I tried for comedy, and failed. I ended up using something beyond cheesy since my OC's having annoying personalities and its tough to create humor. I'm almost finished with my next chapter and it is going to be beyond exciting. It all starts with a pointless game of truth or dare and turns into a life threatening situation ;). I'm alot better at writing dramatically and romantically than I am at writing good ol' comedy. Bah.
The word of the day is: SCOFF.
Thank you to my reviewers for once again making my day! I will post the next chapter tomorrow and possibly extend it if my reviewers INSPIRE me. Thank you Claire Ride for constantly reviewing!
Annabethisthebest: I put that incase I decide later in the story to reveal main parts of TLH, as a caution to avoid PO'd readers
To all the anonymous viewers~ thank you(:
PLEASE KEEP REVIEWING AND I'LL KEEP WRITING.
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- ALL THE CHARACTERS BELONG TO RICK RIORDAN. I DO NOT OWN PJO OR ANY OTHER RICK RIORDAN SERIES!
Annabeth's P.O.V
After a few minutes, I had to give up chasing Jacoby for my drawing. I had to get to my last class. It was pretty boring since nobody I knew had it. I met a girl named Danielle who could be a potential friend. We talked about our summers a little bit until the math teacher caught us and warned us to shut up. I wanted to keep talking, but Danielle is too 'goody goody' to defy a teacher. When I left class and headed to my locker, Alexa stopped me.
"OH MY GOSH ANNIE, GUESS WHAT!" She shouted.
"Uh… what?" I asked.
"Percy asked ME to Smalls Parks tonight!" She squealed. I felt the rage of jealousy bubbling up inside me.
"Fantastic" I said sarcastically. She didn't seem to notice.
"I KNOW RIGHT!" She exclaimed. I walked to my locker and heard her yell "Toodles Annie!" I groaned. Alexa could be so annoying sometimes. Why would Percy ask out a girl like HER? I opened my locker swiftly only to find Castillo leaning next to my locker.
"Hey" He said.
"Hi, whats up?" I asked.
"Oh um… I was… um… wondering… if you would… if you could… go to Smalls Park with me tonight?" He said. I could tell he was super nervous by the sweat on his forehead. Then I looked over his shoulder and saw Percy staring at me. A light bulb lit up in my mind- I would make Percy jealous!
"Yeah…sure" I replied.
"Oh cool. Just meet me there at 8 okay?" He said.
"Defiantly, see you there" I said in the nicest voice possible. I suppressed a smile, and then I pursed my lips and turned back to my locker over excitedly, bubbling with determination. I could feel Percy staring at me. I jogged down the hallway and out the back door to the buses and got on my bus- bus 98. I sat alone in a seat at the back and started thinking about what I would wear to Smalls Park tonight.
I wonder why Percy would ask Alexa out. I mean, she is my 'best friend' so I shouldn't be pissed. I am usually not jealous- at least not THIS jealous. Saying yes to Castillo was not a wise move. I don't want to disappoint him or anything, since I don't really like him. But he seems like a decent guy; maybe I'll like him overtime.
I got home and ran up to my room to plan out some clothes. Normally I would just throw on a t-shirt and pair of jeans- but in order to make Percy jealous I needed something better. After an hour of trying on clothes, I finally found a fancy tank top and cute pair of short shorts that looked perfect. I smiled at my image in the mirror and put on a little bit of mascara and lip gloss. Like I said earlier, I am not a big make-up fan. I had three hours to spare, so I turned on my computer and got on the new chat website called ChatRoomZ. The idea of a chat room is kind of cool if a lot of people are online. I looked up a few profiles and found Castillo and Danielle's and added them. Turns out that Alexa, Danielle, Alyssa, Kate and Castillo were all online. I started a chat room and invited all of them, waiting for them to join.
After about 10 minutes everyone had accepted their invited and joined my chat room.
Annabeth16: Hey guys
AlexPerfection: Oh hey Annie
CastilloMan: Hi Annabeth
KatesLate: Hi guys!
AliLuvsYou: Hey people.
Dani55: Hi Annabeth
Annabeth16: Oh guys, that's Danielle.
KatesLate: OOH Danielle, that's a purdy name
AlexPerfection: TOTALLY
AliLuvsYou: So Dani, are you coming to Smalls Park tonight?
Dani55: Na, I've gotta babysit.
AlexPerfection: Oh that sucksss.
CastilloMan: Yea, shame.
AliLuvsYou: Ahem- Castillo… whats up with the name?
CastilloMan: What you don't think I'm a man?
AliLuvsYou: Maybe… ;)
CastilloMan: ALI! I so am.
AliLuvsYou: PROVE IT.
Annabeth16: Guys…
CastilloMan: OKAY ALYSSA- what would make me a 'man'?
AliLuvsYou: Easy Castillo. Have you ever kissed a girl?
*5 minutes of silence*
AlexPerfection: OOH Castillo has never kissed a girl.
KatesLate: OOOH.
Dani55: Don't make fun of him guys!
AliLuvsYou: Hah. He is SO not a man.
Perce22 has logged in.
Perce22: Castillo I figured it out… I just had to press the join button :)
AliLuvsYou: OOH Percy- Castillo has never kissed a girl!
KatesLate: HAHA
AlexPerfection: Rofl
Perce22: I can see this is a private conversation… I better go…
AlexPerfection: NO PERCY it's just getting good ;)
CastilloMan has logged out.
KatesLate: What a wuss.
AlexPerfection: TELL ME ABOUT IT!
Annabeth16: So…
AliLuvsYou: So Kate, are you coming to Smalls Park tonight?
KatesLate: Of course, with Alexa silly ;)
AlexPerfection: Yea duh!
AliLuvsYou: I thought Alexa was going with Percy?
KatesLate: She is- and with me DUH.
Percy22 has logged out.
AlexPerfection: Where did my boyfriend go!
AliLuvsYou: He isn't your boyfriend lol.
KatesLate: Oh please, he is SO into her.
KatesLate has been banned for 20 minutes because of lying.
AlexPerfection: WHAT! He is totally into me RIGHT ANNIE?
Annabeth16 has logged out.
Dani55 had logged out.
AliLuvsYou has logged out.
AlexPerfection: So… anyone left?
AlexPerfection has logged out.
I grabbed my purse and car keys and sprinted out the door. Smalls Park, here I come.
