Just a few more chapters and I'm done!
Xion69, o.k. I get what is typo. I understand what it is and I'll try to put the punctuation. One thing, irate means angry, mad, or unhappy.
KaylaDestroyer, Diego might die or not if I want but I will add a new character to the story. Not this chapter the next one.
Now this is what you all have being waiting for. You will now know the figure's names and what are they. Read to find out!
Chapter 11: The Kingdom
I'm still in the sack, shaking like crazy. There is no air for I can breathe. When I was moving around, I spotted a dot of light. I stick my nose and start to breathe some oxygen. I began to shake again but the figure who caught me, stopped. The figure open the top of the sack and drop me off the ground. I closed my eyes if they're going to kill me.
"Welcome to our kingdom" said a figure.
I open my eyes to see who it was.
When I take a peek at it. It was a gorilla. That can walk in two legs.
"Who...Are...You..." I said.
"My name is Xenon. I'm the number one highest fighter than the others" said Xenon.
Other three more came and I jumped up.
"The name is Pain. You got that" said the gorilla.
"Pain is the second fighter" said Xenon.
"Hunter is the name. I fight for death" said Hunter.
"Hunter is the third one" said Xenon.
"Ah, ha, Gene is my name. Ha, ha" said the crazy gorilla.
"And this is Gene the fourth one" said Xenon.
So, I knew the top four fighters.
"So you were the one who made me run and scream when I came here" I said.
"Yes" said Xenon.
I got mad and stomped the ground.
"Our kingdom is amazing for you kid" said Xenon. "Come on"
I nodded. I followed him threw his village. I saw other gorillas they made some homemade baskets and other things that you read a history book.
They stared at me and smiled. They greeted me and bow down like monks do in China or Japan. If I greeted them I will say "Whats Up" or "Hey".
I followed him in secret mountain caves and climbed on steep hills and made it on the top. I saw the sunset all red and nice. Xenon put his hairy hand on my shoulder and said.
"Do you want to stay here, Kyle" he asked.
I don't know what to say yes or no. Reason for Yes, I won't see Diego anymore. No, I'll miss the portal to go back home and I won't see my friends anymore.
"If you stay, you will fight like us and live a happy life" said Xenon.
Should I stay yes or no... you vote no lie.
Vote now if you read this.
Kyle might have a life with the gorillas but you don't know what will happen yet.
Chapter 12 is coming soon. I know how short it is and how long I could make it longer. It's school work and I don't have time to do it. Only on weekends and holidays and breaks.
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