Yeah, I know, I said I'd delete this last Wednesday ...
What can I say, I'm not good at tracking time. For all readers still interested, I just posted the new version of this story on my profile. So go check it out! It will seem familiar, simply because I didn't change the core of the story, just how it's delivered. Hopefully you like it as much as I do.
It's still unbetaed, but that will change within a few days. I just felt bad because I said I'd have the new chapter up last Tuesday.