Hello! I had some extra time on my hands today, so I figured I would post another chapter. Anyhow, I am working on writing chapter 16 right now!

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Okay! Now that that's out of the way, I have other news. Starting soon-ish, I am going to post the fan-fiction I've been telling you all about! It is only eleven chapters and unfinished. Based on reviews, I may or may not finish it.

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Third Person POV

Breezepelt blew the top of the gun as Icecloud crumpled to the floor. "Well, there's that."

Cinderheart looked at Breezepelt. "Thank you," she wheezed. Then, without warning, she slumped over.

Honeyfern screamed and ran to Cinderheart's side. "Jayfeather, do something!" she cried. She grabbed Cinderheart's hand and held it to her chest.

Jayfeather followed Honeyfern's voice and kneeled by Cinderheart. He felt for Cinderheart's heart. "It's still beating," he answered. "If we can get her back to the medicine room, I might be able to save her."

Hollyleaf gave her blind brother a hug. "You're the best, Jayfeather."

Breezepelt coughed. "I'm sorry, did I not just kill the person who almost killed Cinderheart?"

Foxleap hissed. Who was this mouse brain, acting like the savior of the day? "You also killed my sister."

Breezepelt put a hand through his hair. "Big deal."

Lionblaze leaned over near Cinderheart. "I'll stay with you, I promise. I'll wait as long as I have to." He let a single tear drop onto her nose. Hollyleaf went to comfort her other brother. She knew that Lionblaze had only cried once in his life. He was in paw school and Berrynose pushed him off the cliff and into the lake. He belly flopped and only cried for three seconds, give or take, afterward. He must love Cinderheart a lot, she thought.

Jayfeather scooped up Cinderheart and handed her to Lionblaze. The group filed out after Jayfeather and Lionblaze, with Foxleap in the back carrying Icecloud. Her motionless body lay limp in his arms.

Lionblaze looked at Cinderheart. "Please," he whispered. "Please."


Cinderheart POV

I blinked twice. Where was I? I looked down, and the floor was totally black. All around me was dark.

Then, the sound of a light clicking on. Right beside me, with a light shining on her was Icecloud. She looked around and saw me. "You!" she growled. She lunged at me, but passed through me and landed behind me. I gasped. Was I… a ghost? I didn't feel ghosty.

"You're not a ghost." I turned around and saw Cinderpelt, a star who had been at this school for a while. She was injured in an car accident when she was young and took the medicine course to boost her grades. She died a year ago when she was attacked by a wild animal during the summer. I didn't really talk to her, although we looked a lot alike. She helped me with my homework once in tenth grade, and that was about it. "You're just… here."

"Are we dead?" Icecloud asked.

"Not exactly." Cinderpelt came closer to us. "You are… in a space between life and death. And I'm here to come take you."

"Where?" Icecloud asked.

"To death," Cinderpelt answered. Icecloud and I shared a look; we may have hated each other, but we were going through the same stuff.

Icecloud turned back to Cinderpelt. "Do we have a choice? Because I would rather live."

Cinderpelt shifted uncomfortably. "Not exactly."

Icecloud scowled. "So I just have to die?"

"Well you were shot, so…."

Icecloud crossed her arms. "Whatever."

"Look, I know you're confused. I was too when I died. But you'll be okay. Trust me." Cinderheart held out her hand. "Come with me."

I grabbed her hand. "Okay."


Jayfeather POV

I opened the door to the medicine room. The cold air chilled me to the bone. "Take her and put her down on the couch," I commanded the others. Lionblaze put Cinderheart down while I searched for the charge pads. "How's her pulse?" I asked.

Honeyfern answered. "There isn't one."

I sighed and kept moving. "If the charge can go to three hundred…." I went to the computer and got onto the voice question app. "How much charge can the charge pads handle?"

The computer beeped and a robotic voice spouted the answer. "350 charge."

I smiled. "Good."

Hollyleaf put a hand on my shoulder. "What does that mean Jay?"

I turned my head towards her voice. "It means I can save her." Before anybody could say a thing, I stood up. "It will take a while to let them charge, but I can still save her as long as we can do CPR."

"I learned it," Poppyfrost said. "How long is a while?"

"I did the calculations in my head. "About two weeks. Probably around the time of the dance."

Everyone sighed in relief. I could do it.


Aw! That was kind of sad! Do you guys think Breezepelt was in the right for killing Icecloud? Also... would you guys mind if BreezepeltxHazeltail showed up somewhere in this story? Let me know! Until next time, bye-bye, Beautifuls!

~babypop