Me: -sighs deeply, feeling hurt-
?: Oi, why you so sad, huh? Is it because of that bad comment?
Me: HOW DID YOU KNOW?!
?: Lucy Fan said: This story is by far the most shitiest I read in this site.
The carachter are OOC.
There is so much drama for nothing.
All the cliche you can think of are in it (bitchy Lisanna, idiot friend, chance encontrer with Sabertooth twins, an élémental Dragon Salyer again -_-)
the plot is ridiculousy childich
And sériously? Japanese? ... Well you should learn how to speak japanese beacause yours is like your story, it have non sens at all.
Well nothing to save in that thing.
Well, her English sucks.
Me: Actually, I don't blame her. Yesh, maybe it does sucks and is shitty!
?: Geez, someone complimented you, a lot.
Me: Yeah, thanks for that! ^^ Anyway, enjoy!
Chapter 11: SHE'S BACK!
Date: 2nd August
"L-Lucy...?"
Everyone widened their eyes as Lucy stood at the door, with a smile on her face. She was completely perfect, no blood stained on her blonde locks and her shirt. She tucked a strand of hair behind her ear before shouting: 'I'm back!'
Rogue stood there as he watched HIS Lucy being hugged by Natsu and Sting mostly. Lucy looked at Rogue and her smile widened. She waved, gesturing him to come here as well. He was utterly confused.
"I need my answer now," Lucy said, her smile still adorned on her face.
Rogue blinked, it had dawned on him. He flashed her a small smile before hugging her.
"Yeah, you're mine," he whispered as he smirked and blushed slightly, "I felt jealous to see you with boys."
"Me too," Lucy replied, kissing Rogue on his cheeks.
"YUKINO! OUR PLAN WORKED! THE JEALOUSY ONE!" Sting exclaimed, his eyes glittered with amusement.
Yukino nodded and laughed whole heartedly, pointing at Lucy. Apparently, Lucy had a confused look, along with Rogue.
"What's so funny?" Lucy intrigued, her anger slowly rising.
Yukino stopped upon seeing her glaring, but it softened after Yukino shaking her head.
"So, what happened, Lucy/child?" Jiemma and Makarov stated in unison, "Jinx..."
Everyone burst out laughing. The gloomy atmosphere had turned happy and merry. Only Natsu was giving out a sad and depressed aura. His heart broke upon knowing that Lucy loves Rogue. He clenched his fist and bit his lips.
"Lucy... Um, I'm sorry for all I had done!" Lisanna immediately bowed to 90 degrees.
Lucy accepted her apology and they became best friends. They laughed when Lisanna told Lucy how Natsu used to be when he was a child.
"Yeah, he really pissed his pants when he found out we were missing!" Lisanna told.
Lucy laughed. Oh, how sweet her laughter is. Natsu smiled slightly. He hated Rogue. He wished Rogue never existed. He closed his eyes and Lucy appeared in his mind. He wondered what would happen if he never ignored her. He regretted everything.
"Spend your time Lucy. WISELY. Your life is going to be a nightmare. I'll make sure of it. Spend your time. I'll come for you... soon."
TA DA! SO SHORT!
Me: Okay, so this girl here -points at the girl- is actually Lucy. Anyway, this is her 'last day'. Say bye.
Lucy: BYE! AND YOU! -points at me- If anyone insults you again, call me! IM GOING TO KILL THEM! AND THAT PERSON NAMED LUCY FAN ISNT MY FAN AT ALL! HMPH! -runs to Rogue and locks the door-
Me: -blushes when I hear something- Whatever. SEE U ON THE NEXT CHAPTER!
