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rainstripe3001: Thanks! I'm always asking people who haven't wrote fics to write one so… Please oh please write a fic! I'm not into blackmailing, so I won't go… write a fic, or I won't add another chapter LOL! Nah, just joking, thanks for faving me! :
Runningfur: To online friends *pawfive* wait… you don't live in New York? Anyway, TO ICECLOUD *cheers* I read your fanfic! :D
I wish two people could write a fanfic… like 'Jaywhisker's Journey' by Mangoflame & - someone else… it's sad that you can't! Do you mind if I copied the game off ur profile and pasted it on mine with different cats? I 3 Foxy Woxy
Cinderheart's kits will be born in the last chapter
Spottedivy: MousexIce… what else is there, her and Toadstep? Oh wait their niece and aunty ooops! And Thornclaw, I have him planned and his kits (Oh crap did I just say that?)
Fd: Ummmmmmm, what?
AelitaOfTheWolves: I need to pm you… 2 seconds!
Suntalon: Thanks, I thought that was a good idea, to bring back memories
Lala: Um (Not being rude) Seedpaw is a girl, her and Lilypaw are females… go to her/his wiki page… where does it say she's a boy? :/ Thanks! Here is the update! If she is a boy… omg I never knew! :P
Snowsong of SnowClan: Bumblestripe's POV coming up next!
Hollyflame: I love cliffies, but then I hate them… I update every 10 reveiws usually
Please vote on the poll, in my profile! It is about Cherrypaw's warrior name… I will do one on Molepaw next once I've decided on Cherrypaw's
Then next, maybe I will do Lilypaw and Seedpaw… then Amberpaw, Dewpaw, Snowpaw when they become apprentices
*Yawn* I know where I am going to end this story… I think either when Cinderheart's kits become apprentices or are born, then I will make the sequel!
Please tell me your favourite singer/dancer/DJ cuz I am bored, and might use it for later, and your favourite song for them! Etc. Katy Perry- Part Of Me
Dovewing watched Lionblaze pad back into camp, he didn't stare at anyone, just walked straight to the nursery
I wonder what happened to him? Maybe… Maybe!
She cast her senses out, and found Brackenfur and Sorreltail hunting, Cherrypaw and Molepaw scattering through the forest with Lilypaw and Seedpaw
And then she found Icecloud sitting by the lake, she could only just make out "Oh Lionblaze!"
Then she realized shockingly Icecloud must've told Lionblaze something! Like she likes him she jumped to conclusion
She called out loudly "Lionblaze!" and a golden head popped out of the nursery
"Come here, I need to ask you something," she saw the shock and nervousness in his eyes
The nervousness in his eyes makes it look like he returned those feelings! Did he really betray Cinderheart for Icecloud?
He sat down beside her, shuffling his paws "What?"
"I saw you, and Icecloud," she felt him stiffen "Why?" she questioned
Lionblaze's whiskers twitched "Don't tell Cinderheart! She'll go off her tail!" Lionblaze hissed softly
Oh StarClan! He did do it, he loves Icecloud!
"How could you betray Cinderheart, she is expecting your kits for StarClan's sake!" she spat softly
Lionblaze looked shocked and tilted his head "What do you mean?"
"Telling Icecloud you love her!"
Lionblaze twitched his nose "She said she loved me, and she didn't know I was there, so you shut up, I accidently eavesdropped on her! I would never betray Cinderheart!" his voice was horrified
Oops, she thought in shock
"Perhaps, in the future, you should stop being so nosy! Do you watch every cat, snoop huh?"
Dovewing growled, shoving her muzzle into his face "Shut up! I've never snooped on a cat, I'm just making sure you don't hurt Cinderheart! She's a good friend to me, and I would never want to see her hurt!"
She saw Lionblaze's claws unsheathe, and both the cats held their ground… little did they know, all eyes were on them and Bramblestar was slowly padding towards them
"Lionblaze! Dovewing!" his stern voice broke into her thoughts, causing her to jump back
Lionblaze gave her a mocking look that she read as Ha! You scaredy mouse!
"Stop behaving like kits! If I see this again, you'll both be back to apprentice duties for a moon! Have I made myself clear?" his voice was icy
"Yes Bramblestar," they both meowed and Dovewing walked towards Bumblestripe, who was staring horrified the moment she was allowed to walk away, while Lionblaze followed Bramblestar
Bumblestripe lay down, Dovewing beside him… "What was that all about?" Bumblestripe asked, his green eyes confused
"Just a quarrel," she told him, however much she was angry at Lionblaze, she wouldn't reveal the secret for Icecloud's sake
Bumblestripe didn't look convinced, but he said nothing "Would you like to go for a walk? Maybe go hunting?"
Dovewing gave his muzzle a lick "Course," she meowed
Out of the corner of her eye, she saw Lionblaze exiting Bramblestar's den, his face a look of complete worry when he saw her with Bumblestripe
I'm not telling him!
He hurried back to the nursery where his mate was waiting
Starlight was reflected off the lake "Remember the first time we came here, when you just became a warrior?"
Dovewing nodded, but she was too busy casting out her senses
"Breezepelt, why did we run away?" she saw a black she cat "Because Nightcloud, the clans hate us!"
"They hate us both! What did I do?" she growled, and then she saw a glint in Breezepelt's eyes
She gasped "Nightcloud and Breezepelt, I hear them!" she growled
"Nearby or further away," Bumblestripe asked curiously
"Far away, but-but I think Nightcloud is in trouble!" she pointed out, looking towards the WindClan border
"How do you know?" Bumblestripe asked "Breezepelt's going to kill her!" she shrieked
Dovewing took off flat out towards the WindClan border, splashing through the stream and leaping out the other side, when she realized Bumblestripe was on her tail
"Where are they?" he panted
"The Moonpool!"
Dovewing ran faster and she heard yells from WindClan cats, but she didn't stop
A former clan cat is in danger, I must get to her before time runs out!
Bumblestripe was falling behind, and Dovewing began to hear fighting
Oh StarClan!
She raced faster and flew out of the bushes, landing on Breezepelt's back "Stay away from her you foxheart!" she screeched, and his ears pricked up in surprise
"I'm going to kill all three of you," he snarled as Bumblestripe raced up the slope
Nightcloud had scars down her pelt and blood was dripping off her "ThunderClan cats!" she stammered
Bumblestripe raced up to her and Dovewing cried "Bumblestripe, go get Jayfeather- wait, get Kestrelflight!" the pale grey tom looked reluctant to leave his mate, but then the well-muscled tom sped off
Dovewing ducked as Breezepelt aimed a blow for her ears
Unfortunately, Dovewing was too busy dodging the loner's moves to attack
"Lionblaze will hurt! Seeing his apprentice dead!" Breezepelt had an evil grin that made her shiver
Dovewing snarled "It'll be your friends- oh wait! I forgot, you don't have any!" she spat, baring her teeth
Breezepelt snarled, and leapt at her, bowling her over… pushing her down the rocky slope… she felt rocks stab into her pelt "Ow!" she screamed in pain, but when she met the grass at the bottom, Breezepelt had already leapt
StarClan take pity on me! Give me the strength I need
She flung herself upwards, crashing into Breezepelt, sending him crashing to the ground
I did it!
The smoky pale grey she cat felt success bubble in her chest "Lost your fighting skills huh?" Dovewing mocked him, claws flexing into the grass
Breezepelt's eyes were flared with anger as he leapt, but this time, Dovewing wasn't as prepared and she was flattened into the ground
He kept pushing her head into the ground… she began to feel weaker, and weaker
Goodbye… were her last thoughts
Is she dead? Is she alive? Did Dovewing just risk her life Nightcloud?
I felt I should bring them in a bit… :)
R.I.P Dovewing (If she's dead)
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"We don't know that they are traitors! We should be concentrating on the battle, not trying to guess who our enemies are!" Dovewing exclaimed. "We should be concentrating on the battle, not trying to guess who our enemies are."
Blackstar frowned. "But what if they tell our plans to their Dark Forest allies?"
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