Breaking Fate's Curse

Rebel 11: One Squirrel Army.

Written by Jlargent

Me: Here we are with chapter 11 and HOLY MOTHER OF MAKOTO 5200 Hits, 26 Favs and 15 Alerts on this story! Wow, I mean wow, I had no idea this story would skyrocket like this and I appreciate the feedback all of you are giving me. Please keep it up. On one other note I decided to delete my Lamenting Marionette fic not because I haven't gotten any reviews for it, but because I had essentially have written myself into a corner. I'm sorry if fans of this story are disappointed but I was stretching myself rather thin juggling three stories. Now onto the disclaimers, I do not own Naruto or Blazblue in any shape or form that means I have immunity if ASW or Kishimoto finds out about this fic and tries to sue me.

Hinata's POV

I watch as our new companion takes off the cloak and beret and toss it away to reveal a athletically toned body I could barely hold back a blush as her D-Cup breasts were threatening to rip out of the confines of her top and her ultra-miniskirt showing the thong underwear that she's wearing and to my surprise a squirrel tail was sticking out at the base of her back with matching ears. On her arms is what appears to be cross-shaped tonfas obviously meant for making heavy impacts on the opponents body, her shapely legs were encased in thigh-high stockings and finishing out her orange clothing was a pair of orange combat boots.

(Play Alexandrite: Makoto's Theme right now.)

With a battle cry she proceeds to rush towards a small group of puppets and slams a fist into one of them sending it crashing into the ground shattering it, she then followed up with a rising uppercut slamming her fist into another puppet sending her and the puppet into the air and as they descend she slams her fist into the puppet's head again sending it into the ground shattering its head.

"C'mon, try harder." Makoto taunts as the next group heads towards her she shifts herself into a salute.

"My soul burns with the heat of a thousand suns!" she cocks her arm back as a large circle of energy was gathering.

"Big…Bang…SMASH!" she cries out as she thrusts her fist our and a large fist emerged from the energy circle slamming into the group reducing them to pieces. I turn my head to Noel who just finished taking out six puppets and see Lady Chiyo finishing up with five puppets.

"Your friend looks very powerful." Lady Chiyo commented as Makoto dispatched yet another puppet, Noel smiled and her eyes look on in thoughtfulness.

"Yes, she is. Makoto has always been the athletic type of person despite what people said about her. Makoto is what we call a 'Beastkin' but in all honesty I hate the name, it sounds too derogatory. It's really hard to believe that when I first met her she was being picked on by some upperclassmen I stood up to them and left when I said I was in the student council of course at the time I was lying to protect her. When they ran Makoto was cradled on the ground clutching her tail protectively, they threatened to cut her tail and ears off to make her 'normal looking' it turns out that they lost relatives during the war and they blamed beastkin for their deaths. After contacting the NOL the bullies were expelled and arrested for attempted assault and ever since then she's became my best friend, after we graduated I heard that she was sent to the intelligence department and I haven't heard from her since. Not until today that is." she explained as Makoto leaps into the air and for a moment hovers.

I look at Makoto and realize that she's using her tail as a propeller keeping her aloft in the air then all of a sudden she shoots downward and hits one puppet in the head shattering it and punches the one behind it twice in the waist forcing it to bend over then finishes it up with an devastating uppercut shattering it.

"*Yawn* Now I'm hungry." Makoto spoke as Sasori looks on trying to take down the apparently one-squirrel army and failing miserably. He looked visibly angered as yet another puppet is shattered, never to be used again.

"You little brat! I will enjoy draining your blood as the lifeless corpses of your friends watch on." Sasori growled as the blades of his wings extended out started to spin slowly at first then picking up speed until it moves so fast it's a blur the cable from his torso shoots out and nearly impales Makoto's quick reflexes allows her to dodge the poisonous cable and run along it as Sasori starts retracting it sending him flying towards Makoto as she produces a ball of electricity and hits it hard sending it at him with the force of a cannonball slamming into his chest forcing him back as Makoto rushes in.

"Light! Give me strength!" she screams out as he she cocks her left arm back and it was glowing a bright blue, when Sasori got close enough she threw her punch striking him in the chest with a resounding crash making him stagger. Makoto then proceeds to let loose with a volley of punches each one hitting home.

"Planet…Crusher!" Makoto shouted as she finished up with a devastatingly powerful uppercut that sends him into the air shattering his puppet body and only his heart remained as the sound of a bell ringing and confetti rained down I immediately tried to cancel the genjutsu but to my horror it wouldn't At least it's not as bad as Guy sensei's infamous 'sunset jutsu' I reasoned as she struck a pose.

"Just another unworthy foe." she growled as the confetti jutsu faded away.

(End song at this point.)

"I must be slipping, normally that would've sent him to the moon. Literally!" she said as I tried to comprehend the sheer power this girl my age has if she can casually talk about sending opponents to the moon as though it's a daily occurrence.

All of a sudden the pieces that made up Sasori's body started to float and reassemble themselves until Sasori was back, Sasori turns his head towards Makoto with a grin on his face.

"Was that it? I expected that to be more…dramatic. In any event you cannot kill me for I am immortal, no matter how many time you break me I will beep coming back until you are dead at my feet." Sasori smile evilly as all of a sudden there was a bang and the sound of shattering wood. We turn our heads to the source and see Noel with her Bolverk pointed at him smoking.

"Makoto, I'll take it from here." she said as she shifted into a ready position.

Sasori narrows his eyes in contempt "Fool, you should not have come here today." he said as his blades started to rotate and he launches his cable grazing Noel's cheek. Noel rushes at Sasori as well and engaged him in taijutsu with her being the better fighter, I notice that Lady Chiyo was moving the Father and Mother into position.

"Now Noel!" Lady Chiyo shouted as the Father and Mother struck, piercing his heart with discarded swords that they picked up from the battlefield, Sasori looked on in shock as the twin blades of cold steel were sticking out of his heart.

"Congratulations…it seems that I had underestimated your skills, as you know the Akatsuki want Orochimaru dead for his betrayal. I have a spy in the sound village that I am to meet one week from now at the Tenchu Bridge in Grass Counrty." Sasori spoke as the blood was dripping from the swords with each word.

"Why are you telling us this?" Hinata asks to which there was no answer nor will there ever will be.

(Omake: Copyright Infringement Jutsu!)

As Makoto leaps into the air her she hover in the air, looking closely I notice her tail was spinning like a propeller.

"COPYRIGHT INFINGEMENT!" Hinata yells catching Makoto off guard and making her crash into the ground.

Makoto painfully get up from the ground "What was that?" she asks.

"You heard me you copied Tails from Sonic the Hedgehog!" Hinata huffs.

"Hey! Unlike the foxboy I use only one tail. He uses two so that doesn't count!" Makoto countered as Hinata opens her mouth to counter only to close it failing to produce a counter.

(Omake 2: Sasori is Marluxia?)

The huddled figure of Sasori leaps out of Hiruko covered in the oversized Akatsuki robes started to chuckle.

"Interesting, how long has it been since my identity was revealed?" with those words Sasori tosses the oversized cloak off himself to reveal a effeminate male with shoulder-length pink hair and his piercing green eyes sweep over us and instead of wearing the standard Akatsuki cloak he was wearing a zip-up black robe with a hood.

"You're in the wrong series Marluxia! What are you doing here?" Noel growled as she prepares her Bolverk.

Marluxia merely shrugs his shoulders "Sasori had some personal issues to deal with so he asked me to fill in for him." he simply replied as we crash to the floor.

(End Omakes.)

Me: I have a new poll up please vote for your favorite pairing! Next time: An explosive reunion. This chapter will cover the Emo Ice King himself Jin Kisaragi.

Jin Kisaragi

Character voice: Tetsuya Kakihara (JP), David Vincent (ENG)

Jin Kisaragi is a Major in the NOL, and one of its elite commanding officers. He is always cool and calm, but is also jealous, ambitious, and possessive, with little care for others, treating them like they are mere obstacles. He displayed formidable actions to gain his rank during the Ikaruga Civil War. When he heard that Ragna the Bloodedge had arrived on the scene, he quickly abandoned his post to hunt him down by himself. The truth, however, is that Ragna is Jin's biological brother, and Jin's early feelings of rivalry were furthered by his visions of the future and his Nox Nyctores' amplification of his emotions. Terumi caused Jin's mind to hack off Ragna's arm (later nearly dying without the intervention of Rachel) and supposedly kill Saya, and Jin often says that he's looking forward to killing Ragna again. After the incident, he was adopted into the Kisaragi house, a highly powerful and respected family within the NOL. He possesses a notable psychosis, said to be caused by his sword, the Nox Nyctores "Mucro Algesco: Yukianesa". While the sword grants him manipulation over ice, it also enhances primal feelings and is often blamed for "insanity". His future alter-ego is the White Knight of the six heroes named Hakumen. In Continuum Shift's true ending, Jin revealed to Ragna that Saya had given him Yukianesa. He's currently traveling with Jubei.

Jin's Drive is Frost Bite, which freezes the opponent solid.

As always Hoody Hoo!