Well...1st of all, thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you for all the reviews!! i was so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so happy!!
2nd, dont get me wrong, i like getting constructive critisism. but when it gets to the point when people are telling me "i dont care if you delete this story" (you know who you are) i get mad. thats it. i get mad. its not right, it doesnt make me feel good, and it deff doesnt help me write.
3rd, i was never going to delete this story. i will never, ever, ever, delete a story. i just wanted the reviews. i promise you that i will NEVER delete any of my stories.
4th, if you dont like a story, dont read it! honestly, really! can you remember what it was like when you were in like 5th grade, and you picked up a book and read the first chapter and never picked it up again? Can you? well, Can you? (extra points if you can name where the line "do you? well, do you?" is from hint broadway musical) so just stop reading it. leave 1 review telling me why you didnt like it, and then just ignore the story. ive done that a lot, believe me.
5th, if you give me a review just that has a little mistake in it, i will take that into account when im writing my next chapter. but if you try to get me to change my entire style of writing (this hasnt happened yet) im not going to change it. sry, im not.
Hmmm I'm watching season 4. Alexis Bledel looks so different!!
ok, long author's note over. on with the story!
and now, for your reading pleasure, i present to you, A Trip to Disney, chapter 10!! (applause)
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Chapter 10: Ripley's Believe it or Not! Museum
previously:
"Lorelai! He'll find a place to stay. I promise you!" Luke half-yelled at Lorelai. He was tired from the long drive and was annoyed by her questioning.
"Sorry." Lorelai said, hurt by his words. She was surprised when she felt tears come to her eyes. 'It's not a big deal Lorelai! Nothing to cry about!' Lorelai thought to herself. But she couldn't stop one tear from falling down her cheek.
"Lorelai," Luke said, his voice changed immensely in tone. It was much more gentle, and he reached his hand out to touch her shoulder.
Lorelai drew back from his touch, her hand reaching to the door handle. "I just don't know what I did." She said, recalling what Rory told her a year ago about when Jess tried to have sex with her in Kyle's bedroom.
"You didn't do anything." Luke said back.
"Like uncle, like nephew." Lorelai muttered.
"What?"
"Are you going to get in a fight with my ex-boyfriend now?"
"Lorelai what are you talking about?" Luke said exasperated.
"Nothing Luke. Nothing. I never talk about anything. Nothing I say means anything. I suppose you think that about what I said back when we pulled over. Hell I'm sure that nothing I ever said means any-" Lorelai was cut off by Luke kissing her hard on the lips.
"Lorelai, I love you. Everything and anything you say to me means everything in the world."
"Well good. And I love you too"
"Oh I know." Luke said, smiling. He kissed her shortly then got out of the car.
Lorelai sighed to herself and put her arms around her stomach. 'How does he make me feel like this?' She asked herself. As an afterthought, she thought 'I don't mind.'
She got out of the car to join her boyfriend in unpacking their stuff to check into the hotel.
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When they were all checked in, Luke and Lorelai in room 407, and Jess in room 421, they met up in room 407 to talk about plans. Lorelai wrote down a schedule of what they decided to do, and put it up on the part of the hall that was halfway in between the two rooms.
12:00-Lunch wherever
1:00-Ripley's Believe it or Not! Museum walk through
3:00-Shopping!
5:00-Wax Museum
6:00-Dinner at restruant near beach
7:00-Beach
8:00-Ghost Tour at Ripleys
10:00-Back to Beach
Lorelai came back to her room after posting the schedule.
"Did you really have to do that?" Luke asked.
"Do what?"
"Post what we're doing where everyone can see it?"
"Well no one will look at it."
"How do you know?"
"Think, if you saw someone's day schedule, would you look at it?"
"No."
"There you go, you proved my point." Lorelai said, and sat down next to Luke on the couch.
"Lorelai, are we good?" Luke asked suddenly.
"What?"
"You're not mad at me are you?"
"No why would I be?"
"Because of, I don't know, Jess or something."
"No Luke, I promise you, I'm not mad at you, and I don't plan to be in the future."
Luke kissed Lorelai, and it turned very heated. He layed her down on the couch, and she started to unbutton his flannel. Luke looked at her.
"Are you sure?" He asked.
"Yes." Lorelai said simply, and they went back to passionately kissing, until, when Luke's flannel was lying on the floor along with his baseball cap, they heard a knock on the door.
Luke gave Lorelai an apologetic look and got up to answer the door. "What?"
"Luke, nice shirt." Jess said.
"Stop, what do you want?"
"I was wondering if you guys were going to come to lunch or not, it's 12:15."
"What? It's 12:15?" Lorelai said, coming up behind Luke.
"Go get dressed, and I'll meet you at the elevator." Jess said, smiling and walking away.
"I promise, we'll finish that tonight." Luke said, putting on his flannel and his cap.
"Good."
"Very." Luke said as they walked out the door.
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All three of them had lunch at a place called Bertucchi's. Lorelai got pizza, a burger, and fries, Luke got a salad, and Jess got a pizza and pasta.
"Wow! This is good!" Lorelai exclaimed when she took a bite of her burger.
"Better than mine?" Luke asked.
"Babe, nothing is better than yours." Lorelai said. "And yes I do realize that was dirty.
Jess laughed and asked, "How are you going to eat a burger and pizza?"
"Hello?! I'm Lorelai Gilmore I can eat anything." Lorelai replied.
"Oh right, I forgot." Jess said lamely.
"Sure." Lorelai said. "You knew us for how long?"
"Okay, now you're offically acting like 2 year olds." Luke said.
"Well Luke, that's what we are at heart." Lorelai said.
Luke sighed and continued eating.
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"So where to now?" Luke asked as they walked out of the restaurant.
"Um...Ripley's Believe It Or Not! Museum." Lorelai answered.
"Hey guys, I think I'm gonna go do something else." Jess said.
"What why?" Lorelai asked.
"So you can do something alone." Jess answered, pulling out a map of St. Augustine.
"Well in that case go away." Lorelai said with a smile.
"Yeah, yeah. I'll meet you back here in 2 hours." Jess said.
"Okay!" Lorelai said and she and Luke walked back to the car.
"What was that?" Luke asked as he closed the door.
"That was Jess being nice." Lorelai answered.
"Since when is Jess nice?" Luke asked.
"Since now." Lorelai answered.
"Yeah."
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Luke and Lorelai arrived at the museum at 1:00. They walked inside, bought tickets, and started walking through the museum.
"Hey look at that!" Lorelai said, pointing to a shrunken head.
"That's gross."
"Yeah, but it's cool." Lorelai replied. They walked up the steps to the next floor.
The first room they entered was a room with weird artifacts. Then they went by very realistic looking statues of a person taking a picture of his wife. It made it look like you had to stop to wait until the people took their pictures.
Lorelai was looking down at a car that was under the staircase and she looked up.
"Oh my God!" She jumped into Luke's arms. Right in front of her was a huge moose head through the wall of a fake cabin.
"Lorelai!" Luke said, steading her.
"My God that's creepy." Lorelai said loudly.
"Lorelai, everybody's looking at us." Luke said, pushing her into the next room. The room was really dark, with some writing on the wall lit up.
"Wow. Thick glass." Lorelai said, looking into a glass case with a thick piece of glass that had been shot by a bullet, and it didn't go through it.
"Yeah." Luke said.
"I want it." Lorelai said, turning to Luke.
"Think you're going to get shot anytime soon?" Luke asked skeptically.
"Way to ruin the fun." Lorelai said as the went forward.
Next was a bunch of medival times torture weapons.
"Eww look at that. Can you imagine having that around your neck?" Lorelai said, looking at a collar-type thing with spikes poking out.
"Okay that's gross." Luke said, moving on.
"Hey!" Lorelai called after him. "Will you get into the spirit of things?"
"Lorelai, that was gross."
"Yeah it was, but you haven't talked about anything at all this whole time."
"There's nothing to talk about." Luke said, as they walked into a room with a bunch of games that were impossible to beat.
"Nothing to talk about! We're in a building full of weird stuff and you can't find anything to talk about?" Lorelai said.
"Lorelai. Why are you so upset about this?" Luke asked. People were starting to stare at them.
"Nothing. It's just, why can't you loosen up just for this trip?" Lorelai asked quietly.
"I'll loosen up. I promise." Luke said to Lorelai.
"Promise?" She said in a small voice.
"I promise." Luke said, giving Lorelai a kiss.
"Wow. I made a scene." Lorelai said, looking around at all the people that were watching them.
"No, people just don't have lives." Luke said as they went to try and do the games.
Luke was staring at a dot and watching the stuff around it move when Lorelai pulled him away.
"Hey! What are you doing?" Luke asked.
"Come here. Do this." Lorelai said, putting him in front of a cardboard thing with words on the wall. "How many f's do you see in these words?" Lorelai asked.
Luke counted to himself. "6." He said.
"What? How did you get that?" Lorelai asked. She only counted 3. The whole idea is that people usually look over the f's in of. There were 3 of's in the paragraph.
"There's those three," Luke said, pointing at the f's in the bigger words, "and there's the ones in the of's."
"My God, my boyfriend is smart." Lorelai said, smiling.
"Yeah well," Luke said, moving away from the f thing.
"Hey Luke?" Lorelai said, as a sudden rush of happiness went through her.
"Yeah?" He said turning around.
"Kiss me."
"What?" Luke said. "There's people around."
"So? We will never see any of these people ever again. Please kiss me." Lorelai asked.
Luke didn't move so Lorelai moved forward and captured his lips in a hard, passionate kiss. The people that had seen them fighting before smiled.
They broke apart, and Luke asked, "What was that about?"
"You're perfect." Lorelai said.
Luke smiled, put his arm around her waist, and they continued through the museum.
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So...that was really short, and really bad. I'm so sorry. It was HORRIBLE. but that's just for an update, I promise it will get better.
weiver a evael (That's leave a review if you're dumb)
