Succubus.
"No..No..I can't die..yet." he whispered with his last breath. "I should've known better then to hire succubi."
A few days later, Meghan is talking on the phone with Zoe. "Relax, Zoe." she sighed. "I haven't seen Zack in days! He hasn't returned my calls or anything!"Zoe sobbed. She lays across Kouichi's bed, him sitting next to her. "Look, Zoe..About Zack. There's something I should tell you." Meghan then began to explain almost everything to her, only get a laugh in response. "Thanks for cheering me up, Meghan. Look, I got to go. I'm going with Kouji and Takuya to throw some eggs at some drunk woman's house. Apparently she was a gigantic bitch to them. Talk to you later."
Meghan closed her phone, sighing. "So, how did it go?" Kouichi asked. "She laughed when I told her. And I don't blame her, this all sounds ridiculous!" she sniffled. Kouichi hugged her, "Please don't cry." he whispered. "This sucks, Kou. And there's nothing we can do about it because we can't find out who the mastermind is in all this!" she cried.
"Wait..What? Mastermind?"
"Of course." she said wiping her tears off, "You couldn't possibly think that Jessalyn and Zack are doing this by themselves, did you?"
"Well..Yeah. I mean, who else could it be." Kouichi shrugged. Meghan smiled a little, "All we have to do is find Jessalyn and Zack and destroy them from the source. The mastermind!"
"Can we please stop calling it 'Mastermind'? What if it isn't even a genius? I mean, we have figured most of this out." Meghan nodded in agreement, "True."
"But we must go in disguise. If she recognizes us, who knows what will happen."
"We could digivolve, since she doesn't even know our evolutions. Or about digimon in general."
The couple smiled at each other, all was according to plan. Well, that's what they thought. "Wait," Kouichi frowned. "Our D-Tectors, Takuya has them." he groaned. Meghan scratched her head,"Oh yeah. That's right, we gave them to him for safe keeping a year ago."
"What a huge mistake that was.."
Meghan rang the doorbell to the Kanbara household. Kouichi stood by her, ringing the door bell after her. "Hurry the hell up, Takuya.." he grumbled. Yuriko Kanbara answered the door, rubbing her eyes. "Do you have any idea what time it is?" Meghan nodded, "3pm, ma'am. Can we please see Takuya? It's a emergency."Yuriko stared at her blankly. Kouichi scratched the back of his head, "San, Ma'am. Juu ichinichi wakaru deshou Takuya? Kinkyū desu." he translated. Yurkio shrugged her shoulders and invited them in. "He's up in his room. Second door to the right."
They both nodded as they walked to the door of his room, Kouichi knocked, "Takuya open up." he groaned. "Ick! Hold on!" he heard clothes and the bed rustling. In 5 minutes he opened the door, "Yeah?" he panted. Kouichi looked at him, "Okay, two things. We need our D-tectors and you're not wearing any pants." Takuya looked down, "Huh. Would you look at that?" Kouichi looked in the room, "Hey Kouji." He muttered. They walked in the room, Takuya closing the door behind them. "Kouichi is in a bad mood because I drove us here." she looked at him, ticked off.
Takuya open his closet door, doing through different boxes looking for the D-tectors, Kouichi looked over at him and something clicked in his head. 'Brown hair, brown eyes, tanned skin, flat chested.' He then looked over at Kouji. "Found them." Takuya announced carrying a shoebox over to the desk. He opened the lid up and 4 of them looked inside. "Damn.." Takuya muttered as he picked up his old red and black d-tector. Meghan picked up hers, which was a light blue and ruby. "It's been awhile since I've actually held this.." After the 'incident' a few years back, she decided to give her d-tector to Kouichi, knowing she couldn't trust herself with it. She blew the dust off of it.
"Why do you guys need them anyways?" Kouji asked. "They probably don't even work anymore."
"Well, if we told you guys why, you'd just laugh." she pouted. "Why? You guys aren't going to use them for 'role-playing' are you? It's not as fun as you think."Takuya scratched the back of his head, "Especially if you accidentally set something on fire."
"Why do you guys always have sexual reference out of EVERYTHING?"
The beginning of the chapter was going to be some what different. It took me 3 times to get this chapter right but I accidentally cut some stuff out, like:
1) There was going to be a very sweet flash back.
2) Kouichi finds out about Meghan's pregnancy(I'm glad I cut that out).
And I just found out Kouichi's and Kouji's Mum's name. Which is Tomoko. I'm extremely glad I found out before I gave her some lameass name.
Also, R&R! And please tell me, is Meghan a mary-sue? I've been trying to give her more flaws, and make her more into a believable character. Have any advice? Let me know!