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Chapter 10- Lightning

A storm looked to be forming, black clouds edged lurid green boiling across the pale sky, blotting out sunlight, turning the air to ice. A thin wind, sharp as knifes, keened across the rock plain, slicing and sleeting and slapping them to their knees.

Bail and Obi-wan was walking through an open area between two far tree lines. Ha it looks exactly like the game Taren made Obi-wan do, Sasha thought.

The rain came down like blaster bolts, soaking them within seconds. Exploding against the surrounding rock and their exposed skin as though each drop was an iron ball and the rock was made of metal.

Bail looked at his hands and arms, expecting to see running blood. But it was water, only water. So he tilted his head back and opened his mouth and let the deluge pour over his parched tongue and down his throat.

Obi-wan grabbed him and shook him.

"What are you doing?" the Jedi shouted, staccato, teeth chattering with the cold. "Not tested—could be dangerous—"

"If it's poison, than I'm poisoned," he shouted back. "And you're as wet as I am, so that means so are you!"

Obi-wan stared at him as the merciless rain hammered down.

"Good point."

"And at least we won't die of thirst now."

"No, but we could drown!"

He laughed.

"Or get struck by lightning!"

Sasha gaped. Did he just say that?

"Don't say it!" said Obi-wan. "You fool, don't even…"

And a blue spear of lightning stabbed toward the ground. Sasha screamed and turned away.

"You idiot! You had to say it!"

More lightning pierced the clouds, thunder roaring behind it. The freezing air crackled. The rain turned to ice. Little pellets, little splinters, little razors kissing flesh.

"Oh, this is not good," Obi-wan said. "Not good at all."

Sasha nodded. No, it wasn't.

Bail curled his arms over his head, tucked his chin to his chest, and made himself the smallest possible target. Sasha followed his lead. She heard Bail groan, hear Obi-wan near her in his own distress. More lightning. More thunder.

And then suddenly as it started, the raging storm stopped.


Wow! It's raining! It's pouring! The readers are snoring! Hahaha I'm a riot!