Lord of Bijuu chapter 10.5
Guest chapter 9 . Nov 21
Holy shit man, the stupidity shown in the chapter itself is just astounding. There is NO civilian council, retard. The clan heads don't even sit on the so called council meetings, only the hokage, the advisors, Shikaku and the Anbu commander. And yes, I'm saying this from canon. This sort of cliche can be non-retarded to no one in my opinion.
And Sasuke-sama? What the fuck? WHere has it been shown in canon that Sasuke was worshiped by the civilians? From what are you deducing all of these things. It seems to me that you have just read waaay too many cliche ridden fanfics and are considering it canon.
Oh, and they are just banishing Naruto, is it? So yeah, the kid is a jinchuuriki, he is the son of the yellow flash, and the might be the last uzumaki for anyone who gives a fuck, lets just banish him in the most cliche manner possible! Its not like he'll want revenge or anything.
I know that my review wont affect how you write the story. Most probably, you will simply continue writing in the same cliche ridden manner with no logic, and you will get tons of positive reviews from the thousands and thousands of morons coming to this site to promote cliches,
The chapter was crap. wont be continuing..
This is what I found late last night on my reviews list. I am not mad, however, I would like to point out a few things to people who may feel the same as this person, I am here respond to this person's... complaint. First and foremost, he mentions that there is no Civ. Council in the Canon. But, this is not Canon. This is not a canon fanfiction. This doesn't take place in the normal Naruto universe. This has a Civ. council because I want it to be. For this fanfiction, I am god.
Answering his second complaint, the Civ's are practically worshipping him for the effect on Sasuke's ego. The bigger the ego, the bigger the asshole, and the harder he'll fall. It's all for the sake of the story. plus he's a giant asshole in the canon.
He then complains about the civs. attempting to banish Naruto, who is a Jinchuuriki, and the son of the yellow flash, and the last known Uzumaki. Naruto is not the most liked person even in the canon. Added to the fact that the Kyuubi killed tons of people and their families, it is understandable that they want to banish and or kill him. Oh, and he will get revenge on the assholes.
That is basically all I have to say and I would like to highlight whoever wrote this and say that you have just called under 20,000 people morons. I hope you see this so you can see how your logic is flawed and at least apologize to the people you called stupid. I'll try to get the next chapter up as soon as we can.