Another update…another writing cramp in my hands…ugh
I'm not even bothering with this anymore…it is very clear I am not Toriyama…
I got an e-mail from a reader about how I made Zarbon and Dadoria too violent in the last chapter; to put it clearly I didn't they were in full character, anyone who has seen the Freiza Saga in JAPANESE will know just how down right unmerciful those two really are. Dadoria kills Dende's brother Kargo in cold blood, there is smoke coming off his dead body as Dende screams and tries to wake him up. Dadoria also kills all of Dende's family and blood is everywhere although in the dub it's all painted over. Frankly Dadoria is more violent then Zarbon in my opinion…in both English and Japanese!
Also you remember the fight Vegeta and Zarbon had? Zarbon head butts Vegeta in the face SIX times instead of the ONE head butt we see in the dub, in these scenes in the Japanese version Vegeta has blood all over him and Zarbon has Vegeta's blood covering his gloves!
So basically I modeled the Zarbon and Dadoria in my fiction to act like the ones in the Japanese version, I felt it would make the emotion of the battles seem more…traumatic. Anyway for anyone who is thinking of commenting on anyone's personality in my story, I'm trying to model all the bad guys to how they act in the Japanese version, which to anyone who has only seen the trashy sainthood dubbed version wouldn't really know about. Because of that I am happy to explain.
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Trip through Time
Chapter Eleven:
Mission: Rescue Vegeta!
Raditz looked out into the rocky area as he stepped out of the base; clutching his stomach injury he started out, he had to find Pan and Bra. He reached into his armor for his scouter, if he couldn't see them maybe his scouter could pick up their power levels. He put his scouter on and pressed the button and looked around Damn, nothing…who in their right mind would be out here in the first place, WILLINGLY! he thought; then the scouter came alive and two power levels appeared on the red colored class and they kept rising. He looked at the distance of where the readings were coming from Okay…both power readings are a little ways east of here… "WHOA!" Raditz jumped when the machine exploded into pieces, the remains were still hooked onto his ear but it was burned. "Jeez…the thing must have malfunctioned or something, no way the girl's power readings could be high enough to make the scouter blow up like that" Raditz said looking out to where the scouter picked up the two readings. "Well, I better go see if it's them, better be careful though…no telling who it could be…"
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I can understand Bra being upset but we can't just sit here, maybe we can some how get Vegeta to understand… Pan thought, she really wasn't too happy about the whole situation either. In their time zone Vegeta had often allowed her to spar with him and Bra; since her grandfather had gone off to train that boy Uub she had know one really to play with or train with. Her father was always getting ready for meetings and played with her when ever he got the time. Goten was more interested in finding a date but did train with her when he had nothing else to do. She learned to bake a few treats from her grandmother Chi Chi, and her mother would spar when she wasn't busy. But the only time she ever had fun anymore was when she was training with her friend Bra, her father liked having his daughter train with him, he even scheduled times to train together during the day. To be frank Pan was rather jealous of her friend but never took it out on her.
"What's that?" surprised by Bra's sudden comment Pan looked towards the direction she was looking, she saw a black dot heading their way at a light speed, whoever it was, was kicking up an awful lot of the gritty dust on the ground. As the figure came closer they became more visible until they could tell who it was by the mass of black hair flying behind them.
"IT'S RADITZ!" Pan screamed, looking at their current situation Raditz must have been looking for them…and knew what happen and was out to capture them.
"Come on lets get out of here!" Bra yelled and jumped off the edge of the cliff with Pan following her lead; the air whipped at her face as she fell to the ground below, the moment her foot touched the ground she was off running, she heard Pan's footsteps behind her as she ran and she was shocked to hear another person's footsteps behind her. She looked behind her and saw Pan right behind her…and saw Raditz behind them as well and running at break neck speed to catch up to them.
"BRA, PAN! STOP!" Raditz screamed he knew they might run after what happened…but he never knew that they could run THAT fast! He had to get them to stop, running was just wasting time and that could mean the end of Vegeta's life.
"NO! IF YOU CATCH US YOU'LL ATTACK US!" Pan yelled.
"I WILL NOT ATTACK YOU!" Raditz yelled; hearing the yelling match between Pan and her uncle Bra debated on weather to stop or not, Raditz could attack them for what happened, or then again he might not…she couldn't be sure. She and Pan couldn't keep running forever and she did want to set things right, she would let him talk…but she was going to make it so he couldn't attack just in case. Bra hopped into the air and turned around digging her heel into the ground almost hitting Pan who ran past her; she crossed her arms in front of her and powered up as a bubble of purple light in gulfed her.
"GOLAMOSE!" She threw her hands out as the bubble that surrounded her shot away from her and headed right at Raditz, the bubble closed around him stealing him in. It was another defense spell; it was a bubble of the casters energy that trapped the target inside and left them unable to attack, but the caster could attack the one in it if they like. The spell didn't work if the targets power level was higher then the casters, but she would never tell Raditz that. It seemed like her knowledge in Saiyan Spell Casting was paying off a lot, she floated down to where Raditz stood trying to kick his way out of the bubble. Now that she was closer and saw able to see him well she saw that he was pretty ragged out. "Okay Raditz…why are you here?" Bra asked.
"I need your help!" Raditz said look at the girl from inside the bubble "Its Vegeta, he needs our help!"
"Why? What happened?" Pan asked walking over to stand beside Pan.
"Well a little after you left Tori's office Vegeta came in pretty banged up. We asked what happened and Vegeta told us about Ginyu and finding a tracker on Bra. Tori suggested that we let you explain and we went to find you; after a bit me and Vegeta went to his room to think of where to look next, Nappa decided to re trace our steps. That was when Zarbon and Dadoria attacked us." Raditz saw that he had the girls attention now and continued telling the story "Zarbon pinned Vegeta and Dadoria started pounding me…Vegeta…he told me to run for it…to get away so I could find you two and help him"
"This just went from bad to worst" Pan said looking at Bra.
"Where is Vegeta now?" Bra asked.
"He's…he's probably in the Holding Compound" Raditz said "It's a level in the base that only Freiza's top fighters like Zarbon and Dadoria can get into. The place is equipped with some kind of force field that only lets the strong fighters and weak fighters in, but if a weak fighter tries to get out…lets just say they'll get more then a little shock" Raditz said. "The place is where those who disobey Freiza are sent to rot, most of the time it's just for punishment…others its for life and they don't even bother to remove any dead corpses still in the cells and there are skeletons all over the place" Raditz could feel the skin of his face paling as he remembered the whole thing.
"Can' he just fight his way out of there?" Pan asked.
"No he can't; that place is guarded by Freiza's Super Elite guards who are those that are a few levels lower then Zarbon and Dadoria. If he tried to fight his way out he'd either be killed on the spot or be treated as a punching bag. Also… I don't know what the bars and walls down there are made of, but whatever it is drains your energy away…I was thrown down there for punishment once…the place made me sick, the feeling that the energy draining and the smell of rotting flesh. Vegeta and Nappa tried to get me out but…well lets just say they had to spend nearly a whole day healing in Tori's Healing Chamber" Raditz said.
"Bra, you know more then I do that we have to get Vegeta out of there" Pan said looking at her partner; Bra nodded in agreement, she no longer felt that Raditz might harm them, she held her hands out in front of her and slowly moved them to her sides, as she did the bubble faded and Raditz was free.
"Thanks now come on!" Raditz began running back to the base.
"So how far down is this place?" Pan asked as she and Bra followed.
"It's practically near the bottom of the damn planet; but we can't go there just yet, we need to find Nappa first and I would feel better if Tori was told what's going on, he's not going to like this one bit" Raditz said.
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He couldn't move; his whole body hurt and on top of that he felt like he had been through a war, considering what he had been through before he was thrown in here he had been in a war. He was just glad that his tail had finally lost feeling in it; Zarbon had rammed his foot on it so many times that either all the bones in it were broken or it had just gone numb. If the bones were broken; then when the others got here they would have to cut it off, with a broken tail there was no way he could walk on his own, he would lose his balance every step and fall on the floor. But then again the same could be said even if it was cut off, at least he wouldn't have something dead dragging around behind him. He didn't like the idea of losing his tail; sure it would grow back after a few weeks and with it gone none of his enemies could use that weakness against him. But it was the meaning behind losing his tail that bothered him; back on Planet Vegeta a Saiyan was de tailed after he had committed a dishonorable act, an act such as dishonoring his or her family, dishonoring their mates family or treason.
He opened his eyes to see the dim lighting that the Holding Compound always had. He was lying on the metal floor; whoever had carried him here didn't even put him on the bed in the corner of the cell. Looking around he saw that he was the only on in this cell, good that meant he didn't have anyone that could cause him problems. Most of the time if you got put in a cell with someone else in this place…they would kill you, also at least he didn't get a cell with a body in it. Deciding that maybe if he went to lay on the bed then nobody would see him, there by no one would bother him, the bed was in a dark corner. He dragged himself to his feet, hissing at the pain screaming through his body he got to his feet, and almost fell to the floor due to the loss of balance that his tail normally gave him. Stumbling as he did he walked to the bed and sat down, he leaned back into the wall and stayed still, hoping that maybe not moving would stop the throbbing in every part of his body.
I wonder if Raditz found the girls yet… He looked over at the bars of the cell that were made of some strange blue metal; he wouldn't even bother trying to bend them open. When Raditz had gotten out of here and Raditz told him how the bars in the Holding Compound were dangerous; he had tried to break the bars and get out, but the bars practically electrocuted him and sent him slamming into the wall, and after the fight with Zarbon and Dadoria he didn't want to be slammed into anything else. What the hell is in my armor? Whatever it is it's poking me he reached into his armor and pulled out the silver locket Now I remember, I put this in my armor before Zarbon and Dadoria came in and attacked us. It seems that there's no damage to it… He toyed with the locket, moving it to one of his hands to the next, looking it over to figure out how it could look so much like his mothers locket.
"I guess the only way to find out anything is to open it" Vegeta said out loud, placing both index fingers to the opening of the locket he easily opened it. What he saw in it did more the startle him. In the locket were two pictures; the picture that was in his own locket with his mother and father, with himself at one months old being held by his mother whom he had never got to know. The other picture on the left side frame was what spooked him; a woman with blue hair, an older woman with blond hair holding flowers, a lavender haired man with an odd animal on his shoulder. Also in the picture was a teenaged boy older the Raditz with lavender hair and blue eyes smiling at whoever was taking the picture. Then there were the two in the picture that really got his mind racing; the last two in the picture was that girl Bra, the other was a man who looked very much like himself, only older.
"What…what hell is going on here…" Vegeta was at a loss at what to really think; it couldn't be Bra's family, the black haired man in the photo looked very much like a Saiyan, he even had the hair style that all Royal Saiyan males were born with. But Bra said her father was killed, and it was ridiculous to even think that some how there was a Saiyan who had identical looks as a Royal Saiyan male. How could Bra have a locket that looked just like his mothers when the locket was custom made, and had a picture of his parents in it, and then the photo with the man resembling him with her in the picture. He was thinking so much his head was starting to spin; he closed the locket and put it back in his armor…when Raditz and the others came to get him he would ask her. He didn't really know what to think and there was no rational explanation to anything about the photos. The only person who could answer those questions was Bra…and he was going to get them.
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"Alright…everyone ready?" Raditz asked looking at the trio behind him; the two new fighters Bra and Pan and Vegeta's body guard Nappa. They had found Nappa looking around the Docking Bays when they had run back, when they had gone to tell Tori what had happened he had not been very happy, to be frank he was down right frantic. He had wished them all luck in coming back safely with Vegeta in tow, he had the Healing Chambers all set; it was a defiant possibility that all of them might need the use of it when this was over. Raditz wasn't sure where Vegeta was being held down here, there were thousands of cell blocks down here and finding one person was easier said then done. He just hoped that this time around there weren't many people being held down here as when he was here. Prisoners tended to be violent to anyone, even those who were just passing by the cell door; they even attacked fellow prisoners when they somehow got out of the cell.
Ugh…this place is creepy! Raditz wasn't kidding about this place either, I feel sick… to Bra it looked around the cell block before her; it was all made of rusty metal but surprisingly it was holding up well, the floor however seemed to be made of some kind of odds black stone. The bars of the cells were the weirdest, the metal they were made from was tented a light shade of blue.
"Come on, the sooner we get out of here the better" Raditz said and turned to met them all in the eyes "This place is huge I think it would be a good idea if we split up into groups of two" the others nodded in agreement "Alright then, we'll communicate the usual way…who's in what group?" Raditz asked.
"I guess I'll be with Nappa" Pan said.
"Why do I get a brat for a partner?" Nappa asked, before Pan could throw a comment at him Raditz spoke up.
"Nappa you're the only adult in the group, so whoever is your partner is going to be a kid"
"Fine, but I better not have to put up with any wining" Nappa said, Pan bluntly stuck her tongue out at him.
"Okay so I guess that leaves me with Bra as my partner" Raditz said as the blue haired girl went to stand by him "If you run into trouble contact the other group for help, if you find Vegeta contact the others right away and try to get Vegeta to a safe place…if you can't move him for whatever reason then I'm afraid your on your own to think of something till the other group gets to where you are" Raditz explained "Everyone got that?" everyone nodded as Nappa put his blue scouter on, Raditz put his on as well. "Alright, good luck guys, lets head out" with that the group split up in search of the missing prince.
This place is depressing…I hope dad's okay… Bra turned to look over at Raditz "Hey Raditz, Nappa sure seemed to not mind you bossing him around like that" Bra said deciding that talking was better then walking around in silent.
"Yah he's like that, he lets Vegeta push him around more then I do though…" Raditz replied as the turned a corner.
"Why?"
"Because Vegeta is the prince, and he's the body guard" Raditz said.
"Yah but you know…I would think that he would get mad at you throwing orders at him" Bra said.
"Yah you would think that right? I think after ten years of taking orders from a kid would do that to a person. I don't think that Vegeta ever told you this, but Nappa is a huge idiot, his skull is thicker then stone" Raditz said dryly, Bra laughed.
"Yah he told me…he said Nappa wouldn't be able to guard someone's slivered hand the day I met him"
"Heh…you know what? He's probably right…" Raditz said with pure humor in his voice and looked around him "You know I sometimes wonder if how me and Vegeta are now, is what my life would be like if my brother hadn't been sent on a mission…" Raditz said, Bra was a little spooked at the sudden mention of his brother. "See Vegeta's younger then me so I wonder if how we act around each other, fighting, arguing, making smart remarks behind the others back…I wonder if how that's how me and my brother wouldn't have been"
"So what's his name?" Bra asked, she had to remember to keep her cover.
"His name is Kakarrot; I only saw him once after he was born because I had to go on a mission, unlike me who got our mothers looks, Kakarrot looked like our father, he even had the same hair" Raditz said "I was upset with him at that time…"
"Why? He was only a newborn how could he make you mad?"
"Two reasons; one our mother died giving birth to him, and second…he was born a third class fighter" Raditz said "Our mother was a second class like me, our dad was a third class. When our mother was pregnant with him I was hoping he would be born an Elite to bring honor to our family…didn't work out that way, and to top it off when I found out mom died…" Raditz visibly clinched his hands into fists "I was just so angry I didn't bother to say in the nursery for longer then two seconds to see him…" Raditz looked at the girl behind him "I have to say I kind of regret it now…when I left the nursery I took off for my mission, later I found out he was went to a planet to purge…"
Bra was a little shocked at Raditz's words; when she had been told about Raditz from Piccolo he had said that the guy didn't care if Kakarrot was killed or not, he just wanted him to join him and the others to purge a planet. Did something happen to make Raditz that ruthless? Bra wouldn't put it behind him; this place would turn a normally nice person into a un caring killer. She had to wonder thought…what would Raditz think to find out what the future held for his brother, to be married with two sons and an only granddaughter. That and have the Saiyan prince married to a human woman with a son and younger daughter, he'd probably never believe it, it was a shock to all the Z fighters when they found out who Trunks father was.
"Jeez this place is bigger then I remember…I can't seem to get a reading where on my scouter…" Raditz said, Bra now noticed breaking from her thoughts that Raditz was messing around with his scouter. The material that the walls were made of must also mess up the reading scouters pick up, his scouter was fine before they came into this place. If that was ruing the scouter working…then they had no connection with Pan and Nappa, but time was a high level thing at them moment they couldn't go back. Pan was with Nappa and she and Pan unknown to everyone were stronger then even Freiza, Bra just hoped that neither her nor Pan's group ran across anything…hostile. She was going to have to relay on her ability to sense power levels to get to Vegeta, but she had to figure out how to do it without Raditz noticing.
She began concentrating to find the ki that belonged to her father; there were more then a few other ki readings coming from the other blocks of this place, more then a few were rather high. As they passed a cell that looked rather battered Bra looked away as she noticed a decaying body in the corner, from the looks of the wall whoever it was was hit with a powerful blast. "Not use to seeing a dead body are you?" Raditz asked who didn't seem too bothered about running across a corpse; she didn't want to know what he had been through to be as…numb to something as death…
There's my dads ki! Its really low, I can tell he was in a bad fight…and lost badly… Bra felt rage boil up but she suppressed it, getting angry wasn't the answer to getting herself and Raditz to the cell, plus it wouldn't make sense to Raditz to see her blow up in anger all of a sudden. They were far off from were Vegeta's cell was, they were going in the right direction so far so there was no need to bring up changing the direction they were going, besides Bra didn't sense any ki signals coming from the hall they were going down. For now she would keep quite…until Raditz went the wrong way, then she would have to talk him into going in the same direction.
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Pan was more then sickened by the place; almost every cell had a dead body or a decaying on inside it, she wasn't use to seeing death in front of her, and she sure didn't want that right now! Why did she and Nappa have to take this path? The Saiyan in question looked quite calm as if seeing a body was a daily routine, however she did sense him ready for any attacker. She sensed Bra and Raditz heading over to Vegeta's cell but she didn't make any move to change her and Nappa's course. Before they had headed down here Bra had asked that if they decided to split up down here that she let her and whoever she was with find Vegeta. Bra felt that if anyone attacked her and her partner then at least Pan and her partner would be able to jump in and help, finding this a good choice of action Pan had agreed and took to heading to the cell; however she would try not to have them get too close.
All the while they were walking Nappa didn't seem too happy, was being teamed up with a kid that upsetting to him? Vegeta was four at one time so how is getting paired up with a four year old now any different? Maybe because Vegeta was a boy and she was a girl? Or maybe Nappa was actually worried about Vegeta at the moment and it had nothing to do with her? That would make sense, her grandma Chi Chi always looked a bit angry when any of her family was in danger, or there was a sense they were in danger. She just hoped they could get out of here soon…this place was making her feel weak if not a little sick.
"No ones attacked us so far, heh we might just get out of here without having to us the Healing Chambers to heal" Nappa said in a smug tone; at that moment a cell door was completely blasted off the wall, a muscular mutant with scaly red skin came out of the cell, his bushy pink hair was down to his ankles and he was wearing broken armor, he looked pretty battered. The mutant then set his sights on them, his yellow eyes glowing in the dimly lit hall, and then he attacked with a blast that covered the whole hall hitting both Pan and Nappa. A chunk of the wall fell down and landed on Pan, pushing the metal off of her and finding no injuries on her she turned to Nappa, who was on the ground looking hatefully at the mutant that attacked them.
"Nappa" Pan said getting onto her feet "I wish you hadn't said that… "
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Bra and Raditz had gotten to the hall leading to Vegeta's cell without any attacks; it kind of surprised Bra since how Raditz described it she expected to be attacked not only the moment they entered this place, but every single time they turned a corner, not that she was complaining! When they had gotten to the hall leading to Vegeta she had made the suggestion to turn down another hall, down this hall was the cell her father was in. I hope he isn't too badly injured… just as she thought this she felt her fathers ki signal come from a cell at the very end of the hall, at that moment she forgot that she was not suppose to let Raditz know she could feel where Vegeta was, or that someone could attack her or a trap could be ahead her. She just ran down the hall to the cell with Raditz yelling something she didn't bother to listen to, all that mattered was getting to her father to see if he was okay and not half dead.
She got to the cell and ripped the door of the bars and ran in and stopped dead in her tracks when she saw him. He was on the bed in the corner that was shadowed in darkness, sitting up and allowing the wall to keep him sitting up right. His armor was hanging from his body, there was hardly anything left to the upper half of his spandex suit. His hair was a tangled mess full of dirt as was almost every bit of skin exposed that didn't have a cut or blood on it. There was absolutely no place on his body that didn't have some kind of injury, weather it be a bleeding gash, bruise or scrap. Blood was trickling from the corner from his mouth and his tail looked like every bone in it was broken, his neck had a dark and ugly bruise on it, the shape of it clearly showed that someone had been choking him.
All the five years she had known her father she had always saw him as a strong and determined person, a person that no one could ever beat. She was able to read his emotions like a book unlike anyone else that was outside her family, she always felt that her father was unbeatable with the exception of Kakarrot, in her opinion either way she always cheered him on during their sparring matches in the Gravity Room and when they trained in the woods at Kakarrot's house. When transformed he looked unbeatable; an impressive and strong fighter that she admired for his strength, determinations, loyalty to those he cared for such as his family and comrades in battle. To see him like this, battered and defeated was something that she just could not comprehend. Not caring that Raditz was currently running to get to her and would hear her; she screamed her fathers name and practically plowed into his un conscious form, she didn't even notice she had started crying until she found herself sobbing hysterically and holding her father so tightly that it just might have cut off his breathing.
"DAD! DAD WAKE UP PLEASE DON'T BE DEAD! YOU CAN'T BE DEAD WE NEED YOU PLEASE WAKE UP!" That was what Raditz heard Bra screamed as he finally got to the cell, and found the girl crying and hugging his partner for the past five years in a near death lock. Not only was the sight of seeing Vegeta such a state a shock, but that he was unnerved about the hysterical female clinging to the prince had called Vegeta "Dad" for some reason. Did she see Vegeta as a father figure? In this hell hole it was normal but slightly rare that others would see other fighters teamed with them as family, after all he and Vegeta had sort of like a brother relationship, Tori saw him and Vegeta as his own sons. Deciding to step in to keep the girl from choking the prince with the grip she had on him he walked over to her.
"Hey Bra, its okay…come on now he isn't dead…" the moment he spoke Bra looked up from her sobbing to turn to Raditz with tear filled puffy eyes, before breaking down again and grabbing him continuing to cry. Raditz was at a lost of how to approach this; he was a fighter for crying out loud! He had never had any contact with females since Planet Vegeta was destroyed; he wasn't good with this emotional crap! From his spot trying to calm the girl down he saw Vegeta stir from his place on the bed, "Look he's not dead, see he's moving" Raditz said pointing to Vegeta. At that point Bra practically threw him to the floor to run over to Vegeta.
"DAD! DAD PLEASE OPEN YOUR EYES! SAY SOMETHING! AN INSULT AND CURSE! ANYTHING!" Vegeta stirred again and this time opened his eyes, they were fogged and unfocused to anything around him, as if he was half asleep.
"Y…Yasai?" was all he mumbled before falling un conscious again. Bra was brought out from her hysteretic mood from the name he had just called her.
Yasai? Who's Yasai?
"Hey Bra? Come on we should get out of here…before someone comes…we have to find Nappa and Pan because my scouter won't work…" Raditz said; almost as soon as he got done speaking a loud bang was heard, when Bra and Raditz ran out of the cell to see what was going on the wall down the hall broke apart violently. From the hole in the wall came a red skinned mutant with light pink hair and broken armor, Pan and Nappa shot out after it and began attacking.
"I don't think we need to go looking for them…" Bra said starring at the brawl before her; Pan was doing more of the work then Nappa for obvious reasons, Pan was much faster then the muscular Nappa.
"Bra! Quick grab Vegeta, I'll help the others with this guy and then we can get out of here!" Raditz said in a dead serious tone of voice; Bra didn't bother to nod or anything, she ran right in and grabbed her father carrying him out of the cell, when she did she saw Raditz joining in the fight.
I can't just sit here watching them to fight…I have to do something gently she placed Vegeta on the floor and then turned her sights to the soon to be beaten mutant, she shot from her place to the floor into the air and rammed her foot right into the back of the mutants head. Raditz, Nappa and Pan looked to find Bra as the one to get the shot in. Raditz seening this as a moment for them to make a break for it ran and snatched up Vegeta.
"COME ON LETS GO!" With that they were running down the hall…with there mutant friend behind them, tired of this fight Nappa powered up and shot a fatal blast at the mutant, vaporizing him to ashes.
ATTENTION, ATTENTION! ALL ELITE PERSONEL TO THE HOLDING COMPOUND! The intercom nearly screamed.
"Damn it! Freiza must have gotten a silent alarm or something put in down here!" Raditz yelled; when they had found Vegeta he felt that they would get out of here without much trouble. Now they had the now dead mutant attacking Pan and Nappa and breaking down a wall, and now they had tripped an alarm or something.
"So much for getting out of here un injured!" Pan said making her thoughts clear on the situation at hand.
"Ugh…where the hell am I?" a half conscious Vegeta asked, he was currently being carried by Raditz over his right shoulder.
"Hey Vegeta, sorry but now is a really bad time to talk" Raditz said in so much of a rush Vegeta probably hadn't understood a word he said. With their ears ringing from the intercom repeating the announcement, they continued to run to the exit and hopefully get out of here without running into anyone. A pair of green and pink blurs from the corner of her eye made her stop dead in her tracks and dragged Raditz away into a near by closet. Pan saw Bra do this and mimicked her by grabbing Nappa and dragged him into the now cramped closet. "Bra! What the hell did you do that for? Are you out of your damn memrp" Before Raditz could finish his ranting Bra clamped her hand onto his mouth to shut him up. Finding it better to face disastrous results upon not keeping quite, both Nappa and Pan didn't make a sound.
"My head…" Vegeta grunted at the worst possible time as Zarbon and Dadoria made their appearance as they walked down the hall.
"Shhhh! Vegeta shut up!" Raditz snapped harshly and loudly, Bra elbowed him in the ribs.
"If either of you don't be quite all of us will be dead!" Bra said harshly.
"Tell that to blabber mouth here!"
"I said be…" as Bra was about to finish the closet door opened, in the silhouette of the dim light Zarbon and Dadoria stood. Bra's mind went blank,
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Sorry if the chapter is a little shorter then the past ones, but hey I write pretty long chapters so none of you can really complain. I have some interesting plans for chapter twelve and putting some of it into this chapter I feel would make it TOO long. Don't worry your patience with this story has paid off so far, the real treat is coming soon enough just you all wait!
