Replying to my reviewers now!
Lumigo akvo9504
Hmm, yep I'm glad that you deeply enjoyed it. I do also hope that you'll enjoy this chapter as well.
HunterHQ
First of Dragons is a good card I might consider it, just not now. The Gravekeepers are hardly used so I figured give them a comeback. As for the Meklord emperor ark, not sure.
And I'm pretty fine with just doing 5d's. The whole idea of alternate universe's would give me a headache.
Lelouch of Zero
That was the exact idea my friend and trust me you will love what will be coming later on in the story itself.
Time Thief
Very glad that you enjoyed the chapter. And yes, it has some flaws but don't we all? Hope you enjoy this chapter as well.
Bobby Jenkins
Oh don't worry about that, I already got the right idea in mind for that.
Also don't know a thing about Kamen Rider, so I'm not interested in it. On top of that Wouldn't even know where to start with a crossover with that and my Hero Academia. I'm just going with what flows with my brain.
Chapter 11
The Great Maju's
Only about a while ago the duel between Rin had successfully defeated Avdol and his Gravekeeper deck. But now it was time for the next duel with Kara Lumen emerged from the left and her opponent a very short round man.
MC did his thing.
" On my right is a duelist who comes from another country as Avdol but he is from America. Ladies and gentlemen Turner Miles! And on my left is one of duel academy's finest students standing alongside Desmond Storm it is Kara Lumen! "
Both duelists rose from their separate pads now in plain view for the crowd to watch.
Turner chuckled. " I've seen better versions of you on tv. "
" Oh yeah? " Kara inquired. " You wanna know what I like about pigs? They don't talk! " the orange head insulted making the short round male grit his teeth in anger.
" Let's Duel! "
Kara: Life Point's 4000
Turner: Life Point's 4000
" I'll go first! " Turner then drew his first card.
" Now to get this thing started I throw in Reflect Bounder! " from a portal emerged a strange machine that was equipped with multiple mirrors.
(Reflect Bounder Level 4 Atk. 1700 Def. 1000)
" Then I'm gonna lay in a facedown to end my turn. Your move girly " the short round man said mockingly making a tick mark appear on Kara's forehead.
( This guys ticking me off already! So I'm gonna put this short punk in his place. ) The orange haired female teen said to herself as she drew her first card and contiued her line of thought.
(But, tubby played a good card, if I do attack it with a stronger monster I'd only damage myself more. So I better keep it safe for now. )
" I will now discard Hecatrice to the graveyard to add Valhala Hall of The Fallen to my hand. " A brief image of a statue appears and afterwards she draws a card that was picked from her deck.
" Then I'll play the spell itself! " a holographic temple appears with Kara standing right in the middle of it.
" Next I'll play its special ability, when I have no monsters on the field I can special summon a fairy type monster to the field from my hand. So enter Tethys, Goddes of Light! "
A light came from the temple and from it emerged a female angel with white hair wearing a white dress and had two large feathered wings of the same color.
(Tethys, Goddess of Light Level 6 Atk 2400 Def. 1800)
" I'll then summon Gellenduo in defense mode! " a portal opened releasing two little angel like monsters one pink and one green.
(Gellenduo Level 4 Atk. 1800 Def. 0 )
" Now I'll end my turn with two face downs. " Kara said as two facedown holographic cards appeared on her side of the field.
" Tch, and here I thought you would take the bait, what a shame " Turner said as he dew a card.
" I'll now summon Infernal Dragon in attack mode! " from a portal emerged a large powerful looking dragon with a trident tail giving off a roar.
(Infernal Dragon Level 4 Atk. 2000 Def. 0)
" Now I'll have my Reflect Bounder attack those puny little angels! " after the command was given the machine fired concentrated energy beams from its mirrors hitting the small angels.
But instead of being destroyed they still remained on the field.
" What?! How come there not gone?! " the little round man snapped.
" That's Gellenduo's ability. They can't be destroyed in battle. But when I do take damage it goes to the graveyard. You didnt think I wouldn't summon a good defense since you have some tough monsters in there did you? " Kara mocked as Turner gritted his teeth.
" I'll end with a facedown. "
" And now my trap Solemn Wishes. Each time I draw a card I gain 500 life points. Now it's my turn! " Kara drew her next card.
Kara Life Point's 4000+4500
" Tethys ability activates, since I drew a fairy type monster I'm able to draw a card by revealing 1 of the cards in my hand. So gaze at The Agent of Mercury. " She revealed the one card in her hand. " So thanks to her I can draw another card. " Kara drew 1 card and gained more life points.
Kara Life Point's 4500+5000
" Then I set The Agent of Wisdom Mercury in defense mode! "
From a portal emerged a blue angel like being holding a book of some kind of book kneeling down.
(The Agent of Wisdom Mercury Level 4 Atk. 0 Def. 1700)
" Then I play Spell Absorption now each time we play a spell I gain 500 life points. That's all " Kara said with Turner now drawing another card.
" I now sacrifice Infernal Dragon and Reflect Bounder to advance summon Maju Garzet! " the two monsters formed into a large orb and after that a strange monster appeared half of it was skeletal while the other half of it's body was covered in fur.
(Maju Garzet Level 7 Atk. ? Def. 0)
" What's it's attack points? " Kara asked.
" The amount of the monsters that were used to summon it becomes the total attack " Turner answered with Maju Garzet gaining an aura.
(Maju Garzet Level 7 Atk. 0+ 3700)
" Then I equip Big Bang Shot! Thanks to the effect it gains 400 attack points and is able to do piercing damage.
(Maju Garzet Atk. 3700+4100)
" And my life point's get a little boost. "
Kara Life Point's 5000+5500
" So what? Your still gonna get it! Now attack her Agent of Mercury! " after a brief moment the monster vomited on The Agent of Mercury making it melt into a small puddle.
Kara Life Points 5500-3100
" I end my turn, beat that girly. "
Hearing that really ticked off Kara as she drew a card.
Kara Life Point's 3100+3600
(Okay, then time for a little payback ) the orange haired female said to herself. " I now play the spell Trade Off! All I have to is send one card my hand to the graveyard to draw another card " Kara selected 1 card from her hand to the grave and then drew another card to replace it.
Kara Life Point's 3600+4100
" Next since it was added to my hand by a card effect I'm able to special summon Watapon in defense mode! " from a portal emerged a cute little pink creampuff.
(Watapon Level 1 Atk. 200 Def. 300)
" Next I summon The Agent of Miracles Jupiter! " another portal opened up brining fourth a dark skinned male angel covered in red markings wearing a robe and had large feathered wings.
(The Agent of Miracles Jupiter Level 4 Atk. 1800 Def. 1000)
" Now I play Jupiter's effect! By removing 1 of The Agent's layed to rest in my graveyard one of my monsters gains 800 attack points till the end of my turn. And I'm choosing Jupiter. "
A light then shined upon the male angel showing his power rose.
(The Agent of Miracles Jupiter Atk. 1800+2600)
" Hate to break it you but Maju Garzet's attack points are higher then them puny little angels " Turner said pointing towards the mutant like monster.
(Maju Garzet Atk. 4100)
" Not for long it " Kara said as she then played a spell. " Go Skill Swap! "
Kara Life Points 4100+4600
" Skill Swap? "
" This spell is real handy. The how it works is simple, I choose a face up attack position monster on my side of the field in order to swap attack points with one another! So Jupiter is gonna get a bit more power thanks to your Garzet " Kara said as a lines of electricity attached themselves to the two monsters giving off their own energy.
(The Agent of Miracles Jupiter Atk. 2800+4100)
(Maju Garzet Atk. 4100-2800)
" Go Jupiter! Attack Maju Garzet! " upon command the dark skinned angel obliterated the mutant with a ray of light.
Turner Life Point's 4000-2700
" Now here's a direct attack from Tethys! "
" I'll play my trap card! Damage Vaccine Q Max! Now all damage I take from battle or card effects let me gain life points instead " Turner said as the light was then absorbed coating the little round man in energy.
Turner Life Points 2700+5100
" Tch, I'll end my turn and with that done Jupiter's attack points return to normal " Kara said as the angel's power decreased.
(The Agent of Miracles Jupiter Atk. 4100-1800)
" Talk about a hard start folks! Both Duelists are going toe to toe pulling out all the stops! But now let's see what else Turner has in his arsenal! " MC said addressing the crowd.
( Oh I'll give them a show alright ) Turner said to himself as he drew another card.
" I summon Goblin Attack Force! " from a portal emerged a small platoon of goblins wielding spiked clubs.
(Goblin Attack Force Level 4 Atk. 2300 Def. 0)
" Next I'll have them attack your Jupiter! " After the command was given the goblins swarmed the angel before it created an explosion before they all went to sleep.
Kara Life Points 4600-4100
" Your Goblin's might be tough but they go to defense mode after they attack " Kara noted as a holographic facedown card appeared on his side of the field.
" I know, now it's your move " the short round man said.
" My move " Kara drew her next card and gained more life points.
Kara Life Point's 4100+4600
" I now summon Victoria! " from a portal emerged a blonde woman wielding a staff and rode on a four headed dragon with golden scales and had two large wings keeping it in the air with the heads roaring away.
(Victoria Level 4 atk. 1800 def. 1500)
" And now Victoria's ability now activates once per turn I can special summon 1 dragon type monster from your graveyard to my side of the field. So that means your Infernal Dragon joins my team for the time being " the orange haired female said as a portal of light appeared with the same black greenish dragon from earlier coming fourth.
" And now I'll have Victoria attack your Goblin Attack Force! " the orange haired female teen commanded as the heads gathered energy and released their breath attacks onto the goblins.
" I'll play the trap Zero Gravity! Now all of our monsters battle positions are changed! Meaning my Goblins are safe and they get back into attack mode! " Turner said as a force of gravity made all of Kara's monsters go into defense while the group of goblin's got into attack mode.
" Tch, I'll switch Tethys in atk position to end my turn. "
" My move " the short round man said drawing another card and grinned. " I now sacrifice my Goblin Attack Force to advance summon The Great Maju Garzet! " the group of goblins turned into a rainbow portal and before a more mutated bigger version of the original Maju Garzet appeared before them giving off a mighty roar.
( Great Maju Garzet Level 6 Atk. ? Def. )
" And just like the other guy it's attack points become doubled that of the monster used to sacrifice it! Goblin Attack Force had 2300 so that makes him 4600! "
The monster gained energy showing his power rose.
(Great Maju Garzet Atk.+4600)
" Heh, your monster might be tough but thanks to Victoria you can't attack Tethys you'll have to attack her instead " Kara said making him angry.
" I've had enough of these angels! Go Great Maju Garzet attack that rip off dragon rider! " the short round man commanded with the monster roaring away making Victoria shatter into pieces.
" I'll now end my turn with a face down! " Turner said now making a facedown holographic card appear.
" My turn! " Kara drew her next card with her life points increasing.
Kara Life Points 4600+5100
" I'll play the spell Teraforming! Now I'm able to add a field spell from deck straight to my hand! " the orange head said as she drew a card sticking out from her deck and thanks to spell absorbstion her life points kept increasing.
Kara Life points 5100+5600
" And now I play The Sanctuary in the Sky! " all of the sudden some sort of castle temple appeared with a bunch of clouds surrounding the area.
Kara Life points 5600+6100
" I now summon The Agent of Mystery-Earth! " from a portal emerged a friendly angel with white hair wielding a scepter and had wore robes with three different colors matching planet earth's view from space.
(The Agent of Mystery-Earth Level 2 Atk. 1000 Def. 800)
" And thanks to him I can add Master Hyperion from my deck to my hand since the sanctuary in the sky is on the field. " Kara drew a card.
" Next up I play the spell Level Doubler! By sending 1 card from my hand to the graveyard I can select 1 level 4 or below monster on my side of the field and double it's level so my Agent of Mystery is now a level 4. "
(The Agent of Mystery-Earth Level 2+4)
Kara Life points 6100=6600
" Okay, now I tune Agent of Mystery-Earth with your Infernal Dragon! " the angel then raised its scepter into the air before it became a series of digital rings that surrounded the dragon and into a set of four stars aligning with one another and became a pillar of light.
" I'll now synchro summon Avenging Knight Parsath! " Once the light died down an angelic centaur appeared wearing blue gold outlined armor and wielded a sword and shield while it's skin glittered like diamonds.
(Avenging Knight Parasath Level 8 Atk. 2600 Def. 2100)
" Now I'll play his ability! Once per turn I can switch the battle positon of one monster you control and I choose your Great Maju Garzet! " the angel then put it's sword and shield together making the powerful monster kneel down.
" Go Parasath attack! " Kara commanded.
" Not today sweet heart! I play my trap card! Wall of Revealing Light! " Turner said before a bright star appeared created a massive wall made out of pure light stopping her monsters attack.
" Oh crap not that card " the teen exclaimed.
" Yes this card. Thanks to this sweet thing your monsters can't attack me if their attack points are lower then the amount of life points I give up and I gave up over 3000. "
Turner Life Point's 5100-2100
" I'll end my turn. "
" Things are heating up! Thanks to his Trap card turner will be able to build up his forces for a price of his precious life points. Just what will Ms Lumen do?! " MC asked the crowd doing his thing.
Turner drew another card.
" I'll now summon Goblin Elite Attack Sqaud! " from a portal emerged a platoon of goblins wearing armor and wielding lances.
(Goblin Elite Attack Sqaud Level 4 Atk. 2200 Def. 1500)
" Then I'll put my Garzet back into attack mode! " the mighty monster stood back up.
" Next I play the spell Goblin Theif! Now I take 500 life points from you "
Kara Life Point's 6600-6100
Turner Life Point's 2100+2600
Kara Life Point's 6100+6600
" Did you forget that my life points still increase? " Kara asked with Turner giving her a silent answer.
" Shut up! " the short round man pouted.
" Next I play Three of a Kind! Now by giving up a thousand life points I can special summon two more copies of one monster I control and negate their effects. "
Turner Life Point's 2600-1600
Kara Life Point's 6600+7100
" So now I get more Goblins! " from two portals emerged two more platoons of the Goblin Elite Attack Sqauds.
(Gobin Elite Attack Sqauds x2 Level 4 Atk. 2200 Def. 1500)
" Next up the spell Double Attack! All I have to do is discard a monster from my hand to the graveyard and select a monster who's level is lower then the discarded monster and the card that I sent to the graveyard is Beast King Barbaros who's a level 8. Which means my Great Maju Garzet can attack twice! "
The monster roared as his power grew.
Kara Life Point's 7100+7600
" Go Great Maju Garzet attack her Avenging Knight! " the stronger version of Maju Garzet then roared once more destroying Kara's monster.
" Next up is that angel of yours! " after that was done it destroyed Tethys.
" Now your I'll have my first Goblin Elite Attack Force wipe out your Watapon! " the first platoon readied their bows before firing at the creampuff killing it in an instant.
" Second and third Goblin Elite Attack Forces attack! " Once the command was given all of the goblins gathered together and readied their bows and fired off multiple arrows that Kara somehow managed to block before they kneeled down do to their effect.
Kara Life Point's 7600-3200
" I'll now end my turn. " The short round man chuckled.
(Just one more turn and I'll be able to bring out the big gun.)
" Wowzers! Talk about a instant brutal comeback! Turner has destroyed a huge chunk of Kara's life points! If it wasn't for her spells and traps this would have been over in an instance! Can she retaliate? Or will she succumb to defeat? " MC asked the crowd who seemed to be really excited by the action taking place.
" My turn " Kara drew her next card with her life points increasing.
Kara Life Points 3200+3700
( Tubby isn't all talk and show he nearly killed me, if it wasn't for the sanctuary in the sky and my other cards I would have bit the dust. )
" Now since my field has no monsters I can use the effect of Valhala Hall of The Fallen in order to special summon WingWeaver from my hand to the field! "
From the temple emerged a pillar of light and afterwards emerged a purple haired female angel with six blue wings.
(WingWeaver Level 7 Atk. 2750 Def. 2400)
" Next up I'll summon The Agent of Creation-Venus in defense mode! " another portal appeared and from that portal emerged another female angel with long flowing blonde hair with her feathered wings the same color along with green dress with white patterns,
(The Agent of Creation-Venus Level 3 Atk. 1600 Def. 0)
" Now I'll use her special ability, by paying 500 life points I can special a Mystical Shine Ball from deck to the field in defense mode! "
Kara Life Points 3700-3200
Then all of the sudden she raised her hands into the air and from it emerged a floating orb made out of light.
(Mystical Shine Ball Level 2 Atk. 500 Def. 500)
" I end my turn "
" That's it? My turn then " Turner then drew his next card.
" Now I sacrifice all of my monsters to advance summon Legendary Maju Garzet! " all of the monsters on Turner's field became a rainbow portal and before long the portal became a much larger and more powerful looking Maju Garzet that had a skeletal like frame, covered in white fur in a few places, had four arms and pair of wings.
(Legendary Maju Garzet Level 8 Atk. 0 Def. 0)
" Now his special ability, it gains the original attack points of all monsters used to sacrifice it all except for his cousin because his attack points were zero as well. "
The massive demon roared as his power grew. (Legendary Maju Garzet Level 8 Atk. 0+6600)
" Go Legendary Maju Garzet attack her Agent of Creation-Venus! "
" Not so fast tubby! " Kara snapped at the round man and revealed a card in her hand.
" I play the effect of Honest! " All of the sudden a male with long orange hair and massive feathered wings appeared giving off a surge of light. " Thanks to his ability when a light attributed monster battles it gains attack equal to the attacking monsters original attack points! "
( The Agent of Creation-Venus Atk. 1600+8200)
Turner Life Point's 2100-500
" My turn! " Kara drew her next card and then smirked. " This is it! I now remove my Agent of Creation Venus! Now enter Master Hyperion! "
A bright light enveloped the female angel and before long a more powerful monster appeared.
It was an angel wearing heavy armor and had wings made out of pure energy.
(Master Hyperion Level 8 Atk. 2700 Def. 2100)
" Ha! You forgot that you can't attack me?! " Turner mocked. " As long as my wall is intact you can't touch me! "
" You think it's all tough? " Kara inquired. " Then let's see it match up to Hyperion. I play his special ability! By removing a 1 light fairy type monster from my graveyard he can destroy 1 card on the field and I choose your wall of revealing light! "
" No you don't! I play my trap Cash Back! Now by paying your life points it negates Hyperions effect! "
" Don't think so! Go! Divine Wrath! When Sanctuary in the Sky is on the field I can play this card and thanks to its power your trap card is negated! "
" What did you say?! " Turner gasped as red energy emitted from the temple that zapped his trap card destroying it followed by Hyperion making the wall shatter to a thousand pieces.
" No! Not my wall! "
" Oh yes! Go Hyperion! End this duel! " On command the angel gathered energy in its chest before firing a beam of light that exploded upon impacting Turner who flew back a few feet.
" This blows... " the short round man muttered as he landed.
Turner Life Points 500-0
" It's all over! After a hard battle Kara Lumen emerges victorious and will be advancing to the Semi Finals! " the MC announced making the crowd cheer with Kara waving her hands in the air showing she was appreciating the attention given to him.
It now changes showing Kara enter the waiting area with Desmond approaching his friend.
" Good dueling out there " the green mowhawk teen said giving her a high five. " That just leaves one last duel. "
" Yeah, mine " Jason spoke up drawing attention to the albino himself.
" Hey, good luck " Desmond called out with Jason returning a thumbs up and as he exited the room with Wilson sneering.
( Stupid Satelite won't get in my way from making that dumb brod pay. I'll show him the reality that stands between both of our worlds. )
To be continued.
OC cards.
Three of a Kind. Spell. Pay a 1000 life points special summon to copies of 1 face up monster on your side of the field and negate their effects.
Well, hope you all enjoyed this chapter since I finally updated, both out of relief and annoyance :p But aside from that I've had a good time at Dave and Busters since I'm now 20 years old. Crazy huh?
Okay, now I'm done,
So if any of you are bored check out my Persona 5 story The Hunters Wake. I know some of you would like it. On top of that I do apologize if this seems to be a bit rushed. But I will begin the next chapter when I have time.