Fifteen minute challenge
This is where I wrote this entire POV in fifteen minutes, (not including changing typos and stuff like that) I hope you like it
p.s sorry this took so long :) and it is pretty short
Life in Fifteen minutes
Fernomina
I felt my life flash in front of my eyes as we slid down the hill, I gripped my arms around the sobbing DJ, surprisingly not crying because he was steering us through the rugged, vertical slope that a single wrong movement would mean certain, awful pain. More like he missed his rabbit.
I hugged DJ tighter holding my hat in place.
"Pleas DJ, Bunny would want you to live. You know that deep deep, deep down. On your Spleen! Your spleen knows that you want to live!" DJ just whimpered some more and as we narrowly missed another tree I saw my life flash before my eyes.
Me as a pale ass kid seeing the beach for the first time, catching my first wave. Chloe my first girlfriend, Jenny my second girlfriend, Hayley, Kaley (Twins, Ha-cha!), Lauren, Katie, Georgia… So many more. All the parties I had ever raved to flashed before my eyes. A mess of streamers and balloons. Jumping teens. Getting my first pimple and getting on this show. My life was so short and I hadn't done all the things I wanted to.
There were so many things I hadn't done. Experiences I had lived, people to meet, places to go, food to eat. There were so many things I would miss out on. A million dollars unwon, waves uncaught, Parties- well - unpartied, and Bridgette. Oh Bridgette. I would watch over you, I decided. In the Big Surfer's paradise in the sky.
We narrowly missed another tree but I wasn't concentrating on imminent death anymore. More like watching Bridgette winning the competition, going to College, getting married to an accountant, getting old. Wait a minute! No way was an accountant getting his clammy hands of Bridgette! I snapped out of my daze and tried to console DJ.
"DJ please! Listen to your spleen! Don't let Bridgette get married to an accountant! Please dude!" DJ got more and more confused
"I'm sorry Dude. Bunny was my life. And now…HE'S GONE" He let out a cry of sadness and buried his hands in his face. An explosion went off next to us and I squealed. Suddenly like the big Wave Master from the sky called out.
"DJ! Look who it is!" I looked up preparing to see the Ocean Lord himself but saw Duncan instead, holding up Bunny into the sky, like in that Lion movie. HOPE!
"DJ please, look, It's Bunny!"
As he looked a ray of sun came down and his face brightened. "BUNNY! YOUR ALIVE!" As he pulled down his blindfold I directed him down the mountain to the finishing line, to life and to an unmarried Mrs Bridgette Accountant Dude. As we landed on top of the finishing line I ran off and kissed the ground and then looked up to the heavens.
"Thanks Dude." I whispered before our group embraced us in victory.
