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Thank you to everyone who has left a review!

Thank you "Ashley Wheatley" for your review as well; I am glad you thought the last chapter was great, the wait is now over!

Thank you "The Story's Shadow" for your review as well; Well when you write from experience you can easily present it with effective. Emotions are truly agents. They can make or break a man, a hero. They can drive one to the point madness and insanity or they can bring one back from the brink. Emotions truly are powerful, more powerful than many people realize. Our emotion are part of who we are, they drive us to what we can or will be, they can bring us down or they can raise us up.

Thank you "Noble Six" for your review as well; I am also very glad no one was hurt during the power outage. I am glad you thought the last chapter was excellent! Well the wait is over!

Thank you "Man285" for your review as well; Point taken, I see your points. Yes Ava is a bit too mushy and emotional and Laura is not having the spot light, she is more of a side chick. I am sorry that Peter is a little more "Dark" as you put it, I can't help that too much, but the "poetick" do you mean "poetic"? That I CAN slow down or stop. But the tragedy, aguish, and "Darkness", that will be more difficult for me to stop.

The story continues onwards...

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(In Peter's Head, Mind, Dream, Vision)

(Peter's Point of View)

Two of the closest people that I love and that love me.

Ava Ayala and Laura Kinney...

I glanced at my body and I was beginning to become translucent; semitransparent. I was already partially faded.

Ava and Laura looked at me speechless.

I sighed.

Ava took a step towards me.

A remained in the same place, I could not look at them in the eye.

Laura said calmly "Peter..."

Ava said with sorrow in her voice "Peter, please look at me... look at us..."

I shut my eyes steeling my nerves, after a few seconds I dared look up at them.

Ava had tears in her eyes, Laura also had tears in her own eyes. Laura seldom shows emotion so for her to have tears or to smile is a big deal!

I was in no mood for a this, I simply wanted to rest, I wanted peace.

Ava said pleadingly "Please come with me, come home. We need you more than you ever will know!"

I asked "All I wanted was a family. All I wanted was peace. My family is dead, and now I cannot even have peace in death, with ghosts haunting me and with you." I sighed and said "Why? I have always remained strong, now I simple want to rest, to have peace. Can I not have that? Is that too much to ask?"

Ava said "Peter..."

Laura said to me "Peter, I know how you feel, but this is not the way. Dying now will be shameful for Ben, May... and Gwen... They would want you to move on, they would want you to live, live for them. They would want you to live life to the fullest. Not wallow in pity and grief. Not to die. They would not want to live depressed. They loved you and wanted the best for you. Please Peter, do not give up like this. I know you are tired, I know you are in pain. Please Peter you know me, come back. Come back with me. Come back. YOU have family in the hero community. Scarlet Spider IS your brother. Peter you are still needed. I need you, AVA needs you. The world needs you. Come back with us."

I shut my eyes forcing back tears.

Ava said "I love you..."

I opened my mouth to say something but Laura cut me off.

She said "I love you Peter."

I was shocked, two hot beautiful hero chicks both loved me. Great I am dead, either they will gang up on me, or they fight each other (talk about a cat fight!) and then I feel guilty. Yup that is my luck!

I opened my mouth to say something, but no words would form for me.

I felt my mortal ties on earth strengthen.

I felt myself becoming more firm.

I looked at them and said with love "I love you too..."

I said "Let's go home..." Ava walked over to me and took my left hand and Laura came to me and took my right hand.


(Line Break)

(Third Person Point of View)

(In the Room)


It had been three hours since Ava and Laura went into the mind of Peter Parker.

Charles and Jean had to pull them out.

Ava and Laura shot upright panting.

Kitty Pryde asked with concern "What happened? Where's Peter?"

Before either could reply, a heavy groan could be heard. Then a mutter "Why did I do this again?"

All eyes turned to Peter who was still lying down, but you could see he was awake. Peter asked "Could you shut those damn lights off?!"

Someone moved or Jean or maybe the Professor shut off the lights.

Peter groaned.

Kitty took a breathe but Peter said before ANYONE could say a word "No comments. I want some quiet right now. I need to gather myself up."

Hank gave a lone nod and began to usher everyone out, but Peter said "Wait, please let Ava and Laura stay. I need them..."

Hank gave a nod and soon all but those two left the room. Leaving the three of them alone.

Peter gave a weak smile as he weakly opened his eyes.

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Sorry for such a delay on the chapter, life has been hectic and I have no time to sleep, let alone write!

I know it is a lot shorter than most of all my chapter, I also know it is also on the disorganized side, but at least I am posting now compared to days, weeks from now.

Sorry for what it is worth.

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Death Fury signing off for now!