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In the darkness of Mina's room, an even darker shadow lurked. From the shadows appeared the silhouette of a man. The
dark figure walked over to Mina's bed and loomed over her frail form. His intentions where diabolical to say the least, as he
smiled down at his prey he whispered,
"Do you remember me?"
Her eyes fluttered at the sound of his voice. She drew the blankets up to her chin and slept on, breathing softly. Oh, she
was a tantalizing blood bag that he dared not to partake of just yet. His orders where very clear; he was not to harm her
just yet because his employer wanted her to suffer before she died. In his mind, that was perfectly fine: he wanted her to
suffer too. The humiliation she handed him the last time they met was almost too much to bear! He wanted to rip her to
pieces and feel her scream as he drained every last drop of blood from her veins. But at the same time, he wanted her like
he had never wanted any other women before. No one had ever defeated him the way she had and never once had his
prey escaped him. She would be his and he reveled in the thought that soon, very soon, she would be his and he would
ravage her for all eternity. He grinned wider as he entered her dreams and twisted them into something sinister. She began
to moan and cry in her sleep and he left, satisfied with the knowledge that she would soon be screaming.
Mina's peaceful dream turned into a nightmare. She felt the darkness close in on her, making it difficult to breath. In her
dream, she saw him. His bright blue eyes met hers and he started to laugh. Shuddering at the sound, she attempted to
move away from him, but found that her back was against the wall.
"My little Mina," he whispered, "It has been far too long my love."
She could not answer him as she was nearly paralyzed with fear. A small part of her knew it was a dream, but she could not
manage to wake up. Her mind reeled and painful memories came to the surface. She saw her mother lying in a puddle of her
own blood and she was screaming as the monster above her tore her to pieces. She heard her self scream,
"You bastard!" But all her efforts to save her mother failed as she was thrown into the wall. She saw stars dance before her
eyes as she struggled in vein to stand.
"NO!" She screamed at the man before her, "Leave me be! I don't want to see this again!"
"She was tasty, your mother I mean."
"No..go away…please!"
He laughed uncontrollably before he lunged at her snarling. As his fangs pierced her neck, she felt a hand on her shoulder
and a deep voice saying,
"Wake up! Mina, wake up!"
She opened her eyes with a start and looked up at the figure clad in red. She began to weep with her head in her hands.
"Master, I think it's time you told me that story you mentioned in the hospital." He said.
Alucard's point of view.
He was resting down stairs in his room, watching the T.V when he felt it again. That power that he had felt in the girls' dorm
assaulted his senses. Reaching out with his mind, he found the source of the power was in his masters' room. He cursed as
he rose up through the ceiling to stand in front of her door. He tried to step through and collided with the door. He cursed
again as he remembered his masters' first rule: do not enter my room with out permission. He listened intently and heard a
voice say
"Do you remember me?"
When his master did not respond, he was sure it was safe to assume that she was asleep. He waited for several minutes,
but only silence followed that one comment. He was frustrated because he could not use his third eye to look into the room.
His senses where clouded by the power that emitted from her room. All of a sudden, he heard her moan, then scream. He
pounded on the door and even shot the door handle off, but he could still not get the door open.
"Alucard! Help me! Please, help!" She yelled, thus allowing him to enter her room.
His gun was drawn but he felt the power had left this room just a moment before. His master was writhing on the bed
screaming. He reached over and grabbed her shoulder and tried to wake her up.
"Wake up! Mina, wake up!"
She opened her eyes with a start and looked up at him. She began to weep her poor heart out.
"Master, I think it's time you told me that story you mentioned in the hospital." He said.