I thought while I am waiting for the washing to be done I can write another chapter to this amazing fic (that was sarcasm at its best)
But yes thank you for the second review so I shall now dedicate this chapter to you both as you are pretty awesome in my eyes :) (Even if my story does suck are you are just being nice)

I wrote the last chapter at like 8 in the morning and had already been up for two hours so I decided by this afternoon at half 2 that I needed my afternoon fix of writing and this would have to do.

Hope it's better, I have some ideas now :D

Chapter 11

Max POV

Ok, so we had been 'following' Angel for what seemed like hours, it was not actually hours but because I got immensely irritated after 2 minutes of Total humming Bach or whatever and of Nudge talking non-stop and then Gazzy leaving us one of his 'gifts' (Guys let me tell you here, if you are at the back of a line and someone ahem passes wind then you are going to get the worst of it) Fang and I literally had to hold our noses for five minutes before the smell was kind of bearable, plus we were in fear that our noses would drop off.

This was not the unpredictable part, I am guessing you all knew something like this was going to happen?

But yes so we got 'there'

By 'there' I mean the place which Iggy had just blown up, the place that actually looked like a house of some kind. Uhm in the middle of no freaking where, in the middle of a huge grassy plain a house of all things. It was not even old or derelict or anything, I would have expected it to be run down, if there was one, empty, windows broken, door of its hinges but no this house looked brand-spanking-new.

I also did not understand what had been blown up

Max, there was like a big wall in the way and it was really tall and had spiky wire on the top and we threw a stick at it and the stick got blasted back by one hundred feet or something. So we blew it up and found this house

Here Angel practically beamed in my head.

'Ok guys are we all here?'

I got 5 varies of yes one which consisted of yes ma'am but I decided to let that one drop. But I also got a squeal so being the caring mother hen I am decided to go check it out, or rather just looked at Total.

'Yes?'

'Akila' he practically wailed 'She is not here'

Oh sh........ shoot

'Ok heads up everyone, who was the last one to see Akila?'

'Not me'

'Nope'

'I don't know, how would you know if you were the last person to have seen someone? Anyone could have seen them after you or like if you were the last no one before you would have written their names down and th......'

Only Nudge could get a whole paragraph out of a yes or no question, simple isn't it? Apparently not

So I did the only thing I could think of and looked at Fang.

He was thinking, hair covering his left eye and looked straight at me.

'Was she taken when we were?' Oh he is referring to the white light incident, well let's see was she there when we were at the lake?

Yes Max, because she was chasing us

That's right, so she should theoretically be around here somewhere.

'Max what do we do?'

I looked at Gazzy and his trusting blue eyes, dang, plan Max plan.

Got it! Here I felt like giving myself a high five, which I never do although I do deserve some gratitude once in a while.

'We will ask Angel if she can feel her mind' I answered simply

We all turned to look at Angel

No pressure Sweetie, I thought at her, she smiled at me warmly before closing her eyes to concentrate.

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Well this was tense, ten minutes of non-stop searching and Angel was getting tired, I could see it in her face but she did not want to let Total down.

Gazzy had flopped onto the grass and was lying there with Iggy talking about something I most probably did not want to know about.

Nudge was just humming to herself, plaiting her hair and Fang and I were sat together just looking at Angel and occasionally sneaking glances at one another.

Total was sitting upright right in front of Angel and let me tell you, if you thought dogs could not cry then you were wrong, very wrong.

He had little tears streaming down his face. They were going to have their wedding a couple months after we saved Mom but we never had the time, what with all the 'saving the world' and stuff.

I dropped Fang's hand, he looked at me, so I kissed him on the nose and walked over to Total. I just had a feeling that what he was going through was in actual fact the hardest thing, the pain on his heart must have been unbearable. I knew, because if I ever lost Fang somehow this is exactly how I would feel so lost and empty.

I picked Total up and I cuddled him close

'Don't worry Total, I promise you we will find her, even if we have to go out flying to search for her I will bring her back to you'

He licked me in the face and I had second thoughts about picking him up then, so I carefully lowered him to the ground and returned to Fang's side.

That was when Angel decided to open her eyes

'I've found something'

Total nearly had a heart attack

'But I don't know if it is Akila, it's really faint and the thoughts are all jumbled up'

Angel came over to me and sat in my lap, giving me a hug, she was knackered

'Well done Sweetie, we will see if she is closer in the morning'

For an answer Angel just started to breath a regular pattern, telling me she had fallen asleep.

'Guys' I whispered oh so quietly

Four pairs of eyes were tuned onto me, well 3 but the fourth was not far off

'Can you go check out the house? Angel needs a bed. But if anything happens you will get out of there straight away and blow the damn thing up. Ok?

'Wait Max, you are giving us your permission to blow something up?' Iggy looked shocked, in fact he may have paled a bit

'Only if it is dangerous you idiot' I shot him a look but of course, it was wasted on him.

He then smacked a loud, high five with Gazzy, oh dear boys will be boys.

I turned my head to the left and looked Fang deep in the eyes, be careful I was saying or I will kick your butt from here to next Tuesday

He replied with a look that said, how do you even know what the day is?

I gave him my death glare and he responded with a smile that brightens up my world.

'Ok' he whispered in my ear sending shivers down my spine, he smirked, blew me a kiss and walked towards the others.

'We will be fine' and with that he gathered up Gazzy, Nudge and Iggy (Iggy had his hand slightly touching Fang's belt loop) and they walked towards the house.

Ok guys was that ok? Longest ever chapter :) Have ideas for the next uhm four chapters so hopefully you people will read and review, if not then I am not too fussed but it would be nice to know how many people actually like my story.

But yeah the washing is done and now I shall hang it on the line. Next chapter probably sometime tomorrow, and then the next Tuesday evening :) Hopefully anyway.

Thanks to my reviewers again 3