So, I am sorry it took me so long to update but it is for two reasons

1) I have hit a serious wall of writers block

2) I was waiting until it hit 10 comments but I finally broke down to update

Cyborg: Pushover...

Danny: lay off, man... bot... I don't know

Cyborg: *grumbles*

Anyways...

First comment goes to *drum-roll*

Ninuhuju

So many misunderstandings. Poor Raven. She's been hit with the most of them.

Longest was... once again

jim89

wow longest comment without trying, which is funny given the ones I usually do
these seem rather short compared to some I post

so Frostbite is now now when the scene, Danny's cool with things but Raven is having a form of meltdown too much to take in at once. get here has been a roller coaster ride
for Raven. Worse, she's fighting and she probably been told about spirits possibly them being all evil or untrustworthy and natural fear of the unknown ghost's if you will.

Worse her powers might be affected by the zone itself, they may be emptying her empathic abilities
to epic me mad levels

I guess until they have time to talk about or freak out. we will not know

We shall see

my favorite comment came from

Guest

DO IT!

I don't know what he/she is referring to but it was

... ummm, my sister just came into my room and told me she was learning to read palms and asked if she could read mine, so I held out my hand and after a moment of concentration said, "Bruh... you're a nerd"

How do I respond to that!?

ummm, I am just going to start the story now...

Danny: 'bout time...

Me: shut it... or I will lock you in Pandora's Box

Danny: *shuts up*

Chapter 11

(Danny)

"Raven? Raven!? c'mon Raven... wake up... NOW"

I looked to Frostbite for guidance but in the midst of the confusion the big guy had slipped out of the room. In the part of my mind that was not yet delirious I wondered how a giant snow-ice yeti ghost could move so quietly... but mostly I was freaking out about Raven. I heard a huge crash from the direction of the lab. It took all of my self-control to set Raven on the bed and go to the lab to find out what happened. I stepped through the door and into utter chaos. The first thing I saw was a warrior of the Far Frozen Flying from one end of the room to the next, then I saw the attacker, The man who haunts my nightmares, Slade. For a second I stood there, shocked, but that was all it took; In an instant Slade had me wrapped in an irritating (If not painful) net. Unable to move and with all my friends lying unconscious around me I had no help. I saw Slade's one visible eye twinkle behind his mask.

"well well well, I was not expecting you to be here."

I refused to answer, instead I watched as he searched the lab, overturning desks and chairs like he were moving paper. Finally I could not stand it anymore and said, "What are you looking for?"

Slade stopped and turned to me, "Oh, are we speaking now? Well if you must know, I am looking for a certain map."

"A map? Where of? China? Ireland? Jump City? Or is it the map to where ever it is you lost your freaking mind?

"Very funny young man, but you know what map I am looking for... and if you don't tell me where that lumbering oaf hid it... well, I may just have to give a bit more poison to your friend in the other room."

"Poison? What poison?"

"Oh, she will be fine as things stand now, but unless you do as I say... she will get a lethal dosage."

Let me tell you from experience, there is nothing quite like a friend in trouble to give you a great idea

I said, "Prisoner swap!"

"What, that is hardly a location?"

"No, prisoner swap means we trade. Info for Info."

"And what info could you possibly want from me? I have nothing you want."

"Well, where did you get the Ecto-weapons?"

"Oh, just from an old friend of mine... In fact, you may know him... His name is Vlad... Vlad Masters."

How does He always manage to get in the way? I asked myself, then noticed Slade looking at me expectantly.

I sighed, "Fine, just leave Raven alone. There is a loose panel in the floor over by the window"

Slade walked over to the window and bent down to examine the tiles and when he stood up he turned to me, "I thought we had made a deal Danny?"

"What can I say? I am just a kid after all..." With that I let loose a long burst of My ghostly wail that sent Slade flying through the window and off into the Ghost Zone. But looking out I did not see the swirling green of the Ghost Zone, But the inky blackness of a too-clear-to-be-real starry night sky, then I fell asleep.

(Raven)

I was Home. In my bed, my room, and I finally felt safe again. I got up, got dressed and went out to the kitchen to make some tea. Danny was already up, and was sitting there at the table reading a book and drinking some coffee. When he saw me he just smiled and muttered something about the dead walking the earth. The alarm went off and Robin came into the room saying, "Titans! Trouble!"

We all ran out of the room together. The fight was pretty simple... Dr. Light was looking the other way and Danny dropped a brick on his head.

Cyborg Whooped and called out, "yo, Danny... gonna kiss your Girlfriend?"

I turned and said, "wait, Danny has a girlfriend? Who?"

Danny looked hurt, Starfire looked at me in awe, while Cyborg and Beast boy looked at me like I was crazy.

"ummmm, you are Rae..."

Well, I am sorry to those of you who actually commented on the last chapter that this chapter was so short, but I will start posting longer chapters when more people start commenting (I'm serious, comments are very motivational).

Also, In a comment BringbackDannyPhantom asked that if I did not make it to 600 followers if I would still make a sequel, so if I reach 1,234 comments by the end of this story OR 600 followers then i will make the sequel.

now as I mentioned earlier I have hit a huge case of writers block so in your comment I want you to post an Idea of what you want to see coming up in the story and a guess as to what is going on in the story right now