Great Scott guys! Triple digit reviews and all of them are amazing - thank you so much for making this possible and thanks for all of the constructive support you've given me over the weeks on the development on this series. Give yourself a pat on the back from me and have a cyber cookie. Enjoy this chapter as you have this series.
Sharply, Melanie drew a large intake of breath as the fantasised teen stripped himself bare of his cage. An index finger scampered downwards from the Mcfly's collar bone to draw the outline of his taut nipples – receiving various goose pimples in response to the delightful touch as well as pleasant groans that rang in the poor girl's ears.
*Flashback*
"Come on, Marty! We're gonna be late." Jennifer smiled sweetly towards her boyfriend.
"Aww… Come on, Jen. We have plenty of time to get there." Replied Marty.
Jennifer was dashing towards the school entrance, with Marty in tow on his skateboard, who was grinning wildly. Strickland was waiting for the couple – arms folded and frowning furiously.
"Late once again, slacker. And you seem to be bringing down one of our top students, Mr Mcfly. That is unacceptable. I've said it before and I'll say it again – No Mcfly in the history of Hill Valley has ever amounted to anything around here! Now get to class." Scolded Strickland.
Jennifer stroked Marty's shoulders tenderly while he muttered to himself sadly.
"Oh and Mcfly?" Strickland called almost merrily.
Marty Mcfly turned around expectantly to see Strickland's mood had uplifted. He smiled in return.
"You've just earned yourself a months worth of detention." The teacher smirked evilly.
Jennifer's eyes mellowed at her boyfriend's pain and she wrapped an arm around his thin shoulders. The male's eyes swivelled to stare sweetly at his girlfriend's and he smiled before giving her a full blown Frenchie – that was until Strickland returned and bellowed down the hallway.
"No kissing in the hallway!"
"Dont worry, Marty. I'm sure you're going to be just fine. I'll see you next lesson. See ya!" Jennifer pecked him on the cheek.
*End of Flashback*
"Gurgh… Ngh… What? AH! What the hell am I doing naked?! And where the hell am I?! This is heavy."
Marty began to return to his senses slowly, as a half naked Melanie was towering above him, beaming at the teenager.
"Well its about bloody time! I wasn't sure what stage was gonna get you out of trouble. I was hoping I wouldn't get to 3rd base, but luckily it was 2nd base – so thank fuck for that." Sighed Timella, "Now do you mind getting out of my head?"
"Yeah, but how?" Mcfly asked, childishly pouting.
Ella pointed at a large gaping gap that smouldered a vibrant shade of white. The crack enlarged a little more as Marty slowly made his way out of the female teen's temple. Light engulfed him and Melanie regained consciousness, to find herself being dragged up basement stairs clumsily by Emmett.
By now she must have been covered in a multitude of slashes and bruises – black and red being the two most vibrant shades on the damaged girl's body.
"Great Scott, great Scott, great Scott! This is some serious shit!" Exclaimed Doc, still unaware of the fact that Timella's perception had returned to her.
He felt a strong tugging on the opposite end of the stirring female's body – so he looked down into the depths of the basement – witnessing Marty seemingly wrestling with himself and asking the teenage girl what he should do. The icy warped voice sounded more like the cocky boy's old self and his eyes had dimmed a little, although they were still glowing faintly. Marty Mcfly's right hand was bitten and bloody, revealing he was having a full on internal conflict. Whoever had bitten who, it wasn't going to be a fight quickly forgotten.
Brown yanked Melanie through the basement door, persuading a wail to spring into life and reverberate through the underground floor.
"Doc, you fucking asshole! That hurts like a bitch! Urgh, Jesus Christ that is bloody murder! I had enough problems with the thing downstairs trying to kill me in sub space, so I really don't need my limbs tearing apart - thank you very bloody much." Ella scolded feverishly, leaping up and away from the doctor's sturdy arms – before standing hunched holding her guts once again.
"Apologies, but we really don't have time for this. Have you done it?" Doc questioned.
"Yep, now all that is left is for him to get back and then the wipe." A sad looking Timella sobbed quietly.
"Are you sure there's no other way?" The old man consoled.
Melanie shook her head in response.
"I'm sorry, Doc."
And that was all that she could say.
Well now... What's Timella talking about and why is she sooo sad about it. Well you'll have to wait till the next chapter guys I'm afraid.
Anyways...
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Marty: Teehee! Timella isn't as insane as she sounds you know. She lost her sanity years ago xD Hope you liked this chapter and I still hope that you will continue to read the remaining chapters of this series.
The Evil Al: Mind truckery for the win eh? I'm soo immensely glad that you liked the previous chapter and I hope you will continue to R&R!
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