Chapter 11: Two Days

A lot can change in two days. All I can think about is how I should not have let her walk home alone. She insisted saying she needed time to think. I know it's my fault and I should have followed her.

Now she is missing. I believe the person who took her is the same evil person who killed Robert and kidnapped his sister Susan. No one agrees with me but I'm sure I'm right.

I have just received word that now her brother Caleb has gone missing as well and my friends still doubt that the disappearances are connected. How could they not be?

All that I know is I don't know how to go on without her. I need to find her.

I never thought I could love someone so much. My father did not love me, and my mother worried for me, but how do I know she loved me? I don't. And I won't ever. Because she is dead. I never knew what this kind of love could feel like.

Tris has truly always been the girl for me. I lost her when I was young and now I have lost her again. I will find her. I have to find her.

Tris POV

I wake up with a strong headache and inhale the scent of blood and cement. My sight is blocked but I soon realize that there is cloth shielding my eyes. My hands are tied as are my feet. I clear my head and listen for any hint of my location. My police training has taught me to observe with my senses other than my eyes. Instead I focus on what I don't hear. There are no cars honking, no voices yelling, not even the sound of someone else breathing. I feel a chill down my spine as I understand that I am alone and no one is coming for me.


PLEASE DON'T HATE ME. I don't have a great excuse...but I did read most of the Mortal Instruments books and I highly recommend them! I saw the movie today and was a little disappointed but oh well. Life goes on. Sorry for the long wait and the short length of this chapter. Action and suspense coming soon!

THANKS FOR READING SO FAR