A/N: so another chap done yay me for once I wasn't too lazy to finish my chapter ;P anyways glad other people are faving my fic xD thanx guys xD
REVIEW TIME!!
RedMoonLight009 Wrote:
e!! glomps and nuzzles toto i love it! but damn you sasuke...oh well i got
my revenge during the 3rd part of the exam while sasuke was
hospitalized...lets just say when he wakes up he wont be a man any more x3 OWW!! bit her cheeks and tongue that huwt...toto, strawberry get booboo! crys kiss it make it better? looks up at totoand itachi...you shouldnt ever leave naruto's side! handcuffs naru and ita
together there! OH! and kyo it wasnt your fault what happened to hinata you couldnt stop what happened, but hey she'll be fine huggles
and kyuubi...glomps and smothers with kisses arigato for saving naru and
his kits form sasuke!!
blushes madly hai your stawberry...btw what did you dream about? wondering what her part in your dream was about
To-to:
-blushes- don't worry sasuke's gonna get beat up again later by none other than Kyo herself xD but sshhh!! It's a secret for now
Oh no!! my strawberry is hurt…-kisses cheek and tongue- feeling better? ) -hugs-
Go Kyuubi xD and for some ItaNaru, good thinking, handcuffs are always good xD They won't escape xD
What did I dream? I dreamt about how u were hugging ItaNaru plushies xD and how u were tackling me with hugs over and over again xD
Clueless97 wrote:
aw!! Why didn't you let Kyo finish Sakura off or at least put her into a
coma? I find Sakura to be a annoying, which is why I like Ino better, because she doesn't really tend to fangirl Sasuke as much. The threat Kyuubi made to Sasuke about killing him before he could say he was sorry got me laugh. Then I had this image in my head where Sasuke was trying to say "I'm sorry" but unable to say sorry, because the Kyuubi ends up killing him. Then Naruto gets mad and the Kyuubi's excuse was his hand slipped. It was a lot funnier in my head.Who did Gaara and Lee fight? I'm assuming it wasn't each other since you
didn't mention anyone besides Hinata being hospitalized.ItaNaru is a good pairing, right now those are the only types of fanfics I've
been reading lately. Now it's my OTP, after I ditched SasuNaru for it. I've
been converted woot!! xD
To-to:
Hey don't worry she'll get beat up by Kyo in another chapter so keep on reading cause it may come soon xD and yes Ino doesn't fangirl much on Sasuke xD
Lol! That does sound funny xD DIE SASUKE!!!!!!! DIE!!!!!! Mwuahahahahah!!!
-coughs- anyways, Ino is cool xD
Oh the match about Gaara and lee I will explain in this chap xD
And yes, ItaNaru is a kick ass pairing xD. OTP!!!!!!
black55widow wrote:
I wouldn't have minded more foreplay or more a descriptive lemon but it was very sweet. I think this is a very sweet story. I was wondering why you put this story in the general/ general catagory. I think you might get more hits with romance/angst or romance/hurt/comfort. It is just an idea. The lemon was sweet and good for a first try. It fit very smoothly into the story.
To-to:
thanx dude xD I'm trying to write better lemons since this is my first time writing it anyways thanx for reviewing xD well I'll have to change it then cause I had no idea in wat category to put it in thanx for the tip xD
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Naruto sat on top of the Hokage Monument. He watched the clouds move slowly across the sky. The breeze was wonderful when it hit his skin. He took off his jacket and was currently wearing a black fishnet t-shirt. He knew it wasn't something he would wear, but since he was pregnant and was tired from all the exams, he felt hot most of the times. His blue eyes continued to follow the clouds. He wondered why Hyuuga Neji tried to kill Hinata. It just wasn't right. After the medic nins took Hinata away, he promised he would win against Neji.
After the 3rd exam ended, every one who made it through the exam was paired up with another opponent.
Uzumaki Naruto vs. Hyuuga Neji
Temari vs. Naara Shikamaru
Kankuro vs. Aburame Shino
Gaara vs. Uchiha Sasuke
Those were the matches that were chosen. Kyo and her team decided to forfeit, due to the fact that Kyo had went blind for a while. She said it was a minor side effect. Since she didn't use her Kekkei Genkai in a long time, she said the side effect is temporary blindness. Takeru was the one who suggested to forfeit. If their comrade can't fight, then neither can her teammates. He said he didn't want Kyo to get hurt while she was blind. How can someone fight when he/she is blind? For the most part Naruto agreed, so did everyone else. As stubborn as ever Kyo protested, she wanted to fight. But when Naruto said Hinata would agree with them, she nodded. The next exam wasn't until next month or so. He was in no position to rush.
"You know you shouldn't be here in your position." Naruto looked behind him only to be greeted by a kiss. Naruto leaned into the kiss. Once they departed, Itachi took Naruto in his arms. "How are you holding up?" He asked as he buried his face in the blonde's neck. Naruto giggled. "I'm okay, I just feel a little tired." Naruto wanted to tell Itachi what happened in the forest. He wanted to tell him but he decided not to. Besides, what Kyuubi said to Sasuke was very affective to the younger Uchiha. He wasn't dumb enough try and kill is baby again. Just then Naruto felt a pair of familiar lips nuzzling his neck. He blushed and giggled. "Itachi-" Naruto turned to look into the face he loved but was silenced by a kiss. Naruto just loved the way Itachi would try to be romantic as possible with him. Itachi slid his tongue inside that pretty mouth. Naruto didn't protest, instead he welcomed that skilled tongue of Itachi's. After a few minutes the two broke the kiss . They needed some air. Itachi then hugged his kitsune tight and close. "I love you so much Naruto." He whispered in the blonde's ear. The blonde hugged him tight. "I love you too Itachi. I wouldn't care what everyone says. I juts want to be with you." Just then Naruto felt something wet hit his back. "Itachi?..." Naruto took his lovers shoulders and slowly pushed him back. Naruto's blue eyes stared at his lovers face, shocked. He'd seen Itachi sad but he never saw him cry.
"What's wrong? Did I do something wrong? If I did I'm sorry." Naruto said, was starting to panic now. 'Shit!! Way to go Naruto. You said a little too much.' Naruto started beating himself up. Itachi just nodded. "No you didn't do anything wrong, it's just…It's just that I'm happy that your with me." Itachi shed more tears. Naruto then leaned in and kissed his eyes. He whipped his lover's tears away and kissed his forehead. Itachi once again hugged his blonde lover and buried his face in his neck. Naruto just closed his eyes and enjoyed that moment. After a few minutes of comforting, Itachi carried his kitsune, bridal style and took him home.
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Back in the Hospital Kyo was in Hinata's room, where the young Hyuuga was asleep. Kyo held Hinata's hand. She was worried, the doctor said she was going to be alright but she knew she was still wasn't well. Even though Kyo may be blind for now, she can somehow see Hinata's face pale, lips slightly out of their normal color. Kyo tighten her grip. "Please be okay. I don't want to loose you Hinata." The purple haired teen was in love.
She was in love with Hyuuga Hinata. The girl who belongs to the head family of the Hyuuga Clan. She had struggled in her training, trying to become stronger so she can be as strong as Neji, maybe even more stronger. Kyo, in all her power she has, had supported her. She wanted her to prove her father wrong. Hinata can be strong and not be a burden. Kyo had been training with her since they were kids. She smiled at how sometimes Hinata would be stubborn to, to get things right. That's what Kyo loved about her. Hinata was the shy and quiet type of girl, and when her friends are in danger she would change into battle mode. Hinata was a nice and kind person.
Kyo admired Hinata a lot. She was beautiful in every way. Lavender eyes that would make Kyo say cool, dark navy hair that shone beautifully in the sun. Kind personality and a luscious body. Kyo blushed. 'Getting ahead of myself again.' She mentally thought.
The day was ending as Kyo saw the sun set across the horizon. The colors of orange and purple covered the sky. Kyo sight, "Excuse Miss but visiting time is—" "I know. I got it." The nurse nodded and closed the door. This was the hardest part of the day. Kyo hated it when she had to leave the hospital, and leave Hinata alone. Kyo slowly got up from her chair and slowly traced Hinata's face with her fingers. (A/N: she blind and she's looking for Hinata's lips.) The purple haired teen found her lips and slowly leaned in, and gave her a quick kiss. "I'll be back here tomorrow ASAP." She said. She left the room, trying to be careful not to bump, or knock anything over. She closed the door slowly, and leaned on the door.
She sight…
"How am I suppose to get home now?" She laughed at herself. "May I assist you with that?" A voice said. Kyo looked at the direction the voice came from. "Um….who is that?" Kyo asked. "It's me Kyo-san. Takeru." Kyo blushed a little. "Oh sorry Takeru, I haven't recognized your voice yet." She said while scratching her head. "It's okay. Now may I help you get home?" He said as he took Kyo's hand. The purple haired teen blushed deeper and nodded. "Yes please, if it's not too much trouble." She said. "Not at all, besides I need to speak with you." Takeru and Kyo began walking. "Sure, okay."
Both teens headed out the hospital and into the streets. "What is it you need to talk to me about?" Kyo was curious as to what Takeru had in mind. "Well, I need to talk to you about your… your father" Kyo came to a halt. She got upset a little.
"Takeru, I don't mean to be rude or anything but I don't think there's nothing to discuss about my father." Kyo said.
"I'm sorry if I made you upset but it's important. Kyo your father is not a traitor. I know your thinking that I know nothing of your past or clan, but believe me my parent's know your father and mother for a long time." He said. Kyo was emotionless. It's been 7 years since she last seen her parents. She never went back to her birth place, it was cold and deserted. She knew that her relatives had been scattered around the countries and had probably changed their names. But not Kyo. She had too much pride to change her name. Kuzuki was her mother's last name, and the name Kyo was the name her father had given her. As much as she wanted to change it, she couldn't, her pride wouldn't let her. No matter how much she detested her father, she had a little love for him.
"I know you need to know this Kyo. Your father is alive, and is in hiding in the land of rain." Takeru said as he faced the teen. Kyo wasn't surprised, angry, sad, or anything. She was emotionless. "So that bastard is alive huh? Oh goodie." She said as she laughed. "There's no mistake?" she asked. "No" Kyo just sight. "I'll deal with this tomorrow. I'm tired and I just want to go home." She said as she gripped her hold of Takeru's arm. The older teen nodded and kept walking the girl home. 'I'll find you soon dad, and when I do I'm probably gonna end up killing you.' Kyo mentally thought 'But for now your still alive and living a crazy life.'
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Temari was in her room dozing off. She stared out the window thinking of how the exam went down. Gaara was somewhat going easy on this person known as Lee. The whole match was Very entertaining, except for the part where the whole arena was practically destroyed. Lee had used a technique called Hidden Lotus, while Gaara had tried to avoid the attack with his sand defense. He wasn't very successful in doing so. Every part of the match was breathtaking. In the end the match was a result of a draw. But Lee had been knocked out before Gaara was. And so Gaara moved on to the next exam. Lee was hospitalized because of too much Chakra use. Temari had been shocked when Gaara didn't kill him. Usually Gaara would sometimes kill his opponent or injure them in a very horrible way. This time Gaara just, let Lee go. "I wonder what Gaara was thinking?" The blonde girl said as she scratched her chin. "Well I'll ask him tomorrow seeing as he's probably asleep by now. I should be worrying about my training." She was up against a guy named Shikamaru, and he seemed like a lazy type of guy who hates to do much work. "I have to do my best so. I can't loose no matter what." Temari said as she clenched her fist. "I need to become strong." She said. "But for now I need to take a shower and cook something up for Kankuro, and Kyo." Temari went to take her 1 hour shower. "Think it's time for some total relaxation." She said with a laugh.
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Itachi slowly laid his blonde lover on the bed and watched him giggle. Naruto pulled Itachi forward causing him to fall lightly on the blonde. They both stared at each other with loving eyes. Itachi bough his hand up and stroked the tan smoothed skin. Naruto just leaned in the touch and blushed. "You're so beautiful." The older boy whispered. The blonde blushed deeper and kissed the older boy. The kiss was as sweet as always, the taste of honey and ramen. Itachi broke the kiss. He showered Naruto with kisses leaving love bites in the blonde's neck. Naruto closed his eyes and feeling complete. He had Itachi as his lover and was pregnant with his child. He couldn't be happier in his life. "Why are you crying Naru-chan?" Itachi asked. Naruto opened his eyes and was busy being happy he didn't notice he was shedding tears. The blonde smiled, "oh I just…I guess I'm crying out of happiness." He said as he sealed Itachi lips with a kiss.
Once the kiss was over Itachi had spoken a few words. "No matter what happens, you know I will always be here for you." He said as he kissed Naruto's forehead. "I can always count on you Itachi." Naruto whispered. Bothe boys smiled and cuddled each other.
They stayed silent for awhile. "Itachi?" Naruto asked. "Yes Naruto?" The blonde giggled. "Do you remember that time when you picked me up from the academy and you protected me from those bullies?" Naruto asked as he traced circles in Itachi's chest. "I do remember that."
::Flash Back::
"ITA-CHAAAAAN!!!!!" a small blonde haired boy yelled as he ran out of the academy. Itachi was standing a few feet away and was hugged tightly by Naruto. "How was school today Naruto?" The blonde looked up at the teen and grinned. "It was okay but the best part was that today I got a passing grade for being able to use the substitution jutsu!!" He said, he let go of Itachi and jumped around happy. "I got a good grade for the first time!!!" Naruto said as he put a victory sign. Itachi smiled and. "So you're getting better then. Good work Naruto." Itachi patted the blonde's head earning a big grin from the smaller boy.
As they started walking Naruto was talking how Naruto was doing in school. Itachi just smiled and listened to every word the smaller boy said.
"Come on Itachi let's go eat some ramen!!!" Naruto started running. "I won't eat more than 4 bowls I pro—" Just then the smaller boy fell backwards and landed on his butt. "Itai!" he whispered. "Gomen, I—" Naruto's eyes widened at the sight. There were a few teenagers staring at him with a nasty look.
Naruto got up and ran behind Itachi. Itachi looked straight ahead. "Well look at that. The brat has a babysitter." Said the one who looked older than the other boys. Itachi said nothing. He looked behind him and saw Naruto's sad eyes. He was heart broken. Every time someone would get close to Naruto he would run away from him/her as quickly as possible. He only felt safe when he was with Itachi or with Hinata, Temari and Kyo. Which by the way he wondered where the girls were. He turned around and bended over to come face to face with the smaller boy, "Naruto please don't be scared you know I'm always here for you." He said as he put a heart warming smile. Naruto smiled "Thank you Ita—" Naruto was cut off.
"Oh please what makes you think Uchiha Itachi is going to help you in anyway?" The other teen said. Naruto then realized he was…right. 'He's right. How can I think that Itachi will help me he probably—' "Naruto." The blonde's thoughts were interrupted. "Yes?" he asked in a shaky voice. "Don't ever think for a second that I won't be here for you." Itachi said as he ruffled the blonde's hair. Naruto blushed and nodded happily. The older boy smiled also and took the smaller hand. They started walking, they past the group of boys, "You know that boy is nothing but a monster and a burden to you Uchiha." The group leader said. Itachi stopped in his track and whispered something to Naruto's ear. The small boy nodded and covered his eyes with his hands.
Suddenly Naruto heard some punches and yells. He wanted to see what was going on but Itachi told him not to peek. He felt a pair of arms carry him. He opened his eyes and saw Itachi smiling at him. "Let's go get some ramen." He said as he started walking. Naruto looked behind Itachi and saw the boys struggling to get back up their feet. "Serves you right you bullies." Naruto shouted and sticked his out his tongue, in which Itachi laughed.
::End of Flashback::
Naruto giggled as he remembered. Itachi smiled. The couple cuddled closer and gave each other kisses. Naruto then gasped. "What's wrong?" Itachi asked worried something happened to his blonde kitsune. Naruto closed his eyes and sight. "Nothing, it's just that." Naruto pouted. "I forgot to tell the girls about me getting pregnant." He sight once more. "Naruto, once you tell them you know what's going to happen right?" Itachi said as he held Naruto close. "Yeah, their going to hug me to death and will be excited. I can picture it now." As the blonde said, he shivered. Sometimes the girls can really be too overjoyed. "No matter, at least they'll be happy aunt's right?" Naruto said as he smiled. Itachi kissed the blonde's forehead, "We'll tell them tomorrow, right now you need to rest. Don't want you to overdue yourself." Naruto nodded and cuddled closer to Itachi. The couple went to sleep peacefully and waited for another day to start.
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"So he's still alive. He managed to endure the seal for today." A dark voice spoke throughout the night. He looked at the card in his hand. "Yes. And it seems that he's been getting a little strong." Another voice had spoken. "Kabuto, for a moment I though you were actually going to kill the boy." Orochimaru was a ninja who left the village a long time ago.
"Orochimaru-sama, how can I possibly betray you. If I do however I will be dead within 24 hours. There's no way I will be able to defeat a great ninja like yourself." Kabuto Yakushi was a loyal servant to Orochimaru. "When will be taking Sasuke with us?" the silver haired boy asked. "In due time. For now we will see how well he does in the 4th and final stage of the Chuunin Exams." He said as he pulled his hair from his face. "Although there is something I stumbled upon on. Something interesting caught my attention lately." Orochimaru said while smirking. "Is it Uzumaki Naruto?" Kabuto had said. The snake sannin smiled and nodded. "It seems he's in a relationship with Sasuke's older brother." Kabuto pulled another card from his pouch and handed it over to Orochimaru.
He looked it over finding how old Naruto was, his ninja ranking and other information. Orochimaru smirked. "So he's mated with Itachi and now the nine tailed brat is pregnant with his child." The dark haired ninja smirked. He wondered how the child was going to turn out. Powerful? This kid will be able to use the sharingan and maybe a little power from the Kyuubi. What intense power the child will have. Orochimaru smiled. "The kid will probably be able to defeat me if it wanted to." He said as he looked at the Village. "I'm sure he'll be powerful but not enough to beat you Orochimaru-sama."
The snake sannin frowned. Nope. He'll be dead if he let that child born. "I "guess we have to eliminate the brat along with its carrier." He said. He laughed in a dark tone. Both men disappeared through the night. "In due time Sasuke will be in my hands, the Nine tailed brat and his child will be dead."
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To-to: well that sure was weird…
Naru: I'll say, why does everyone want to kill my kid?
To-to: be cause he/she will be powerful?
Naru: of course, that is what every evil person does.
Nikko: REVIEW PLEASE!!!!!!!!!