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Chapter 11

20 minutes earlier in 3ed music room

All the host club members had been called to assembled in the club room by Tamaki for a meeting. Tamaki sat in the darkest furthest corner a plethora of mushrooms growing around him, he had gone into such depths of despair that half the room was absorbed in darkness mushroom seemed to cover every surface a mixture of poisonous yellows and greens. fungi was slowly creeping towards the entrance as the 5 host club who were not in the second year entered, all anxious about what had happened that they needed to be pulled away from lessons in the middle of the day none of them too unhappy about that apart fromHaruhi. Sitting at the table farthest away from Tamaki was Kyoya typing away on his keyboard so vigorously that it was in danger of being crushed into dust by the battering of his fingers a dark cloud of negative energy swirled around his head the low blood Pressure daemon had raisin. The 5 new rivals gave a start as a loud thunderclap rumpled through the room shaking it, coming from the cloud surrounding Kyoya.

Hikaru and Kaoru-" what happened my lord........................ he never had so many mushrooms before............ there's a purple one with grey spots........ aren't those poisonous?"

Honey-"aaaaaaaaaaaauuuuuu I don't like it there taking over "

Honey leaps onto the back of Mori crawls up his body in till he is resting on his shoulders his eyes sparkling with tears clutching Bun-Bun to his chest.

Kyoya speaking through gritted teeth" just watch out for the yellow ones their carnivorous...... one of the teachers was already been sent to the medical block........ We could be sued for this "

Haruhi –" is the teacher all right?"

Kyoya-" there reattaching the fingers now, go try and get Tamaki he caused enough damage for one day ."

Haruhi-"eeeeeeerrrrrr isn't it too dangerous to go near".

Kyoya-" not unless you want to be billed for today's damages."

Haruhi-" okay I'm going."

Haruhi tiptoed through the mushrooms carefully avoiding a patch of particularly vicious ones which the twins had somehow managed to become the centre of. Managing to get five meats away from Tamaki before the ground became to crowded the pathway completely blocked with poisonous pustules she was able to see that the cute boy had fallen into such despair that he had started to sprout mushrooms himself right down the spine of his back." what's wrong Tamaki? Are you all right?"

"EEEEEEEEEEEEDDDDDDDDDD................. elle me déteste"

" Japanese please"

" EEEEEEEEEEDDDDDDDD............... she hates me "

Tamaki suddenly burst into tears causing the room to flood with water washing away the mushrooms, freeing the twins which had been attacked by the yellow pustules and were keeping them at bay with a Chippendale chair and a long whip, swotting them away as they plunged forwards similar to that of the ring master and his lion. Tamaki ran to Haruhi and buried his head in her shoulder as he continued to sob.

Haruhi- " can't now don't be like that, I'm sure it's just a misunderstanding, how do you know if she hates you."

"parce que je suis allé à son étreinte………… et puis elle a tordu le bras……….. moi et agrafées à l'enseignant de bureau……….. et m'a laissé………. et j'ai frappé ma tête……….. et elle a fait Kyoya vraiment fou."

"Tamaki please I don't understand French"

"Je suis trop bouleversée pour parler japonais dès maintenant"

Kyoya-" he's saying-

because I went over to hug her …………………..and then she twisted my arm …………………..and stapled me to the teacher's desk ……………….and left me…….. and I hit my head ……………..and she made Kyoya really mad…… I'm too distressed to speak Japanese right now."

smiles suddenly burst across twins faces, they look like identical Cheshire cats evil grins floating in midair.

" Ed stapled my lord to the teacher's table?………….. and what could she have done to make dear mother so distressed?"

nobody noticed a black door suddenly appear in the wall, ever one was too interested in the conversation, Tamaki had stopped crying but was still a bag of nerves. The water had disappeared and as they talked Mori tidied the clubroom till it was sparkiness radians once again.

Kyoya-" I'm not in distress, I am simply annoyed with the trouble that girl has caused"

as he mention that girl the storm clouds seem to think, thunder rang out through the clubroom again, hiding the sound of the door opening and a figures stepping through.

"il ne n'est pas le cas, elle lui a humilié devant toute la classe, par la correction de lui quand il a été fait un à bord de l'équation en maths, elle l'a fait de telle manière qu'il est très embarrassant."

Haruhi-" goodness sake if you can't talk properly how am I supposed to understand you."

A cool voice suddenly rang out through the room slightly amused by the conversation she had interrupted translating Tamaki words perfectly

Ed- " he saying …… no he's not, she humiliated him in front of the whole class, by correcting him when he was doing an equation on board in maths, she did it in such a way that it was very embarrassing."

the whole room stood still the host club slowly turned to find Ed not 3 feet from , almost as if she were some dark creature that had appeared by magic out from the shadows. It took several seconds but for everyone to react,Takashi at seeing his sister sank to the floor muttering in French dragging Haruhi with him, Kyoya face turned cold and hard shuttering his laptop he turned to face the enemy, Mori stays stationary as ever as honey jumped from the shoulders fist clenched, Hikaru and Kaoru the closest to Ed were the last to react bringing out a giant crucifix both grasping it they thrust it towards Ed and screams.

" speak of the devil and it shall appear … DEVIL BE GON"

Ed slowly walked towards the 2 twins,took the glittering silver cross from their hands, bought it slowly to her lips and lightly kissed it red lips touching cold metal her grey eyes sparkling dangerously in the light.

" my dear boys I'm afraid this only works on the undead"

Ed Lowing the crucifix to her side reached out with her other hand and gently took Kaoru hand in hers, pulling him slowly towards her eyes locked with his she gently placed his hand on her breast and whispered.

" can you feel it Kaoru....... my heartbeat, I'm not here to suck your blood"

" how do you know who I am? How do you know I'm Kaoru?"

" you feel different..... something erotic"

All the host club gaze upon the scene there was something hypnotic about her movements, you wanted to turn away but couldn't you felt as if she was speaking to you, holding your hand, whispering in your ear making you little promises to fulfill the deepest darkest dream you only let out on the darkest nights. She was doing exactly what Tamaki did every day capturing the hearts of people bending them to her will she was simply more skilled at it and was prepared to use it to her advantage.

" now if you would kindly step aside I which to speak with my brother"

the twins stepped aside their gaze fixed upon her as were the rest of the men in the room the air in the room seemed to think as she walked her aroma drifting on the breeze like some powerful perfume of attraction, Haruhi was gazing at Tamaki face in worry as Ed knelt before them.

" okay i'm going to level with you, I'm sorry, i'm not a touchy-feely person, and i don't do hugs but that's no excuse for hurting you and stapling You to a desk it was wrong and I am sorry. In my defence I can count on one hand how many times I've been hugged and still leave a fingers standing, you surprise me and when I'm surprised I resort to violence. I can't say I'm am going to go round hugging you but I really want this to work, for you to be my brother. That's why I'm asking your forgiveness , now I don't believe in forgiveness coming three that makes repenting meaningless, so I'm going to offer you a deal I will do one thing that you want me to do and do it as long as I am able this I give you my word.

The trance the host club when in was broken by Ed's change of tone she had become more serious. with each sentence she spoke the happier the blonde French man became a smile spread across his face when he heard the words "for you to be my brother". obtain her hands remembering she did not like to be hugged and shook them saying in his native tongue the words .

"Je vous donne le pardon et d'accepter votre offer… à partir de maintenant vous êtes à faire partie du club hôte!"

Everybody screaming " WHAT "

Ed -"sanglante enfer"

Tamak smiling repeated himself in Japanese-" I give you forgiveness and accept your deal........... from now on you are to be part of the host club."

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