AND NOW FOR...REVIEWS!
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"I want to talk about Sunpaw."
"Oh." said Rainpaw, already bored. She sighed, turned tail, and ran all the way back to camp. Before she got through the entrance however, she saw a pair of eyes. The left one was blue, and the right one was amber.
The cat must have noticed that she's been discovered, so she boldly stepped out into the open. Her long, fluffy silver fur turned golden under the sunlight and her gray ears pricked. She seemed alert all the time, so she must be a rogue. thought Rainpaw.
She didn't seem like a threat because her eyes weren't hostile, but curious. Her gray paws stepped forward and she finally spoke. "Who are you?"
"I-I'm Rainpaw," she stuttered, shocked that this strange cat had spoken. "Rainpaw..what a strange name. I'm Sky. Where do you come from?" the cat, Sky, asked. "I come from the Clans," Rainpaw replied, regaining her composure.
Sky gasped. "My mother comes from the Clans. But she was brutally killed along with my father and littermates..." the silver cat said, a moment of grief shining in her two differently-colored eyes.
"Anyways, I've come looking for the Clans. I came from the lake," she said, shaking off her sadness and pointing her white tail tip in the direction of the north. "Would you like to speak to our leader, Flamestar?" "Yes please!" Sky cried, hope shining in her eyes.
Rainpaw quickly bounded away, and a moment later, Sky appeared at her side. The two cats sprinted side-by-side. Rainpaw noticed that muscles rippled under her new friend's pelt. Her glossy fur shone and seemed to be a layer of water, rippling over muscles and flesh.
Finally, when they reached the leader's den, Rainpaw slowed down to a stop. Sky followed Rainpaw's lead, and slowly padded after the apprentice. "Flamestar?" Rainpaw called quietly, but firmly. "Come in" came the answer.
Rainpaw nodded at Sky and slunk into the moss-covered den. It was cool and shady beneath the leaf-made roof. Dapples danced across the floor whenever the a breeze flew by, and slightly rustled the leaf canopy.
At the end of a den, a fiery-colored cat was sitting on a moss nest, grooming himself- Flamestar.
Rainpaw took a deep breath and greeted her leader. While he continued grooming, Rainpaw explained what happened with as much detail as she could muster. When she was finished, Flamestar had been done cleaning his pelt. Finally he turned around.
FLAMESTAR'S P.O.V.
Flamestar turned around when the apprentice, Rainpaw, finished her tale. When he laid his eyes on the cat, he froze. Her fluffy silver fur glistened in the light and her gray paw and ears were shaped perfectly. Her underbelly and tail tip were white and free from dirt. Her blue and amber eyes shone with courage and excitement. She was beautiful.
Flamestar couldn't help but stare at the pretty, young she-cat. She looked around Rainpaw's age and also had the same body build. Her body looked delicate, but if you looked closely, her muscles betrayed her delicate, innocent look.
He cleared his throat and nodded, saying that he allowed for her to stay. Flamestar padded out of his den and pounced leaped onto the Highrock. "Let all cats old enough to catch their own prey gather beneath the highrock," called Flamestar, the words rolling easily off of his tongue.
Cats swarmed out of their dens and found a seat for themselves. Out of the corner of his eye, he was Rainpaw nudge Sky onto the Highrock beside Flamestar. The she-cat slunk to the side and sat down. He informed everyone about Sky and told the Clan that she was to train and become and ThunderClan cat.
He spoke the ancient words and named Sky, Emberpaw. She looked proud, but embarrassed when everyone seemed to chant her name warmly.
He announced that he would be her mentor and dismissed the Clan. After every cat departed after congratulating his apprentice, she padded over to him. She seemed to be looking quite cheerful about something and she kept looking over her shoulder.
He followed her gaze until his eyes rested on one cat. Monsterclaw.
"Who's that?" Emberpaw asked, pointing her tail at Monsterclaw. "Someone," Flamestar replies, trying to act casual. But on the inside, he was boiling with rage and jealousy. Emberpaw looked confused but shrugged it off. Flamestar said that they would be going on the tour.
Before they left the camp, Flamestar looked back once more. Monsterclaw was talking to his own apprentice, Rainpaw.
That's right. Moon over Rainpaw. Because Emberpaw will be mine, not yours.
