MOTHER OF HELL 30 REVIEWS O.O! REWARDS AND COOKIES GALORE!

It seems I cant sleep for more than a few hours and its really ticking me off

as for my reviews nice to know i'm fucking hilarious thank you thank you *bows* oh my shoes are untied eh fuck it

also you like my authors notes do ya well lol i'm just a glorified smart ass

and as for plot yes I have almost nine chappys and have only slightly caressed the plot XD!

anyway have to be at work soon but I might as well start this chappy not much for me to say today.

9 chapters and I still haven't gotten into the main plot quite yet... ah yes this will indeed be a long one XD but soon my children very soon.

One last thing bc someone brought it up... honestly I don't know if i'm going to make Maka preggers or not yet (what do you all think?) but either way she will still wind up with something that will make her life insanely more difficult because i just feel like it

and to the one who wanted a Tsubaki/Black Star lemon oh my sweet don't worry you will have your wish :) in due time my children in due time ...the others will be more active in the story soon.

Dear god ill shut up now


Chapter nine: Heart

Soul tried to pull himself up off the ground. The mark on his neck felt like it was on fire. It was oozing a black liquid that he only assumed was black blood. He grabbed the mark and held it. Maka redialed her teachers number.

What is it now Maka

"the mark is bleeding and black blood is coming out of Souls nose and mouth"

what?!

"please professor I need someone over here"

alright i'm coming to take a look at soul...again

"oh that you so much I know its late but..."

*click*

she looked at the phone then hung it up. Professor stein was on his way that's all she needed to know. She rushed back to the bathroom to find Soul leaning against the toilet still trying to hold his nose.

"dude this shit tastes fucking nasty" Soul tried to lighten tho mood but its a little hard when you feel like you put on those drunk goggles they make you try on at school then someone decided they would punch you in the face and put out a cigarette on your neck. He layed his head down on the toilet trying to keep his eyes off the black puddle on the floor.

"Stein is coming back... oh Soul i'm so sorry" she wrapped her arms around his head and could feel the tears coming on. This was the second time she had put him in a situation where he got hurt. He sank into her arms as it was getting harder and harder to stay awake. He was trying his damned hardest to look and act ok but in all reality he knew this would in no way be a simple fix. He could feel it... the black blood trying to take over his entire body. Even little ogre was drowning. Something had RECENTLY planted more black blood in him then his body could handle and he felt like he was being swallowed up. It didn't help the fact that Maka was already under enough stress and he felt like keeping anyone from adding more was his job and he now felt like he failed miserably. He slowly pulled his hand back up to the bark on his neck. It felt hot and sticky almost like the skin itself was melting off. He was beginning to notice the burning less and less as he slipped from consciousness How not cool.

"hey Maka" she nodded her head and pulled him in closer.

"yeah"

"when I wake up you have to buy me some brownies k?" She laughed at his one last attempt to put her at ease as he slipped into blackness. She at that point lost it. Completely and totally lost it. She let out the tears she was holding and began to cry. How could a silly child's game turn into this. Something so stupid and innocent was a damn way to call a witches soul. She buried her face deep into Souls soft white hair.

"maka where are you?" She could hear her teaches voice followed by a few others footsteps.

"im in here" her half screamed half moaned, the door opened as Stein and kid pushed themselves into the small confined space. Stein pricked the boys finger with a needle. Black a dot of PURE black blood was seen. Maka who knew even if Soul had black blood in him his blood was still very much red.

"we need to take him to a place I can get a better look at the situation Kid help me" Maka let go of Souls limp body as her teacher pulled him up right. Kid grabbed onto his legs and they carried him out of the bathroom and on to the couch. Kid backed up and let Stein have room to work. Stein shoved a small blue pill down Souls throat forcing him to swallow it. After a few seconds soul began to cough violently as black blood began to trickle out of his mouth.

"shit hes rejecting the medicine I made for Crona to get the black blood out of her system" Soul started to shake slightly. "lt me put it simple the black blood in Souls body is completely taking over, Souls body is trying its best to fight back unfortunately its fighting back in the wrong way by shutting down all his major body functions. Maka then noticed a familiar soul who also entered her apartment besides kid and her teacher. He looked over to find her father leaning against the wall trying to act cool.

"dont worry Maka pappas here everything will be ok."


you have indeed ben jipped on this chappy but I have to get ready for work *night shift bloooowwwwssss* buttt I have a day off coming up and I will make that chappy my longest one yet and since you got the short end of the stick on this chapter I will only ask for my review count to hit... only a lowly 35 not that hard huh :P but of course feel free to make more than that sooner or later when I feel like i'm getting steady reviews the review counter will go away and ill just trust ya guys the moment i get off i will start the next chap :D