Revenge starts with a S
AN: (Couldn't think of a better title)I know u guys that asked for me to write their OC's are like "WTF is she doing up there." but if you've been patient, thank you, but anyway I'm working on my "apology chapters" and I've got an annoucement: I'm writing Yuri's.
It's my way of trying to say sorry about the slow updates but thanks for reading otherwise. So heres the upcoming layout:
1. Surprise
2. Surprise
3. JH Sanders87's Story
4Life2011's Story
About the story:Anyway so I was looking for inspiration for a story and found the least expected place EVA for me: .
It's a hentai website so don't go if you don't like!
I went on it because I thought: well hell, If get a plot out if it I'll do it, and what do you know I ran across a My Life as a Teenage Robot comic (rule 34 also raped my childhood with that too.). Long story short I got this. I also wanted to make Rex a bit more dominate or like they are in It all Started with a Bet and this more of a payback thing.
R&R please! Oh and thanks to the person that commenting on It All Started with a Bet and said Ace was the least Mary Sueish character they've read in a while.
Leave a comment on what ya'll think. On a side notes Ace's pet fox, Harley, will be making a short cameo in here(got the idea playing Fox Creator.) I'm not sure if any one notice/cared but how come theres no Caeser in the Characters Selection?
And nobody can tell me they didn't like Posion,Marked, or The Seventh Night by Solora Goldsun! GO VAN CAESER!
Additional Info:
Includes: BoyxGirl, fellatio, anal, vaginal, cursing, and I guess rape(?)
Disclaimer: The OC's are mine but if this ends up on TV im LMFAO
Pairing: Ace and Rex
"Ace!" Rex yelled loud enough for everyone in the vicinty to hear. The Latino had had it with his next door neighbourh and her fox!
The owner of the animal let her pet eat his shirts, bite up his jacket,and even eat his homework to turn in to trigs tommorow!But she crossed a line when he saw a large bite mark in his Playstation 3 controller.
That was it!
He heard barking and giggling from her door as he barged inside. "What the Hell Ace!" he yelled waving his destroyed controller.
"What are you assuming? That my Stevie bit that?" se said with a grin as she pet the animals sunglow fur and bang. "No shit Sherlock." he mumbled his voice seething with rage. The foxes eyes glanced at her master, recongizing his anger.
They were supposed to go for a walk and show her fox off so the ravenette was dressed to assumed a normal apperance besides her work clothes. Her hair was deprived of it's headband and turn into waves that cascaded down her shoulders. Her eyes added a small amount of metallic grey eyeshadow and bubble gum pink lip gloss on. She wore a blue and white tank, a blue denim skirt, and white crisscross sandals.
"Did you Stevie?" she said not paying attention to her animals fear. The fox darted out the room, leaving her owner with the angred boy. After all the cub could go bother Bobo or Syren.
"Sit down, grab some water muñeca you looked peed off." she said calmly even though she was aware she was caught.
"I'm good now go fix my damn game!" he yelled. "Or what?" she said standing up looking at him dead in the eye. He grabbed her wrist and summouned his nanites. While working on his jetski again he discovered that being one of the 1st EVO's ever does have it benifts. That familiar blue tracing was etched on her skin as his nanites did there work.
He let her fall to the floor and a smile cover his face. He felt his nanites kicking into another gear and bundling together. Red lines traced up her body and he knew his plan had sucessfully worked. "Damnit Rex!What did-" she hissed trying to make a hand gesture. However her arms stayed in place. Just as perfect and still as her legs
"Arise" he laughed. As if her body heard him, she stood on her knees, the only things she herself could command was her speech.
"What the fuck did you do t-this time?" she snapped not liking where this was going. He didn't reply and ordered her hands to unbutton and unzipped his jeans. "Rex?" she said getting a small idea on the punishment he had in store for her. She pulled his boxers down and his erect manhood was revealed to her.
"Get it now,princess?" He said as a blush spread over her cheeks and she looked at him. "Look Rex, Im sor-" she pleaded but he made her swallow the head of his hot tan cock. She tried to pull off but her body wouldn't allow it.
"It's not that bad, plus he tastes pretty good so I might as well..." she thought. She let her tongue swirl around the head of his dick. "Ah,I'm going to enjoy this." Rex groaned clutching her hair. She held and stroked his shaft with one hand and bobbed her lips up and down. She was mad at herself a bit for getting wet while this was happening. He moaned in pleasure.
"Why didn't I do this earlier?" he thought watching the girl work. "C'mon you can do better than that." he teased in a moan. She rolled her eyes and swallow more of his phallus and massaged it with the underside of her tongue. He moaned her nickname and gripped tighter. "That's right buddy boy, the faster you come, the faster I'll get out of this."Ace thought. Then cobalt orbs met copper ones and they just made a little eye contact. He gave a cocky glare and she gave a devilish one back. She was able to swallow his mid length and pre cum but wanted to stop there, her tongue exploring his length as it slid back and forth. Slishes and Sloshes mixed with moans as the girl suckled and licked his length.
"N-No doubt you've done the b-before." he groaned knowing his orgasm was near. "But you improve a bit more." he added. She looked at him quizzically but was cut short but him pushing her head complelty down his length. He moaned wildly as he angled his erection right at the back of her neck and thrusted in and out the wet cavern. She moaned around the flesh and closed her eyes, hoping this was over. "Jesús dulce! I'm gonna bust a nut(idk but I laughed writing that)!" he moaned garishly. She tried to put off, not wanting to swallow, but a plethora of his hot seed flooded her mouth and excess down her chin. She was about to spit it out but he controlled her not to. She swallowed what she could and snapped "Alright you had your fun now let me go."
But he simply chuckled "Nah, I don't feel like it. The same way you felt like destroying my game."
"Kharma is such a bitch!" she mentally sighed as her body began undressing herself. Her shirt was lifted up, her skirt followed suit, andher under garment tossed onthe floor. "I bet your not a virg, so I'm gonna have a really fun time with my venganza." he grinned. Her body aligned it's self so she was on all fours and her rear facing him. He positioned himself so he was on his kness and his hand on her ass. His memeber proded her wet pussy folds and she felt her cilt throb.
"Stop enjoying this damnit!"she mentally yelled at her ludicrous new found arousal. Suddenly his head remove from the aroused part and thrust between the clevage of her buttocks. "Rex..." she hissed, hating the taunting. "Demanding aren't we." he smiled shoving his cock in her tpucker anus. She gasped, not expecting the sudden move,while a blush tinted her face. "Awww baby doll didn't expect that did she?" he groaned. She was tighter than he thought. His cock enjoying the tighter muscles around it. She moaned at every thurst as the boy was balls deep inside her."Fuck me I'm pathetic." she thought as her mind was clouded with her almost satisfied carnality. She had been fucked their in a while and she started to think punishment wasn't as bad as it seem. Their hearts beated rap;idly at the same rate. "Good Jesús you pussy better be this tight." he moaned slamming his phallus relentlessly. "B-Bite me." she moaned not letting her lust betray her.
Suddenly he stopped. She opened her eyes wider when he pulled out. "What th-" she said before he lifted her up. "Maybe...Just maybe he's stopping..." she thought hopefully. Then he saw that lustful glint in his eye and thought "Well shit." He sat on the sleeper chair next to her bed and push her anal hole on his cock. She clenched her teeth together so she couldn't moan. This was abattle on who dominated who and she was determined to matter how good it moaned and fondled her breast as he thrusted inside her. "I've SO should've fucked you earlier." he moaned in her ear. "C'mon you know you love it your probably thinking the same thing too." he hissed. He thrusted harder and pinched her nipples. "A-Ah..." she moaned a bit with a dilated eye open and the other closed,her blush still on her cheeks.
"Your probably cumming by now anyway so we shoulder try something a little diffrent." he said biting into her neck and shoulder. "Damnit now it's noticeable." she thought as she was lifted of his cock again. He was right, she was cumming but she hated to admit it. "You do know Kharmas a bitch, right?" she heaved. "I'll enjoy it while I can." he laughed. "I hate him oh so much." she thought as she leaned on the glass table so he body was sideways. "Leg please." he said. She tried to refuse but her leg was caught by the dark skinned male. He held up her knee and thursted her anal hole again. "FUCK!" she cried. She'd given up and fell in lust's grasp as he plowed her tighter entrance. "That's right Pudding, come on daddys hard cock." he groaned thrusting as hard as he could. "N-No..." she moaned. How could she let this happen. Her rival was fucking her to the the point of no return and she was helpless and enjoying it. Damn him. "Rex I'm about to fucking cum..." she said in a loud moan with her voice trailing off. "Good now keep your promises." he smiled. "REXXXX!" she roared. Red lines traced her body as her cum coated his cock. He moaned her name just as loudly as he emptied himself inside her but still erect. She panted hard as he pulled out carried her on her bed bridal style.
"It has to be be over."she thought mentally praying. She was laided but new something was wrong when he climbed ontop of her. "One more part of your punishment my angel and maybe you'll learn your lesson."
She raised an eyebrow, "WTF is left!" she thought. But she was caught off guard when his lips pressed against hers. She moaned in the kiss, letting him completely take over, as he spread her legs. Then he gripped her shoulders and thrusted all the way inside her pussy. "AH!YES!" she moaned closing her eyes and arching her back. "Good G-God." he groaned as sweat dripped down both bodies. "Fuck me so hard Rex!' she cried with pleasure eating her body away. "Jesus! I'm coming!" Rex cried. "Cum inside me!"she pleaded looking at him. She was answeed when his hot sticky fluids flew into her body and collieded with her own. He pulled out and re zipped with a smirk. He got up and left saying "That's teaches you to mess with my stuff."
Ace sighed. Her bed smelled like sex, not that she was complaining, and she got dominated by a person she boderline despies. Oh Khrama would be on her side.
1 week Later
Rex was flying back to providence base when something het his jets and immediatley knocked him out. So fastfoward, here he is chained to a wall, fully nude. "Hey Rex!" a voice laughed at him. He couldn't recongzie it but weird enough it sounded like Shego's. Soon her saw red engery upon to hand that resembled flames. The figure can closer to reveal Ace in a red dominatrix outfit and a whip around her waist.
"I thought about last week, I was right, Kharma is a bitch but it depends on what comes with it." she said with her new voice. "Whats with the voice?" "Metapmorphisis. Oh they also allow me to do this." She said as a dildo made form red energy appear in place of a flame. "Shit." Rex groaned.
So I know when you write an OC, your already got the outfit the personality, blah blah, but I don't have the voice for Ace,Syren,or Cheshire? If you've got an idea, leave a review saying L8Rs u guys.