This Maximum Ride
Chapter 9 - Max POV
"Hello Maximum." I heard before I saw an old-looking guy step onto the bus. A few bulky people-like wolf things stepped on after him.
"Who are you?" I asked. I couldn't believe something like this could happen on my first tour.
"My name is Jeb Batchelder, Maximum. But you may know me better as your father." I swear my eyes almost popped out of their sockets.
"That's not possible. This so called father I have abandoned my mother before I was even born. He's probably lying face down in some ditch somewhere drunk out of his mind."
"So, how is Valencia?" He asked, smiling a very evil smile, "I hope she's well. I wouldn't want her not to be, especially after how she reacted after I told her about my work."
"As far as I'm aware of both of my slimes of parents don't talk to me, so how should I know?" I responded, "So if you want to know about Slime #2 you could ask her. But wait she's most likely high."
"I've heard great things about you Maximum." Jeb said, "That is why you've been chosen."
"Chosen for what? What is your job?" I asked.
"You'll find out in due course. You all will." He dismissed my questions with a wave of his hand. "But for now."
I watched as this Jeb guy threw a silver ball directly in front of us and before I knew it some kind of green, noxious gas was quickly filling the van. I now noticed that Jeb had on an oxygen mask. Those were the last things I saw before I blacked out.
So I'm sorry for taking so long to type it up. I'm gonna finish typing what I have so maybe you might get another chapter tonight..That is if I get some reviews. Now there is one thing I'm not so sure of..My Max comebacks seem a little mean and I was wondering if any of you people reading had any tips or suggestions for writing good Max insults. Thanks. Maybe if you review you might get a quote from the next chapter. Review.
Oh and read and review my Blue Bloods ff (called Sneaking Out). Thanks!
--Sarah