ok, now this one i was experimenting with writing about Bella's change. this poem actually stared off writing about the clouds, but it evolved into bella's change. again, bella is in regular writing and edward's in bold. tell me what you think of it. i give you, Newborn!
3rd person POV
"Look at the clouds,
so white and puffy.
they're entrancing,
beautiful."
"Not as beautiful as you."
he says to her,
she smiles up at him,
and takes his face in her palm.
He leans his face down to her,
gently placing his lips on hers.
she smiles against his lips,
pulling back to look into his topaz eyes.
he returns her look,
smiling into her brown-eyed gaze.
"Are you ready?"
he asks her.
she nods her head yes,
tilting it back to expose her neck.
he leans down to the skin,
kissing it quickly before piercing the skin with his razor-blade teeth.
she lets out a sharp breath of air.
he comes back up to look at her.
"I'm ok," she whispers against the pain,
then lets out a scream as she falls into unconciousness.
he strokes her hair,
waiting out the long, painful days.
in his medow,
with his angel.
the three days pass in agony,
but finally she awakens.
Newborn strength flowing throught
her now useless veins.
"welcome back,"
he says to her.
she smiles,
and looks out to her new life.
