So, I really thought that I wouldn't post another chapter his week but I kept getting AMAZING reviews and I couldn't help it. Also this chapter was finished so I thought why not! I hope it was worth it and I hope to get LOTS of reviews with my new twist. There is no Candor or Dauntless yet but it will be here soon, I just want to include as much detail as possible.
Also, thanks to you review catart101 and I would be happy to accept your friendship offer! ;p I am happy that I have found someone with the same obsession haha :D
ANYWAYS, hope you enjoy the chapter and as I promised to accept any improvements I did try to make it EXTRA long. It's also got a little bit of a HUGE twist, you'll see. ;D
(I will do TOBIAS next but this one is in Tris' POV again x)
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Chapter 11
"I love you Tris Prior and I want to spend the rest of my life with you. I want you to be the first thing I see when I wake up and the last when I fall asleep. Tris, will you marry me?"
She was crying so hard by now but she kept smiling the whole time.
"Yes," she whispered. "I love you so much."
I slipped the ring on her finger and stood up to kiss her. We were millimetres away before everyone jumped out shouting "SURPRISE!" and popped confetti everywhere.
Tris laughed as I held her close, silver stars flying through the air.
I looked at her and she looked back, before I leaned in and kissed her passionately on the lips.
Tris
Happiness can't describe my emotions right now; I don't think there is an explanation for what I feel.
I grabbed Tobias by his shirt and pulled him into a kiss. He looked surprised but he gladly took it.
"I love you," I whispered.
"I love you more," He teased.
"Get a room guys!" Zeke shouted, but as soon as Tobias gave him a look he shut up.
"Well, that was really unexpected, Four. Way to go man!" Uriah told him as he slapped him on the back, "You're a married man now!"
Tobias looked directly at me and I blushed.
"I told you there was someone here. It was too quiet." Tobias said, smirking.
"Why you lying for?"
Everyone laughed at Uriah's comment, even Tobias.
He took my hand and was about to walk me to my room when Christina shouted "Where do you two think you're going?"
Tobias sighed and turned to face Christina.
"Don't you wanna go celebrate?"
Tobias shook his head.
"I would rather spend my evening with Tris to be honest." He squeezed my hand and I smiled at him.
"Umm...okaay. So, how about a game of Candor or Dauntless later?" Uriah added.
He looked at me as if everyone depended on my presence. I looked over to Tobias who was smiling.
"Sure, it'll be fun!"
"OK GREAT! We'll see you two lovebirds at like six?"
"Six." I confirmed.
"So, Mrs Eaton..." He teased. "We have a couple of hours, what do you say we do?"
I grinned at him.
"Well, MR Eaton, I really wouldn't mind." I grinned back.
Tobias sat on the bed and I sat on his lap, tying my arms around his neck whilst stealing gazes at each other.
"You wanna talk about the baby?" I asked nervously, slightly changing the subject.
"It's up to you. We can talk when you're ready."
"Ok." I smiled.
He gave me a peck on the lips before Cara walked in.
"Oh, sorry again, my bad. Is it a good time? I can come back later.."
"Cara, it's fine. What's up?" I quickly added before she left.
"Well, I just needed to let you know that you will have to stay here for tonight and maybe tomorrow too. Your state is not in a brilliant position right now, and we want to make sure your pregnancy starts off well. We don't want any complications."
I sighed, looking down at my engagement ring. It was so beautiful: a black stone in between two smaller grey diamonds on a sliver band.
"Can I leave any earlier than that?"
She looked down at her clipboard, "No, I'm afraid not."
I bit my lip, looking down before I felt Tobias' gaze on me. I looked at him and he laced his fingers into mine.
"Ok."
She nodded at Tobias before walking out. Was that just me?
"What's up, honey?" he asked me casually.
I stared at him.
"Did you just call me honey?"
He laughed, "I recall myself saying that to you when I collapsed."
"Wait! So you were awake? I thought you said you couldn't remember anything!" I punched him playfully and he mocked hurt.
Just then, Uriah, Christina and Zeke burst through the room, rolling on the floor with laughter, Zeke's cheeks flushed pink.
"What happened to you guys?" I asked curiously, raising my eyebrow.
Christina starts, "So, we're in the dining hall and Uriah calls Zeke a pansy cake and they have an argument over it, then Uriah says 'if you're not one, then go up to that girl over there and kiss her on the lips and tell her you love her'. So Zeke goes and kisses her fully on the lips but then Shauna comes in and sees Zeke making out with this woman and she goes up to him and slaps him round the face, dragging him by the ear out of the dining hall."
Tobias is laughing at Zeke who has now turned crimson red, when Shauna walks into the room again.
Zeke ran and took cover behind my bed.
"Have any of you guys seen Ezekiel? Boy, when I find him he will be like Uriah was yesterday."
Uriah burst out laughing but Shauna gave him a look, shutting him up instantly.
She stormed out of the room and Zeke crawled out from behind the bed.
"She gone?"
We all noded.
"Thanks guys, phew, that was a close one."
"Zeke, man, you can't hide forever. One day or another you will have to face up to her." Four interrupted.
"I know man but for now I'll just let her cool off a little."
"ZEKE!" Shauna shouted as she stormed into the room again.
"Shit!" Zeke ran to hide behind the bed again but Uriah tripped him up on the way and he face-planted the floor.
"Omg, baby are you alright?" Shauna asked before helping Zeke up.
We all just gave her confused looks before Cara walked in and froze.
"Wow, what happened here?" She started, staring at the bundle on the floor.
"Long story," I replied, "Let's just leave it like that."
She nodded before continuing,
"Well, I can see that you're all having fun," she rolled her eyes, "I actually came in to find Uriah."
"Yo, right here!"
"Your state has definitely improved from your coma, you can go home now."
Uriah stopped grinning and looked at Cara seriously.
"What? Really?"
She just nodded and Uriah smiled again.
"We're going back to Chicago guys!"
Everyone cheered, even Tobias. He must've noticed I hadn't said anything because he looked at me then at Cara,
"Wait, what about Trissy? She looks fine to me!"
She shook her head, I knew it.
"No, I'm afraid not. She came out of her coma successfully but her early stage of pregnancy could..."
"WHAT!? Tris is pregnant? Tris, when were you gonna tell us?!" Uriah stood there, jaw dropped.
"Uriah, bro, you're gonna catch flies."
Uriah shot a look at Zeke closing his mouth instantly, Zeke laughing at him.
"Big bro, you may be older than me but I tripped you up once and I can do it again." Zeke's expression was priceless.
"ANYWAYS," he continued, rolling his eyes at Zeke, "Congrats Tris!"
"Thanks Uri."
"So, see you guys at six? Dining hall ok?"
"Sure bro, we'll be there." Tobias replied and they all left.
I shot out of bed and grabbed Christina's arm before she left.
"Oww! Tris?!"
"Sorry Chris, listen I need you to do me a favour..."
"Sure, but it depends what it is."
"Well, I don't really have any clothes here so I was thinking...um, maybe we can go...shopping?"
She gasped,
"Tris wants to go shopping?! Well, that sure is a surprise." She noticed I was blushing, "Meet me here in five minutes ok? Let Chrissy handle this," she winked.
I rolled my eyes and she turned quickly.
"Um, I kinda have a girly date planned with Christina like, now..." I told Tobias.
"How long for?"
"Um, does it..matter? I'll see you at six anyways."
"Well, I don't wanna sit in this room all day, especially now that you're not gonna be here."
I shook my head at him.
"Tobias Eaton. I will NOT be next to you 24/7, you will have to deal with it. Why don't you hang out with Zeke or something?"
He looked down and frowned.
"Honey, I'm sorry, I didn't mean it like that. Of course I'll be with you forever but I need just need a couple hours to get ready ok? Maybe you could occupy yourself until then."
He continued staring at the floor.
"Did I say something to upset you?"
He looked up before he muttered a "No."
I stared at him for a minute.
"No? Is that it? Tobias, what is the matter? Why are you so upset?"
He opened his mouth for a minute but then shut it again.
He inhaled and looked me straight in the eyes.
"I'm going back to Chicago, Tris."
No. No, no, no!
I stared at him in disbelief.
"What?!"
"I'm going back home. I miss our friends, Tris and I need to sort things out with Evelyn."
I was on the verge of crying but I bit my lip hard.
"So that's it? We get engaged and you say you're leaving?" My voice was shaking.
He nodded slowly: I couldn't believe him!
Tears fell uncontrollably to the point where I couldn't control them.
"Tris, you know I don't mean it like that...it's just.."
"Just what? Suddenly everyone is ranked first and I am less of an importance to you right now. That was smart, Tobias, telling me you want to marry me and then you just decide to leave me alone."
I turned on my heels and opened the door, but he grabbed my arm and pulled me in for a kiss.
I wanted this so badly but I couldn't, not with all my anger.
I pulled away and took one last look at him before I left, his eyes sad and...guilty.
Good: he should be.
I walked down the halls again in search of Christina, tears falling harder than ever.
Aww. I'm not gonna lie I felt heartbroken writing this unexpected moment and I really didn't want to , but that's the whole point of stories: they can't just all be happy!
I tried to include humour too but if you think it is weird or irrelevant then I will stop, but everyone loves a good laugh eh?
I love hearing from you so please leave me a review and thanks to all my best reviewers and I'm glad to say that I have got 2661 views on my story from ALL over the world, over 500 from yesterday and over 200 today! You have no idea how happy I am, lets keep it up!;D
quick note: I am so so sorry for including swearing in my chapters but it gave the whole effect. if you would rather I don't then please let me know, you can't please everyone at the same time! ;p
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