GoodMorningBeautiful2005: Hey Everyone,

This weekend I'm going to be submitting Chapter's 12-13. After these two are submitted this story only has Chapter's 14-15 left, which are the longest chapters I've ever written. So as soon as I answer your reviews I'll be continuing the story..Also my profile has been updated. I redid everything. Oh and Muse 1 is back and Muse 2 is sick now...

Babycakes3620: Thanks -you for the support...Too bad this story is almost over...Though I'm working on the Final book right now...It won't be added until the fall of next year. I read your profile and I can't wait to read your first story...I hope I've given you some inspiration or something...If you want to read a really good story read both Rison Demon and War of the Anceints...Red Mage 04 had a wonderful talent of describing thing...You'd like his stories a lot.

Up-High: Thank-you for you support as well...And your right, this world would deffinately be very boring if everybody was the same and thought the same too...Writing is how we authors like to explain ourselves to people or how we see the world around us...Me, I just like writing because it takes my mind off of the things that bother me...You could say I started to write because my family inspires me..and not in a bad way either..

Chapter 11: Palace Ruins and Death

As the trio walked up to the palace ruins they noticed a small hole up in the left side of the rubble. "I guess that's how we get in there." said Daxter

"Well it's now or never." said Jak.

"Yeah." responded Daxter

Serena looked up at her friends and said, "Some of us may not make it out of here alive."

"What do you mean?" asked Jak

"Yeah, babe." said Daxter

"I just have one of my feelings that says that one of us isn't gonna make it through the palace ruins.." she said looking down at her feet.

"That's not gonna happen." Jak said in half growl.

"In case it does, promise me that no matter what, we'll defeat Errol and the Dark Makers." she said.

"Sure." Jak replied

"You got it babe." Daxter responded with a smile.

As the trio climbed over the palace ruins Serena spotted hundreds of metal heads. They were everywhere. There were scorpion, humanoids, lizard, crab heads, and the cat-like kind too. "Umm...Jak?" Serena asked, "Looks like I'm gonna need to help on this one." Jak nodded as did Daxter, "Do you still have my old gun that Keira had made me when we went to kill Kor?"

"Yeah, it's in my pack." he responded. (I was looking at a picture of Jak from Jak 3 and looked to me that he had on some sort of backpack or something of the like on.)

Serena pulled the gun out. "These bad-boys look like something the wastelanders would fight." said Daxter.

"Dax, you're a genius!" exclaimed Jak as he grabbed the beacon out and pressed the button.

"Piece of junk." said Daxter when a light didn't come on.

"It was worth a try." Serena said.

Suddenly they were surrounded by crab heads and scorpion metal heads. "Jak!" Daxter yelled, "It's and ambush!"

Jak changed into Dark and began attacking the crab heads, while Serena took care of the scorpion metal heads. The battle went on for the next 30 minutes. The metal heads were coming out of no where. Suddenly Dark returned as Jak and Jak took out his peacemaker and put it on the third setting and fired a nova blast. Within seconds the metal head swarms began dissipating.

"Alright!" shouted Daxter, "Take that metal head scum."

"Dax." said Jak

"What?" he asked

That's when a crab head appeared behind Serena and was taking aim for her. "Jak!" yelled Daxter. Jak looked and saw it and both yelled for her to watch out.

END OF FLASBACK

(Remember flashback began in Book 1)

"Serena, look out!" Jak and Daxter both warned Serena as an incoming attack came from one of the crab head's cannon was headed her way. Serena quickly looked around for cover, she found some. And I thought my life needed some action and excitement. she thought. Boy was I wrong. Suddenly something fell on her and before she drifted off to unconsciousness, one though was stuck in her head. Will I ever see my friends and family again?

Jak and Daxter ran over to the pile of rubble after killing all of the metal heads. "Serena!" They both yelled, but no answer came. Once they uncovered the spot where she'd been, all that was left of her was her gun. Suddenly, two Satellite Dark Makers appeared and Jak and Daxter knew this was it.

GoodMorningBeautiful2005: (ducks and hides from mob that's trying to kill her) Sorry! But...

Muse 1: Noooo...You killed Serena! (begins crying)
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Chapter 13: Death and Home?