Author's Note II:

Chapter 8 marks the end of part one (act one) of my story. This first part of the story focus pretty much only on Toph and Zuko, and only using the other characters when needed. This first part also had a lot of flashback, since I wanted you to know a great deal about the two main characters and how they have changed from how they are presented in the animated show.

The next part/s of the story are going to still focus on Toph and Zuko, but now the other characters are going to play a much more important part and it's not just going to be a two person story, if you get what I mean. Also there are going to be a great deal less flashback than before, and many of topic brought up (directly and indirectly) will be dealt with, such as why Zuko doesn't bend lighting in front of Toph, what happened to Azula and of course what is it that Zuko sees at the end of chapter 8?

Now I am planning on writing a lot more on this story, but at this point (05-15-08) I have only gotten 2 review, so I'm hoping to post a few more chapter by June 15th but I'm not posting anymore until I get at least 10 review. Please review since it helpful to know what I'm doing good and bad at, pus if you have any ideas about what I should put in the story feel free to tell me, I might use part if not all of you ideas, you never now...

Anyways one last thing, to the people who are telling me I have grammar and spelling mistakes, I just want to let you know that English is my second language, so please bare with me, and I am trying hard to find and correct the mistakes I make, but I'm not a professional writer, so again please bare with me. Well hopefully you like what you've been reading so far, and again review if you want to know what happens next!