Chapter Elevan of a very, very Gary-Stu fanfiction titled "Tom"


"Handsomepaw, from this moment you will be known as Handsomehandsome. StarClan honors your honesty and loyalty... Er..." Bramblestar quickly renamed the virtues, for Handsomehandsome was neither honest nor loyal. "StarClan honors your strength in battle and smexiness and we welcome you as a full warrior of ThunderClan."

Bramblestar rested his chin on Handsomehandsome's head, feeling hatred for this tom. He wasn't his son. Squirrelflight had once again lied to him. But, how could he blame this kit for something he didn't do? He didn't ask to be born to an incestious she-cat and medicine cat.

Handsomehandsome felt an odd emotion stirring in his chest. He first felt it when his father rested his chin on his head, ending the ceremony. It was... The emotion of... sadness? Guilt? He felt sad. He was sad that he never got to spend time with his father. It was a very odd feeling.

He licked the leader's shoulder. Finally, the Clan cheered and congratulated the new warrior. "HANDSOMEHANDSOMEHANDSOMEHANDSOMEHANDSOMEHANDSOME!"

StarClan flickered in the broad light of day because ThunderClan screamed his name so loud that they woke up the warrior ancestors.

Bramblestar gasped and fell over, rolling over the edge of the Highledge and falling down to the stony earth with a thud. The Clan gasped.