A/N: than you so much for your reviews, and it seems that my 'original characters' took you attention…well, I'll tell you more about them in future chapters.

Aisuruitachiwakoi – I swear that I still don't know how to say your name…LOL…Don't worry, I promise that as soon as the tournament is over…it will be Sasuke x Hinata all the way…OK? Just hold a couple of chapters…and you'll know more about Hinata's team soon too…

Kenshinlover2002 – Gravitation is the only shonen-ai that I never seen; and most anime fans call it the 'queen' of this anime genre. Is a love story between a singer of an upcoming band and a romance writer. I got the character of Yuki from the character named the same, the writer. Gravitation is one of my favorites on anime…and manga. Sometimes o forget that is shonen-ai due to the craziness that happens in every episode (manga or anime). Is completely awesome to see, and don't worry about the boy-boy love…even with their relationship as the main topic of the story…many things make you to be linked to the series. I highly recommend it…I'm not into this genre too much, but I LOVE GRAVITATION!

Yuki is my favorite…and I even used the series for a psychological analysis for a psychology class…and I got A, so is quite good to see.

Rcr— Poor Tenten, she is not too popular…why hate her? Anyway, she I going to get her ass kicked very nice. And to tell the truth…I also love Hinata's teammates…if you know the characters where I got inspirited to use…they are HOT…but no compared with Sasuke (Yuki is HOTTER! SORRRRRRRRRYYYY)…but Sasuke is still the best.

Kichou—I hope that Tenten got her ass kicked like you wanted…LOL


Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto, or the song "Come Sweet Death" from the Neon Genesis Evangelion Movie Soundtrack …and I have bad grammar…sorry…

Chapter eleven

Hinata vs. Tenten

Last chapter…

When Ten-Ten enters the stage and sees the grinning face of Hinata, she looks back for a moment. "I'm sorry…Neji." And steps in to face Hinata.


"I can't believe that you still want to fight Me." mentioned Hinata, "to tell you something, Hyuuga Neji will never forgive you for disobey him." She hissed.

"What is it Hinata, are you scared?"

"I don't know Tenten," responded the ex-Hyuuga heir, "tell me…what's your definition of fear?" And with this she stands in fighting position.

"You hurt your own sister…you hurt your own cousin…I bet that you're closer to a traitor than Sasuke" responded Tenten, posing in a fighting position too. "Well…fighting you will only delay my fight against him since I know that Inuzuka doesn't have a chance with him." She responds with a cocky smile.

"Let's see who will end up fighting him then!" and with that Tenten opens a scroll and throws a mass of shurikens and kunais at Hinata. Hinata just enters in the mass and then moves to a side to show that she gathered kunais in both of her hands. "You shouldn't be so sweet and provide me more kunais for your torture." She smiles and throws a couple at Tenten, who barely dodges them and steps at a safe distance.

When Tenten tries to see where the enemy was, she feels a warm breath against her cheek, "Why are you hiding? I though that you came to fight Me." whispers the ANBU captain before using one of the kunais and scratch her left cheek. With the pain Tenten jumps high and opens another scroll, this time the amount of weapons is massive.

Hinata doesn't move, she just opens one of her pockets and shows another scroll, to Tenten's surprise it was completely blank, but when Hinata puts in on front of her in the moment that the massive weapons are going to hit…something incredible happens.

Like it was some kind of joke, suddenly the blank scroll absorbs the massive weapons until no one is left free. Then the scroll is filled with the same jutsu that composed Tenten's movement and Hinata throws it to a side, and starts to sing softly.

"…It all returns to nothing, it just keeps

Tumbling down, tumbling down, tumbling down…"


Sasuke and Kiba were watching the action from the gates. "Incredible, she was able to know how to respond to that jutsu so fast…she is just getting started," Mentioned Sasuke, "she is going to give me the fight of my life." With this Kiba looks at him annoyed, "AND WHY YOU THINK THAT YOU'LL BE ABLE TO GET INTO THE FINALS…I'M YOUR OPPONENT, REMEMBER!" Then Sasuke looks back at him, "Did you really want to fight Hinata?" he asked, raising an eyebrow. Kiba just looked down…defeated already…


"…It all returns to nothing, I just keep

Letting me down, letting me down, letting me down…"

"T-This can't be happening! I've never seen something like that in my life!" screamed Naruto from the grounds. Then Saito started to chuckle. "What is so funny Saito…?"

"For you is Seijuro, Hatake." Responds the older man "is funny because we already know that Hinata was going to play with her a little."

"Play with Tenten…how?"

"Simple," continued Yuki, "If Hinata really wanted to finish Tenten...it would be at the moment that she stepped behind her. And besides…" with this he smiles evilly at the others. "She is right now singing a song. And I know that one."

"…It all returns to nothing, it just keeps

Tumbling down, tumbling down, tumbling down…"

When he says that, Naruto puts a hand on his ear and tries to listen to it. "What are you talking about? I don't hear anything." Then Hiro looks at him and suddenly he gasps, "OH, GOD…that's the song when she… "

"…It all returns to nothing, I just keep

Letting me down, letting me down, letting me down…"

"Yes Hiro," responded Saito, "is the song that she sings when she is going to torture someone." And when they look back at the arena, Hinata had just hit on Tenten scratching with a shuriken.

"…It all returns to nothing, it just keeps

Tumbling down, tumbling down, tumbling down…"


Tenten can't believe what was happening, every time that she shoves her weapons, Hinata supplies herself, traps them on a scroll, or just dodge them like nothing. And in fact, she was scratching her in purpose and signing while doing it…it was obvious that Hinata was playing with her. With no other choice, she decides that maybe Hinata's weakness was the close combat style. And with a wooden stick, she decides to attack.

"…It all returns to nothing, I just keep

Letting me down, letting me down, letting me down…"

Hinata, seeing her actions, laughs a little and while throwing the rest of the kunais on her hands and leaving only one on her hands, then puts it on her mouth and then stepping closer at her competitor. When she thought that she saw an opening in Hinata, Tenten moves to hit her, when suddenly Hinata grabs the stick before it hits her. Then in a second Hinata stops singing and says, "Copy" and pulls her hand back, only to drag from the wooden stick another one!

"…It all returns to nothing, it just keeps

Tumbling down, tumbling down, tumbling down…"

With this action she steps back and starts singing again, getting Tenten on her nerves. "Stop singing like this is a joke Hinata!" then she charges at her, fighting face-to-face with the wooden sticks. The fight keeps going on…and Tenten hadn't been able to land a blow on her yet.

I never knew that she was good using weapons…the Hyuuga clan isn't quite used to work with this…> and then she gets a strong hit from the ex-Hyuuga and is sent to the nearest wall. "Is still time to quit Tenten, I won't be able to hold back for this mediocre fight." states Hinata while playing with her wooden stick and giving her back to her.

"…It all returns to nothing, I just keep

Letting me down, letting me down, letting me down…"

Tenten looks quite pissed up and jumps high again to open another scroll, but Hinata looks up like bored and then she hits the ground with her wooden stick, making Tenten fall hard into the ground.

"What happened? Did you saw any seal Kakashi?" asked Sakura, looking impressed by what just happened. "No, I'm afraid that I didn't see anything that looked like any jutsu or ninjistu." Mentioned her sensei.

"I believe that if that girl doesn't give up now Hinata will crush her." Commented Seijuro, then followed by Kinomoto, "She had been holding beck hoping that Tenten will give up…but since she doesn't like to waste time…"

Then the others look at Tsunade, whose eyes never left the arena…


Tenten is on the ground, feeling like something was holding her down "Damn, I can't move! What kind of…" "I'm not holding up Tenten," said Hinata, while walking where her 'victim' was.

"Then what's this…"

"Gravity."

"What did you said?"

"I was hoping that you would be at least intelligent, I guess I was wrong…" sighted Hinata before continuing, "Gravity is the force that keeps things on the ground, as an easy way to say it…that's all." "That doesn't explain how I can't move." Responded the trapped ninja. "Oh, that's even easier," responded Hinata, "I just managed your gravity and increased it, increasing your weight and making it more difficult for you to move."

And with this she kneels close to Tenten, "Give up now girl…or I," and then she gives an evil smile, "I'll increase little by little the gravity, until I crush your bones, then I'll crush your internal organs to finally die when I crush your brain." And with this she waits for an answer. "You know what Hinata? Fuck you…"

"Oh well, as you wish…" and with this Tenten suddenly feels that the pressure increases, making her scream in pain. The audience gasps in worry by the painful screams from the ninja on the ground, while Hinata is still beside her, not touching her at all "Well then, are you sure you don't want to give up?" asks cheerfully the ninja. Tenten tries to hold up a little of the pain and spats a "never" and then Hinata stands up,

"Since you don't want to hear my advice," then she puts out a kunai, "you're giving me permission to torture you until I get bored." And with she lets fall the weapon on her hand, but due to the gravity around Tenten, the kunai practically trespass her right hand, giving another painful scream from her. With this Hinata walks a few steps away from her, and then looks back at Tenten. "If you say 'give up' so high that I can hear it, then I'll let you go…until then…" and the pressure on Tenten increases, digging the kunai deeper on her hand, giving another painful scream.


"We have to stop this!" screamed Naruto, only to be hold up by Nakano, "She is waiting for Tenten to give up…" "Torturing her is not necessary to do!"

"In the real world of a ninja is something that happens everyday!" shouted back Nakano, getting an impressed face from the blonde one, "maybe you think that being a ninja is just beating someone and fulfill missions, but it also consist of killing people and torture to get information. Kill or get killed, that's the real way of the ninja." And with this he sits back, "and if you dare to get in the way…" with this Naruto looks back at him, "I'll have to get on the way too…"


But Naruto being on the way wasn't necessary, since the one who appeared on the stage between the two women was Gai. "Stop this Hinata, is enough." Mentioned the jounin, along with Lee at his side. "This is a fight between me and her, don't get on the was Maito Gai." She merely responded. "Miss Hinata, you proved to be strong, is not necessary to continue…" "Don't lecture me low-class…" she cut off Lee, "and besides…she only has to give up ending this...or at this rate she'll die, not big deal."

"I'll ask you again to stop it," warned again Gai. "Listen to me weak jounin," warned Hinata too, "I won't let a weak low-class like you to tell me what to do…so step away or I'll kill you two." Then Gai and Lee posed in defense stance, when someone got between them, "Don't you heard her, step aside." Mentioned Seijuro, with a fighting stance in front of them…then a sound coming from Tenten.

"Give…up…"

Then Hinata steps a little closer to the tortured ninja. "Did you say something?" then Tenten makes an effort to speak again, "I…give…up…"

"Oh my, I can't hear you…"

"I…GIVE…UP!"

"Oh…that…" and with that she gives her back to Tenten, and she is released from her pressure. "You take her to the infirmary…she will need the Hokage's help to recover…Seijuro, come with Me." and with this the judge says that Tenten gives up on the fight and Hinata wins. Gai and Lee carefully watch for Tenten, the last one giving a vengeful glare at Hinata's back. "She…is…a…devil…" gasps Tenten before loosing consciousness. The infirmary crew rushed at her and carries her to the infirmary.


Tsunade stands up from her chair and leaves her place, "She is in a critical condition…I must do something to stabilize her." And with this she excuses herself from Gaara and her other guests. When Tsunade is gone, Hinata appears along with Seijuro where her teammates and Naruto, Sakura and Kakashi were. "You didn't have to get there Seijuro, don't waste time with them…" spoke Hinata while he was sitting down with the rest of the team. "He got in the way of a fight…you wanted me to stay here and watch? And besides," then he looks at an angry Naruto, "He was about to get in the way too…"

"You act like I won't be able to get a bunch of low-class ninjas…seeing Maito Gai there wasn't a surprise for me…he thought that I was going to stop, but he was wrong…I could have jut killed her declaring that he got me out of concentration." Then she just smiles when she heard that Naruto growled in anger. "Guys, if this is getting boring for you…don't worry…I'll soon fight the Uchiha…"

"No, on the contrary," mentioned Kinomoto, "seeing you holding back to not kill your opponents is something for a lifetime…" and with this the three men laugh, and Hinata just frowned. "I'll be down, watching Inuzuka vs. Uchiha…see you later…" and she puffs away...still singing the now sick song.


A/N: I though that this wasn't too short for you…I have to put the song here since I was listening the soundtrack of the movie "The End of Evangelion" while writing this, and the inspiration of seeing Hinata singing this while fighting…I saw it as a way to annoy Tenten…and it worked…I kind of liked this chapter because she was playing a little with Tenten just singing like she was easy to defeat…I love it!

Next match will be something that most of you will love…Naruto lovers, be WARNED BY NEXT CHAPTER…is going to be awesome for those Naruto/Sakura haters…is nothing personal that I have against them…really…

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