Hey y'all! Just as I promised...The epic chapter! Lets get started:
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To: Syd04
Thank you for reviewing I really appreciate it.
To: Fluddershy
Hope your wrath is satisfied
To: Everybody
whoever's wondering why the chapters are short. Heres your awnser, I simply don't have enough time to work on them. And for that I am sorry.
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Hello, er I'm N.
Hi, n. . I'm alania.
Yo, I'm Brun.
Ok, thank you all for coming. Its nice to meet ya'll.
Nice to meet you to.
Ya.
So why did you ask us to come here?
Thats the thing I would like you two to have a conversation with me every chapter for my readers entertainment.
Hmm, Why not? Sure i will.
Alania?
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Ok i will too.
Great. So this is prouble getting kinda boring so on to the chapter!
Drum roll please... I give you...Chapter 10!
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Jack...
Please jack...
I need you...Please...I need you...
Jacks mind felt groggy, Like someone had stuck a spatula inside his head and spun up all his brains.
He could Barely distinguish that voice... It called out to him, beckoning him. Pleading with him. It sounded dire and desperate although it spoke of a young girl who had the burden of feelings to great for her age. Jack followed the voice, his feet treading on darkness.
A room materialized in front of him. It was small and cramped. A small bed sat in one corner, A girl sat on it. She had curly dark brown hair and a light complexion. As jack drew closer he could see a pair of shoes beside her; with blades on the bottom. Tears streamed down her Cheeks as she murmured fervently: "Jack, I need you. Please come back to me. I need you."
A bored Creaked as Jack stepped from the blackness to the wooden floor. The girl looked up imediatly, Jack's Frosty blue eyes widened as the girl looked up and stared at him with Stunningly maple brown eyes,
and He rememberd. This was his sister: Sophie.
Jacks Face split into a wide grin, and he stepped forward Expecting to embrace in a warm hug with sophie. But she stood up from her spot on the bed and studdied him.
"What? Not good enough for you?" He joked stepping forward. But she retreated and bumped up against a set of drawers, Her face suddenly filled with fear.
"Sophie- Its me, Jack!" He insisted stepping forward once more. Her face contorted in anger, "Your not Jack! You-you thing! My brothers D-d-d-dead!" Her face crumpled for a moment and Jack fully realized how much it must have hurt her when he died. He reached out a comforting hand... her eyes snapped up and she screamed, "Stay away from me!"
She instinctivly reached out towards a torch on the wall and grabbed it; Swinging it back around to point right at Jacks heart. Sophies hands shook as she stepped forward and jack stepped back, realizing what she was doing.
"Get out!" She screamed plunging the stick forward; however it missed its mark. Piercing Jacks arm.
He yelled in real pain as the fiery embers spilled over his arm as the stick impaled it. Sophie dropped the stick and ran out of the room.
Jack breathed heavily as the edges of his vision blurred and he removed his hand (Which he had been clamping on his forearm) And stared at it. It was coverd in Silvery like blood.
Jack fell onto the ground, as his knees gave way and as more silver blood spilled out of his pierce mark. His Eyes started to close as he felt the pull on his eyes.
The last thing he saw was a shadaw he had not notice before Slither off the wall and form into a man.
Hope you like it!
N.